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Re: Chain of Souls: Soul's Mirror... the story goes on.
« Reply #30 on: July 10, 2009, 09:36:40 am »
I read the story again. Still hoping on a continuation.

Best of luck

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Re: Chain of Souls: Soul's Mirror... the story goes on.
« Reply #31 on: July 16, 2009, 09:49:40 pm »
* Under the moon wanders in and closes the door behind himself to the forlorn sound of long unused hinges. He walks slowly across the room, leaving lonely footprints in the heavy dust lingering on the hardwood floor. Only one tiny ray of light casts itself through a boarded window, fighting to be seen despite the gloom pressing in from the dark corners of the room. Its piercing glow falls triumphantly on a simple desk towards the back of the room, which holds but a single item. The light strikes this item, gifting it with a blossom of luminosity... some would say a near halo. He slowly reaches the desk and extends his hand to the object... a simple feather quill...

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Chain of Souls Souls Mirror the story goes on
« Reply #32 on: October 23, 2009, 05:14:09 pm »
No special thing for the bad guy. They just need to be really powerful and really...well...evildoi

Adrianne suddenly turned back towards the mirror. She thought she had seen some kind of image, like before, out of the corner of her eye. She jerked her head downwards, pretending nothing was there.

 Its all in my head... she kept mumbling to herself.  Theres nothing there but my reflection. 

Unfortunately, her curiousity got the best of her and her wandering red eyes darted back to the mirror. She indeed had seen another image in the mirror.

This one was of a strange meeting, between a group of what appeared to be soldiers. They were all scrunched into a secret hiding place of some kind in a forest type of area.

She held her sketchbook up against the wall the mirror was on, and began to sketch out the image, her pencil making weird scratching sounds as it quickly moved across the paper.  This is too weird...

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Re: Chain of Souls: Soul's Mirror... the story goes on.
« Reply #33 on: January 09, 2010, 01:06:20 am »
Yay 2010!

Great story Underthemoon. It's not common that I catch myself reading something all the way through.  ;D Tres bien, and keep at it, I say!  \\o//

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Re: Chain of Souls: Soul's Mirror... the story goes on.
« Reply #34 on: January 10, 2010, 07:00:08 am »
Thanks Oronec. That means a lot to me. I have been planning on continuing this story, and have even drafted the rest of this chapter. However, I have a new little baby to look after right now, so writing is really not center stage. I can't make any promises when you will get the next update, but hang in there. It will come someday. :D

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Re: Chain of Souls: Soul's Mirror... the story goes on.
« Reply #35 on: June 26, 2010, 10:37:37 am »
Immersive, well-written. You are a writer, and far more talented one than the meat of them already publishing today. So why the hell aren't you writing novels fool?