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Shaman

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Philosophy of the Elements
« on: June 01, 2008, 04:46:40 am »
Everything around you originated from the Great Crystal, otherwise known as the Azure Sun. These are manifestations of the spirits of the elements, which occupy the crystal with their being. Without these elements, magic, landscapes, and some forms of life, would not exist. Though the spirits rarely manifest aside from everyday entities, they interact with our world every day, though most of the time unwillingly.

With the use of glyphs, the spirits can do nothing but endure the torture of the citizens of Yliakum constantly using them to borrow their power. Also, with the elements constantly in pain, hatred may arise in their being, thus causing some of them to become corrupt. This corruption is the cause of Dark Way magic, where dark elements inflict pain and suffering. These spirits feel no pain from those who use glyph magic to call upon their power, which is the main reason why so many subject to the suffering.

To counterbalance the growing problem of these dark spirits, some of the remaining elemental spirits detached from themselves what was left of their purity, thus opening up the possibility of Crystal Way magic, and creating pure spirits from their being. Glyphs used to call upon the Crystal Way do not harm these pure spirits, since it is their will that this magic be used to heal. As for the rest of the elements, being depraved of their purity and their darkness, they are left to focus on their own goals, having no real goals focusing on good or evil.

To try and cull the struggles of nature and the elements, since it was not only the dark and pure spirits in conflict, the Goddess Xiosia arose, and with her power greatly subdued the spirits, making their struggle nothing more than uncommon acts of hatred from one to the other. They can very little interact with the world of Yliakum with Xiosia's presence, thus their powers are mainly only seen when glyph magic is used. Rivers and the such, natural manifestations of the elements, remain where they were, unharmed by the elemental wars and forceful use of their power.

When the Gods melded intellectual beings, it was the elements' combined power inside of the crystal which created the life, such as it heals the life when used with Crystal Way magic. Unaware of the spirits, Talad tried to use the crystal's power, which enraged the furious flame spirits and caused a backlash which disfigured Laanx. Some of the power was infused with the pure spirits, thus when it touched ground, the Kran were created, though they did not have enough of a concentration of the crystal's magic to form detailed physical or mental traits.

When the crystal eclipses, it is the two fronts trying to directly attack each other, causing their powers to shift sides for a short while. Eventually they will return to their respective crystals, but they make great changes in our world when swapping places.

We may all do our part to help end the wars of these spirits. No matter which side you take, remember that there are greater forces that may aid you.
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Re: Philosophy of the Crystal's Elements
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2008, 07:58:21 am »
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Welcome to the boards, a very nice post for a first message. That's quite an interesting read.. However, I do have some comments on a few points, as shown below.

All of the elements around you - flames, rivers, winds, and rocks - originated from the Crystal, otherwise known as the Azure Sun.

No, they did not. The materials, the planet always existed as far as we know. The Crystal is just an energy source used by the gods to create and mold the cave, as well as to create some of the sentient beings.

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Glyphs should not exist. With the use of glyphs, the spirits can do nothing but endure the torture of the citizens of Yliakum constantly using them to steal away their power.

You're stretching it a little bit there, going against the settings. As an "in character" story, the author can of course say anything and also be dead wrong, but I don't think that's your goal here. Try to stick around the main storyline a bit more, there's no mention that the Glyphs "steal" energy. And even if they do, they have different sources: the earth, the crystal, the dark crystal... you get the idea.

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Re: Philosophy of the Elements
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2008, 04:16:23 pm »
[I'm aware. The mysteries of the world haven't all been unraveled as far as I know - we have Xacha scientists doing their part to study the Crystal, so that's why this is just a philosophy. Call it a philosophy of a mad-man.

I guess I should clarify a bit further after more thought. To your first statement, yes, they have been around forever as far as we know, but so has the crystal, and thus these spirits, according to my character's beliefs, have always existed. The rivers, rocks, winds, etc. are permanent manifestations of these spirits. Also, I'm not trying to write into settings or anything, but as I said before, these are merely my character's beliefs, and perhaps a new point of view to show the world of Yliakum.

To the second comment, I remember reading that the Crystal Way was "more directly tied to the crystal than any other way" or something like that. I take that as, the other magics also come from the crystal (except for the Dark Way), but not as directly. So for my character, that means that the Crystal Way comes from the unified pure spirits of the elements, and the rest come from the elements directly, such as Red Way from the Flame Spirit. If the Gods could tune themselves with the elements, such as how my character believes Laanx did when she created the Lemur, and how Talad thought he could create life without respecting these elemental spirits, my character believes that Talad's creation of the glyphs is the cause of the Dark Way, since they are unnatural and anyone in Yliakum can use them to their liking. It's wasteful use of the elements' energy, he considers.]
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Re: Philosophy of the Crystal's Elements
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2008, 10:24:26 pm »
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I still disagree on the first part as I read something else in the History of Yliakum :)

On the second, you do make an interesting point, thanks for the clarification.

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Re: Philosophy of the Elements
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2008, 10:27:10 pm »
[Things are subject to change. If I can get some more criticism from settings and a better understanding of the history, I'll change it accordingly. :)

Also looking for grammatical and spelling corrections. Capitalization, as well, since I'm not sure if things such as "Azure Sun" should be capitalized or not.

Sorry for making so many edits...on a lot of my posts, check back frequently. After reading the history, I notice that it mentions how Laanx and Talad diverted the rivers, shaped the rocks, and etc., but were those things not already there? They simply tampered with them, and changed their natural flows and positions.]
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