Originally posted by kang_holion
This pic I saved for last, Phinehas:
I felt like trying my best at a character and I even decided to color this one. I like how it turned out, but the original sketch made him more in pain with a sad smile, but I wasn\'t able to catch that when I inked it. Still good I think
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Ok, I\'m very impressed. I really, really like it. So far you\'ve done better than Xythe or Empanado in portraying me as thin, scrawny, weak, and most importantly a Lemur. The others just seem to make me look human. I really, really like it.
There are one or two criticisms, though (of course, it wouldn\'t be me if there weren\'t): I\'m not sure about the clothes, I\'d prefer if the robes were baggy and covered his whole body, which, of course, would make what he\'s wearing underneath unimportant. Also, please, not sandals. I hate sandals irl, and I hate them in fantasy too. Anything but sandals.

The other thing is that it would be good if he looked sadder and more in pain. These criticism are just if you feel like drawing him again or something, you don\'t have to change it all just because you thought I don\'t like it, \'cause I do. A lot.