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« on: August 21, 2005, 07:06:46 am »
)(Okay, yesh... Last night I told this story in first person to a flippin\' tavernful of people, and I\'ve decided that I\'ll just post that on the forums instead. It\'s been edited - All doublesays were removed and any ooc comments... But it hasn\'t been uberproofread sooo... If it doesn\'t seem like it flows very well, DEAL WITH IT! I\'ll edit it later. Ahem, now, I present to you - again, only now completed- my still untitled story.

(21:40:00) Jjairr snags three mugs and fills them full of various drinks before taking them back to the fire.
(21:40:22) Garek says: its nice at the fire
(21:40:33) Rilar nods to Garek \"yes it is\"
(21:40:34) Netrhys says: Yeah...
(21:41:06) Jjairr hands everyone their mugs. \"Ale for you, Ralas, and here\'s a mug for you, Netrhys, and one for me.\"
(21:41:37) Netrhys takes the mug and takes some gulps off it \"Thankies!\"
(21:41:46) Jjairr nods. \" You\'re welcome.\"
(21:42:03) Ralas says: thanks Jjairr!
(21:48:01) Netrhys drinks some more off her mug
(21:48:17) Ralas takes a large gulp of his ale
(21:48:31) Rilar pulls out araga and feeds her with a piece of apple
(21:48:48) Ralas grins at the mouse
(21:49:09) Netrhys eyes that \"Hmmm... a... mouse?\"
(21:49:33) Rilar frowns at Netrhys \"yes, any problems with that?\"
(21:49:48) Netrhys frowns and swears \"What if?\"
(21:50:29) Rilar frowns back \"then i would leave\"
(21:51:11) Netrhys says: But just so you freaking know, no, I don\'t care. *glares* Was _just_ a freaking question. *swears*
(21:52:02) Elian says: hello
(21:52:05) Elian says: Ralas
(21:52:10) Ralas says: greetings Elian
(21:52:42) Elian says: do you know anyone who would be interested in buying a dark short sword
(21:52:59) Ralas says: hm, not offhand...
(21:53:16) Rilar palms araga and puts her on the floor to train her to come by calling her name
(21:53:25) Elian says: hehehe, my second favorites
(21:53:28) Rilar says: araga... araga..
(21:53:55) Netrhys turns her gaze off Rilar eventually
(21:54:12) Jjairr says: So, Ralas.. What prompted you to sell your sabres?
(21:54:27) Ralas says: well...
(21:54:40) Elian drinks my ale in silence
(21:54:42) Ralas says: I did not wish to be armed in case I am under teh control of soe dark mage
(21:54:58) Netrhys frowns
(21:55:07) Jjairr says: And what makes you think you\'re being controlled by a dark mage?
(21:55:14) Rilar tries to catch aragas attention by an old meat
(21:55:21) Ralas says: perhaps just the paranoia of my friends
(21:55:28) Ralas says: but...you never know
(21:55:36) Ralas says: also...
(21:55:45) Ralas says: many would have me believe that thare are dark things going on
(21:55:55) Ralas says: they would have me take a side: i\'ve no wish to do so
(21:56:04) Ralas says: weapons breed violece and I want no part
(21:56:12) Jjairr \'s ears perk up. \"What dark things?\"
(21:56:12) Netrhys says: mrf.
(21:56:31) Ralas shrugs \"I dont really know...I just feel safer this way\"
(21:56:36) Rilar takes araga back on his hand and palms her
(21:57:12) Jjairr frowns. \"If it\'s war, you really don\'t have a choice... War affects everyone.\"
(21:57:30) Ralas says: I think it will be avoided
(21:57:35) Netrhys says: Yeah, but you can flee, thus not take sides.
(21:57:44) Elian murmers, \"like I told him\".
(21:57:48) Ralas says: it seems to center around my involvement
(21:57:56) Ralas says: so as I am unarmed it cannot occur
(21:57:58) Jjairr says: Hmm... How so?
