I just concocted a new one

Elegrand was in the tavern, smoking his pipe, when three men aproached him, and asked, \"Sire, who are you? Why have you come? More imprtantly why?\" Elegrand was surprised at the inquiry as no one has ever asked this of him, he thought for a while and said, \"I\'m not entirely sure you\'d like to know,\" the three men looked slightly disapointed. Elegrand noticed that others were looking at him too, and Elegrand smiled, then said, \"I usually would not do this, but this town, these people make me want to tell what it was exactly, my past that is: I leave no trails when I leave a town, As far as anyone is concerned, I have no past, But I do, and it is not a particularly colorful one, In fact, it\'s completly dark,\" After Elegrand said this everyone seemed to be scared. It took a moment for him to relieze why these people are scared, but when he noticed he said, \"Oh, just because I have a dark past doesen\'t mean I\'m evil, infact I am on the side of light. But, be warned I have little care as to the law, I follow what I think is good. Anyway my journey starts in the south, where all the Diaboli come from. I was to be trained as a battlemage, as I had natural talent in the Red and Azure Ways. I was fully trained and at the young age of 18, I joined the city militia, hoping to help those in need. That is until the great war.\" At this point Elegrand looked deeply pained and a Cleric in the tavern asked, \"Are you alright!?\" Elegrand was shocked at this question as nobody ever cared for Elegrand and he shook his head and continued, \"It all started with a revolt which was strangley organized, we found out why on the fifth day of the war, when I tried to turn a prisoner to our cause using Azure magic. The prisoner resisted which was normal. The next thing that happened, well I\'ll never forget. I felt a sudden urge, to use magic, I could not resist. The next thing I know everyone in the stronghold was yelling \'Traiter!!!\' I looked down and was shocked at what I saw, down below me was a fellow soldier lying braindead, I used my magic just in time and blew a hole into the wall and ran away. I was very hurt when I saw a shadowy figure walking towards me. I tried to get up, but coulden\'t. The figure spoke in low, but loud voice, \"Stay, you are far to hurt to stand,\" I passed out and the next thing I knew I was tied to a chair and looked up where I saw none other than my very own trainer. I used my magic to burn the ropes binding me and looked around, there were peasants around me... but not just any, but the ones who were revolting. Something sparked in my head and I used Azure magic to turn the peasants against each other. I got through the chaos to the trainer where we battled. My trainer defeated me, but as I had befriended him in the past he dropped me off, roughly 5 kilometers from my original position. I travelled town to town trying to find others from the militia, to lift the weight from my heart. I erased my past after every city to prevent others from thinking I was a traiter. And now my travels have brought me here, there is more to my story, but I will not burden you with it.\" Another man approached me and asked, \"What i-\" Elegrand cut him off, \" Of course, how could I forget to tell my name, it\'s Elegrand and remember it,\" And with a smile, he left the tavern.
Hope this ones a little better.