I liked parts of the piece and also noted similarities to the one by Lady Crankenstein, although not really knowing musical terms and such myself could not have explained why very clearly.
When I listen, the music seems to go beyond the capabilities of my headphones because there seems to be a lot of reverberation? ...like a broken speaker makes. I don't know if it was intended that way or if it's in the file or just how my computer plays it back, but those parts don't sound good to me.
Overall though, I see you have talent and congratulate you on your acceptance to the dev. team.