(21:58:46) Ralas says: i\'m not sure
(21:59:08) Ralas says: but who would hurt a simple miner?
(21:59:24) Elian says: anyone who wants to
(21:59:34) Ralas says: and who would want to?
(21:59:35) Netrhys eyes Elian
(21:59:39) Elian goes back to sippin the ale
(21:59:47) Elian says: sorry
(21:59:54) Jjairr picks up her mug from where she left it and takes a drink as well.
(22:00:06) Netrhys says: . . .
(22:00:07) Ralas follows suit on the drink front
(22:00:26) Rilar doesnt notice whats happening
(22:01:45) Jjairr takes another drink of ale and murmurs, \"It\'s too quiet in here.\"
(22:01:57) Rilar looks up at Jjairr \"hm?\"
(22:01:59) Netrhys shrugs
(22:02:12) Ralas is now silent
(22:02:17) Netrhys says: What would you talk about?
(22:03:15) Jjairr sighs. \"It matters not to me.\"
(22:03:37) Rilar looks down again at araga
(22:03:49) Netrhys says: Hmmm...
(22:05:16) Ralas says: yeah...
(22:05:22) Ralas takes a large gulp of his ale
(22:05:38) Rilar looks up \"eh.. why are you so silent?\"
(22:05:44) Netrhys sighs and finishes her mug
(22:06:03) Ralas says: it\'s been a long week
(22:06:21) Netrhys says: Yeah.
(22:06:25) Ralas says: I think were all...kind of worn out. I know I am
(22:06:28) Rilar grins weakly \"you can say that\"
(22:06:52) Netrhys nods \"Seriously.\"
(22:07:07) Jjairr looks around her. \"I haven\'t had a long week. Not really.\"
(22:07:44) Ralas says: well? what have you been up to?
(22:07:45) Rilar sighs and palms araga \"i did\"
(22:07:46) Netrhys says: You should enjoy while you can. Crap will come to you. It always does.
(22:07:56) Jjairr shrugs. \"Crap happens.\"
(22:08:00) Ralas smiles darkly at Netrhys\' comment
(22:08:17) Netrhys shrugs
(22:09:46) Netrhys says: So, what have you done, anyway? *eyes Jjairr*
(22:10:33) Jjairr says: Hmm... I got lost in the sewers, did a bit of roof hopping, got into a ... err... spat... and somehow still managed to not get drunk..
(22:11:10) Netrhys grins \"Yeah, the sewers...\"
(22:11:41) Rilar eyes Netrhys \"the sewers..\"
(22:11:43) Netrhys says: Not the nicest place, but one that is likely to have you in it for longer than you planned.
(22:11:54) Ralas says: I _always_ get lost in there
(22:12:02) Jjairr nods. \"Yes, indeed... I think the rogue population is multiplying down there.\"
(22:12:16) Netrhys says: That, too.
(22:15:56) Jjairr says: So...
(22:17:19) Jjairr says: Well.... Aherm...
(22:17:50) Rilar hums a little tune
(22:17:56) Jjairr takes another gulp of ale to clear her throat and sings, \"In heaven there is no beer, that\'s why we drink it here, and when we\'re gone from here, all our friends will be drinkin\' all our beer!\"
(22:18:21) Netrhys frowns and then chuckles
(22:18:28) Jjairr bows.
(22:18:40) Netrhys says: You\'re a minstrel?
(22:18:43) Netrhys grins
(22:19:00) Jjairr shakes her head. \"No, no, far from it.\"
(22:19:05) Elian says: duty calls
(22:19:12) Ralas says: farewell then Elian
(22:19:24) Jjairr sneezes.
(22:19:25) Netrhys says: hmm
(22:19:34) Ralas shrugs
(22:19:36) Jjairr says: \'Scuse me.
(22:19:50) Netrhys shrugs
(22:20:11) Ralas says: strange guy...
(22:21:42) Jjairr chugs down the rest of her ale and sways woozily. \"I say. I wonder if I could get drunk today.\"
(22:23:04) Jjairr goes to get another beer.
