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Lazareth

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Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« on: February 03, 2010, 04:58:58 am »
Hello all, I hate the first post of mine to be about a complaint, but I thought I would point out something in the Third Epoch story line.  For some reason Laanx is now a male God in this storyline at the start of the third paragraph.  I was really getting into this story and pouring over the words when I came across this section and had to remove my glasses, rub my eyes, and make sure I didn't get lost on the way down the Labryinth with these two wonderful character Gods.

Can someone look into this and see if I'm misreading this?  Does the writer mean for all the remaining paragraphs to be about Thalad or Laanx.  Which is it truly, that is leading the Lemurs? Did some of the Lemurs leave Laanx's presence to spend their time with Thalad?  I can't see the Lemurs, such attracted to beauty to want to follow Thalad anywhere.

Again, I'm sorry for having pointed this out, I just so very much want to finish this story and for now am going to hold off before moving forward.

Thank you.
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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2010, 05:05:33 am »
No, for the most part you are reading that correctly, except it's not male.  Laanx becomes a sexless god by the end of the fourth paragraph in the Second Epoch.  That's what "...and she became forever disfigured" means.

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2010, 05:08:00 am »
And hence the references of 'him' as generic title.   Ah, thanks.   whew!  that flew right over me.

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 11:26:51 am »
Well you could say it :P

Also I think it should state that she has changed from being a female to no sex, better than disfigured.
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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2010, 04:12:58 am »
necromancing is illegal, you know!

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2010, 06:34:30 am »
By the way: "Talad" has no "h".

Furthermore, this thread might even be an addition to the thread "Inconsistency hunt". ;)

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2010, 06:56:14 am »
It's been brought up many times, always an obscure detail.

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2010, 06:59:47 am »
Dakkru is sooo much hotter than Laanx.

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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #8 on: March 29, 2010, 07:42:07 am »
thats becuase dakkru knows what she is ;D
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Re: Planeshift - History: Third Epoch story error
« Reply #9 on: March 29, 2010, 06:54:29 pm »
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