[Guild]Guardian Merchants

[Akkaido Kivikar]

I like the art.

Did he use Blender, Maya, or 3DSM?

The skin on the menki is awesome. He looks like a real rough bandit type.

Reading your Guilds description, and so on, I can only think of one criticism, and that is that you should give it a more creative name. "Guardian Merchants" just doesn't seem to fit. But that's just my personal opinion, I have my guild and you have yours.

[Garile]

Lets see an IC story that fits the name and also the goals. Think I would go something like this.

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The start of the Guardian Merchants is a humble one.
 
The roads of Yliakum are not a safe place. Especially for merchants who usually carry the biggest loot for a gang of rogues. Many of the rich trading guilds had gotten protection making sure their caravans had mercenaries or sometimes even their own guards to defend against rogues and outlaws. This however left many small and independent merchants who still needed protection but couldn't afford it.
 
The solution was pretty obvious and soon several of the small merchants banded together and formed a loose group to defend the caravans they formed together. And thus the Guardian Merchants started. With mercenaries at first but after a while enough small merchants had joined for permanent guards for the major caravan routes.
 
A leader was chosen to organize it all but unlike many other guilds there was no strict hierarchy.
 
Today the Guardian Merchants count many among their members. Mostly merchants, crafters, miners and ofcourse the guards who protect them.

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edited out some typo's. Hope this helps a bit

[Arashi20]

  Hmmm good question akaiddo im not sure, thanks for the comments thought! ^_^
AND Garile i really like that haha..i hope you dont mind if i save it, its a little short but of course its the best anyones come up with and we dont expect the readers to make one for us but i hope you dont mind if i add to it?
asked for the name...everyone in our guild actualy took a vote, we all got to think of a name and then everyone voted (Not easy on a guild or group chat lol) 

[Ausuna]

I see you've got some customised artwork, so I guess you got people a little attached to this game.

I've met several of your members and they're not super-strong players. It's nice to grown up this way, to help each other and not to only receive one-way help.

As for the IC or OOC thing, don't get discouraged and scared away. You can develop IC along the way you develop your character, babe steps.
It's nice to have a group of players hang around together. It is a good start.

I don't know what has happened to your guild. Leader will be away? It would be bad for a guild.
I guess you people are not OOCly evil, or Ausuna will know.

Unless a guild is proven OOCly evil, it deserves no public harassment as a whole.
No matter whichever powerful people did it and for whatever PR reason, Ausuna feels deeply sad about it.
You kills a character, she climbs up from the dark and rest a little.
You kills her surviving environment, may Talad bless her.
[Edit: just noticed the warriors thing, not related]

Anyway, hopes you well, and don't become evil in an OOC way. Or Ausuna can kill, bet you already know it.  

[Garile]

AND Garile i really like that haha..i hope you dont mind if i save it, its a little short but of course its the best anyones come up with and we dont expect the readers to make one for us but i hope you dont mind if i add to it?

Just something I wrote up in a few minutes so go ahead. Better to make it a little more personal.

[yanom]

thinking of joining. i can pick a proffession (mage, crafter, etc.) right away?