(22:24:49) Ralas is still working on his first ale, of which he takes a large glup
(22:26:05) Jjairr says: So... How\'s life treating you, Netrhys?
(22:27:04) Netrhys says: Erm... huh?
(22:27:16) Jjairr laughs. \"How are you?\"
(22:27:40) Netrhys says: Yeah, I understood that... just wondered...
(22:28:18) Netrhys says: Well, how would it... *shrugs* I\'m still alive, that is something, I guess.
(22:28:19) Jjairr sighs.
(22:28:29) Rilar grins slightly
(22:29:55) Ralas says: er
(22:30:50) Jjairr takes out her favorite dagger and sharpens it busily.
(22:31:05) Rilar strokes araga
(22:31:05) Netrhys watches that
(22:31:51) Jjairr looks around.
(22:31:55) Jjairr says: Anyone have a story to tell?
(22:31:58) Ralas takes a large glup of his ale and stares at the fire
(22:32:11) Rilar purrs at araga
(22:32:14) Ralas says: ...
(22:32:20) Netrhys says: hmmm...
(22:35:54) Jjairr says: Well, I suppose I might have a story to share.
(22:36:04) Rilar smiles
(22:36:17) Ralas sits back and listens
(22:36:21) Netrhys can\'t help a chuckle
(22:36:40) Jjairr blinks and looks around nervously. \"It\'s the first time I\'ve ever told this to anyone... I had always wanted to write it down first, but this is just a good a time as any...\"
(22:37:55) Netrhys says: . . . write down?
(22:38:09) Jjairr nods. \"So I wouldn\'t forget it.\"
(22:38:46) Netrhys says: Hmmm...
(22:38:53) Jjairr takes a drink of ale and leans back against the wall. \"Are we all ready?\"
(22:39:15) Rilar looks at Jjairr and leans back \"sure\"
(22:39:29) Ralas takes a large gulp of ale and nods
(22:39:53) Netrhys shrugs \"Yeah, I suppose?\"
(22:40:15) Jjairr says: All right... Well, it must\'ve been three or four weeks ago now that this began...
(22:41:18) Jjairr says: I was sitting here, in this very spot, talking to Ralas as we do on many occasions. We were discussing our thoughts on the Laanx temple and the Laanx dungeon and other such things, when I heard a voice in my ear.
(22:42:44) Jjairr gives an involuntary shudder. \"It was unexpected, and I assure you, I was frightened. The voice told me that the head in the Death Realm that Ralas and I had been discussing was actually a prison, containing the tortured souls of those unworthy of returning to the world of the living.\"
(22:43:11) Alifax says: hi
(22:43:32) Ralas says: ...greetings
(22:43:33) Zlorfik says: hi
(22:43:41) Talamir says: \"hi\" nice break in dramatic effect there.
(22:43:42) Netrhys says: hmm... *frowns*
(22:44:08) Jjairr says: During a lull in the conversation I quietly whispered back - to the darkness, of course, where else would one whisper to an unknown voice?- I asked him, for the voice sounded male, why I couldn\'t see him.
(22:44:43) Jjairr says: To which he replied \"I am here, and yet, not here.\"
(22:45:24) Rilar frowns
(22:45:50) Jjairr says: We spoke no more, until Ralas had departed and left me to my own devices. Whereas then I had worked up enough courage to ask the voice, \"Who are you?\"
(22:46:03) Netrhys says: . . .
(22:46:16) Rilar raises an eyebrow
(22:46:20) Netrhys frowns
(22:46:24) Jjairr says: He told me his name was Darkmoon, and to ask the Explorers, as they would know of him...
(22:46:36) Jjairr eyes them over her ale mug. \"Is there something wrong?\"
(22:47:03) Rilar frowns \"darkmoon.. never heard of that name\"
(22:47:23) Netrhys says: I have, in fact.
