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Merdarion

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« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2005, 08:12:01 pm »
Wey, its coming even better.

I really like your way of describing combat.
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #16 on: January 10, 2005, 08:17:00 pm »
Ok, and this is for all you people who \"wait for next chapters\": Don\'t :P

Now that I see how much people value work I put into my guild and what it is about (yeah, roleplaying and storywriting), I guess there\'s no actual point in any further wasting of my creativity on you people :P

Thus if I make any further chapters it\'ll be only to see by my kin (and some other people that I see as good roleplayers).

Rest of you go back to listening to Auran\'s speeches or something. You like them more than my stories anyway. ;)

That would be it :P

- Swords
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« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2005, 09:09:51 pm »
Shaddup and keep writing you fool, stop pretending that your  stories are so important to us..its a chance for you to show your worth in when it comes to writing RolePlay and perhaps allow some of us a few minutes in the day to read something we might enjoy. You write for others to read -_- Yes some of us do read and enjoy it unfortunately not many people write..

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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2005, 09:12:06 pm »
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Shaddup and keep writing you fool, stop pretending that your  stories are so important to us..
Well that\'s what I said!
They aren\'t so I won\'t write them.

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« Reply #19 on: January 10, 2005, 09:13:52 pm »
There not important to us but does that mean you stop because your not getting enough response out of it? I wrote 12 chapter history and barely got response out of it during the whole time I was writing it but whether people read it or not atleast I can say I put effort and work into something for others to read and enjoy if they choose.

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« Reply #20 on: January 10, 2005, 09:24:44 pm »
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There not important to us but does that mean you stop
I won\'t stop writing, only change audience.

- Swords
« Last Edit: January 10, 2005, 09:27:22 pm by Draklar »
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« Reply #21 on: January 10, 2005, 09:40:12 pm »
wha? i wanna continue reading it dammit!
I am just a figment of you imagination and a byproduct of the worse accident ever... ... or so my mommy says!
Imagine your life ripped to hundreds of shreds, then think about how you just stepped in poo, welcome to my world.

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« Reply #22 on: January 10, 2005, 10:05:30 pm »
Hmph... just so there won\'t be any further misunderstandings:

I choose not to post here because I have been shown where I can put all my tries to increase roleplaying and storywriting.
I simply won\'t post in the community of people who don\'t care about such things. That seems highly illogical to me.

If people aren\'t able to appreciate such things then I don\'t feel like writing anything for them.


Sure, there are people who actually might care, like Rangers, CV or Merdarion (btw, I love your entry, will be sure to use it), and for them I\'d gladly write further chapters.

But not for all the conspirators, fanatics and other corruptors who can\'t appreciate roleplay if it isn\'t about beating the hell out of each other.

If someone can prove me wrong about this community, I will gladly post further chapters. But for now I don\'t feel like giving my creativity to people who don\'t care.
It is waste of my time and I don\'t have much of it.

- Swords
« Last Edit: January 10, 2005, 10:07:19 pm by Draklar »
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« Reply #23 on: January 10, 2005, 10:08:10 pm »
*falling to his knees*

Please keep telling stories to all. Even if we might not deserve it. Not all of us are Dermorian kind (well I am, an albino though) but all of us see the same wood, all the same sky. And even those who harm the woods are only parts of the grand circle of life. The grand circle of life from birth trough life, from life through death, from death through decay, from decay to rebirth.
Dont steal us the joy of listening through your stories, for stories can change the world (well a citate from the Ovater).

*Standing up again*

Ahrg, you brought me to knee before you, isnt that enough to be said that your stories are important?
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2005, 11:39:19 pm »
I, for one, have been enjoying your tale. Especially your portrayal of Sep.  Simply brilliant.

However, unlike you, I will continue to post my story here, until its or my end.  Why, you ask.  Read Moogies sig and you will find your answer.  

I challenge, yes challenge you to finish your story and post it here.

Rest assured, you already have a place reserved in my book.  Whether you finish or not, but I would much rather have the notation \"Finished\" after it.

So, I leave you, and the rest of the community with this challenge.  COMPLETE YOUR STORIES!  They are our past.

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« Reply #25 on: January 11, 2005, 12:12:02 am »
drak have you been drinking that elf wine again? honastly it gose to your head like short jokes do to a dwarf. calm down and continue the tale dammed it. your elven kin are part of the same community as us. be it not much more we appreciate your work no less then they do. indeed there is alot who cant roleplay for the light of day but it as just as easy to ignore them :)

*takes the wine glass out of draklars hand* continue the story brother of steel :)

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« Reply #26 on: January 11, 2005, 08:35:38 am »
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but it as just as easy to ignore them :)
You are one of them...

btw: I was bluffing.
But I hope that people who will pass by those few posts will think at least a little.
Hot iron into the eyes of those who say they want to improve roleplaying but think about nothing besides themselves.
I don\'t know, at least looking at the guild voting, I think you\'re telling me that I should stop all this because no one cares.
I was a fool to write anything here, but fool I shall remain. Just like Under the moon said, even if most of you are ignorants who by roleplaying mean \"own whole land\", there are still many who actually might appreciate all the work.

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« Reply #27 on: January 11, 2005, 10:54:19 am »
You must continue the story, and keep it public, if no other reason that Seperot said so, and so that I can continue grumbling about how you\'re misusing my persona.

Oh yes, and because I liked it; that\'s a good reason too.

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« Reply #28 on: January 11, 2005, 12:46:16 pm »
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I don\'t know, at least looking at the guild voting, I think you\'re telling me that I should stop all this because no one cares.
You\'re smart Draklar :P
I think your story is nice and that you should go on with it. My favorite part is where Ravna brushes her hair. It\'s very well described ;)

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« Reply #29 on: January 11, 2005, 05:33:26 pm »
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but it as just as easy to ignore them :)
You are one of them...

btw: I was bluffing.


Ofcourse you are, you were in need of alittle attention when you claimed to change audiences. Next time maybe will just let you run off and not try and stop a good thing -_-