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sashok

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archer chick
« on: June 12, 2004, 09:57:51 pm »
yep , elf archer chick, still wip




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« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2004, 10:09:19 pm »
Her jugs look funny! Also the ends of the bow look way to pimped out tone it down alittle but other than that *claps*

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« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2004, 10:18:29 pm »
I\'m not sure she is best dressed to fight ;) :P

But the drawing looks cool otherwise. :)
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« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2004, 12:44:06 am »
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I\'m not sure she is best dressed to fight ;) :P

But the drawing looks cool otherwise. :)

It\'s a roleplaying game. Females don\'t wear clothes in roleplaying games.

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« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2004, 02:27:54 am »
My piece of constructive criticism:

The way her fingers curl around the arrow is quite odd. The shaft is too thin for her hand to hold it that way. Also, you have the cape flying with the wind - it would follow that everything else would as well, including that strand of hair near her neck, and the earrings. And the positioning of the legs is a little awkward - draw a horizon line before you start with the details, so that they look of a realistic length and position ;)
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« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2004, 03:57:55 am »
yep yep, you are right about all of those because
I thought about the same exact things.

the boobs, the neck is bit long, the wind and everything
relating to it, the arrow looks like its behind the hand,
the big balls on ends of bow

about the way she is standing, that\'s one part that
i have the hardest time on...  it takes me 2 hours just to
draw female body and once it looks at least sorta like female, i don\'t care about position, i\'m just happy I drew female lol