(22:47:40) Jjairr nods. \"He said he was hard to miss.\"
(22:47:50) Ralas says: ...I have not
(22:48:47) Jjairr says: Anyway, after that there was silence once more, and I knew he had departed. I slept in a room in the tavern, then, and the next morning awoke and spent the day poking around Jayose\'s library. I heard no more of this \"Darkmoon\" until I returned to the tavern late that evening...
(22:50:06) Jjairr says: Unfortunately, a rather rowdy bunch of drunk dwarves had taken up residence here and I for the life of me could not hear myself think. I had to snag a plate of food from the kitchen and eat up on the roof, where it was -thankfully- quiet.
(22:50:58) Netrhys says: hmmm...
(22:51:06) Jjairr says: I had finished when my neck fur began to prickle... And I knew that feeling - I was being watched. Remembering my encounter with Darkmoon the previous evening I questioned, \"Darkmoon?\"
(22:52:06) Jjairr says: His answer came back, sounding close to my ear... \"Yes?\"
(22:52:08) Rilar gets excited
(22:53:00) Jjairr says: I nearly screamed, so frightened was I, but managed not to, and asked him in a strained voice, \"where are you? i still cannot see you.\"
(22:53:34) Netrhys nods \"Sounds reasonable, indeed.\"
(22:54:03) Shooree says: Hello there, friends.
(22:54:21) Netrhys says: . . .
(22:54:27) Rilar narrows his eyes at Talamir
(22:54:31) Netrhys says: And who the crap aould you be?
(22:54:36) Rilar says: be quiet
(22:54:38) Jjairr says: I was looking all over the roof, of course, but could see nothing - not a single shimmer or disturbance in the air. Finally, he said, \"I am right beside you\", so I turned and, much to my fright, there he was.
(22:54:58) Netrhys says: What?
(22:55:06) Ralas says: Darkmoon?
(22:55:15) Shooree listens carefully, obviously very interested
(22:56:41) Jjairr nods. \"Aye, Darkmoon. he appeared in the form of a middle-aged Ylian.\"
(22:57:10) Rilar keeps quiet but looks excited at Jjairr
(22:57:12) Netrhys says: . . . You sure he wasn\'t just playing mind tricks with you?
(22:57:41) Jjairr says: I was frightened, of course... Who wouldn\'t be frightened of a mysterious strange who can make himself invisible?
(22:57:53) Shooree says: Darkmoon, eh? Hmmm I think I recall something being said about it in that book my mother hid from me... pray tell more, dear Jjairr
(22:57:58) Netrhys says: Yeah... then again...
(22:58:44) Shooree takes out his papyrus and scribbles some words
(22:59:47) Jjairr says: He smiled, and looked friendly, though I was still wary of him. Curious, I asked him how he had managed to make himself invisible. \"A little spell called the Shroud of Darkness. Handy, isn\'t it?\"
(23:01:19) Jjairr says: I could only nod. A short time had elapsed before I questioned him again. \"Darkmoon.. You have a strange name. Does it mean anything in particular?\"
(23:02:59) Jjairr says: He turned serious at this. \"Its a nickname, really... No one living knows my real name.\" I stared at him, hard, until he added, \"Someone who knows your real name has power over you. Complete power.\"
(23:03:38) Netrhys frowns \"That\'s just dumb...\"
(23:04:16) Jjairr says: At this I gave a nervous laugh. \"I\'m in deep, then. Many, many people know my name.\" He shook his head slowly. \"Jjairr Wolfhound is not your real name. Only one group of people would know your true name, and your parents are most likely not one of them.\"
(23:04:40) Netrhys says: . . .
(23:04:55) Netrhys says: one group of people, huh?
(23:05:08) Shooree scribbles something down hastily \"...hmmm..so it figures...\"
(23:05:23) Jjairr says: Being me, I questioned curiously, \"Who would know, then?\" He looked at me. \"A Master of the Crystal way.\"
(23:06:21) Jjairr says: Seeing his obvious power with glyphs, I asked excitedly, \"Are you a Master of the Crystal Way?\" He laughed at this. \"No. I dabble here and there, but I\'m no Master.\"
(23:06:26) Netrhys swears
(23:06:45) Netrhys says: Crystal way?
(23:07:03) Jjairr nods. \"Aye, that\'s what he said.\"
(23:08:24) Jjairr says: Not to be put out, I continued to question him. \"Where would I find a Crystal Master, then?\"
(23:09:23) Jjairr says: He was silent for a moment before responding, \"In someplace secluded, magical, and hard to get to. Crystal Masters never were noted for their originality.\"
(23:11:16) Jjairr says: He stood as if to leave, and as he had spiked my curiosity, I tried to stop him. \"Wait! There is more I would ask of you!\" He said nothing for a moment, and then gave me a small dagger. \"Take this\" he said. \"We will talk some other time.\"
(23:11:44) Jjairr unsheaths a small blade from her belt. \"This is the very dagger he presented me with.\"
(23:11:58) Shooree takes a closer look
(23:12:01) Ralas gasps
(23:12:31) Ralas says: ...that\'s exactly like...
(23:12:33) Shooree sighs \"...so it happens again...\"
(23:12:40) Jjairr returns it to her belt. \"Like what..?!\"
(23:12:50) Ralas says: like the one that Valorel gave me
(23:12:59) Ralas says: and...then used to kill himself
(23:13:18) Shooree mumbles a curse \"Master Mordon must hear of this!\"
(23:13:37) Jjairr flinches. \"Shooree?\"
(23:13:52) Shooree says: yes, dear child?
(23:14:02) Jjairr says: Shooree..? What\'s going on?
(23:15:10) Ganinos sets a keg on the table of dwarven ale & refills his mug. Drinks it all down in one go then refills his mug again.
(23:15:17) Shooree snaps out of his thoughts \"Oh, sorry for my attitude...It\'s nothing!\"
(23:15:44) Jjairr \'s tail flicks nervously. \"It\'s never nothing... Never, ever just nothing...\"
(23:15:52) Ralas says: ...
(23:16:10) Jjairr says: Aeherm, maybe I should just continue on with the story, then...?
(23:16:35) Verrliit sneaks up behind Gan and pinches his behind...
(23:16:41) Shooree smiles \"yes... do continue, dear kin!\"
(23:16:56) Ralas nods
(23:17:07) Ganinos ohh then downs all his ale & refills his mug again.
(23:17:30) Jjairr says: Well.. Um, yes. After he gave me the dagger, he left, and I returned to my room downstairs to get some rest...
(23:17:44) Verrliit whips out her mug and fills it.
(23:18:22) Jjairr says: The next morning when I awoke, I sat on my bed for near an hour, listing all the remotely magical, remote, and hard to get to places I could think of.
(23:19:08) Talamir says: I\'m guessing the list wasnt all too long
(23:19:10) Jjairr says: Of course, I could narrow down the list quiet easily, as I had been to most of them once or twice before... Finally, I was down to two options - the Ruins and the Laanx Temple Tower.
(23:19:12) Talamir laughs
(23:19:39) Ralas says: ...
(23:20:43) Shooree nods \"and your conclusions were...?\"
(23:21:43) Jjairr says: I spent many minutes wondering how to find out if the ruins were indeed the place. Finally, I realized - Ayshe. She had told me before that she visited the ruins every time the chance revealed itself, so I reasoned that there could be no one better to ask.
(23:22:10) Shooree nods in approval
(23:23:11) Jjairr says: After grabbing a quick bite of breakfast here at the tavern, I ran as fast as I possibly could to the Guild House, hoping with each fibre of my being that Ayshe would be there. To my luck - she was.
(23:24:31) Talamir says: I beleive I have found a conclusion to this mystery!

[ Edited for language. --Karyuu ]
« Last Edit: February 26, 2007, 01:17:23 am by Karyuu »


Lilura: ralas and Jjairr  be all like "oh i was a xiosia worshiper before she existed" "rivnaks are too mainstream I ride a yulbar" "I was a nolthirir before they were green"

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« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2005, 09:29:50 am »
I\'m not that great a writer myself, but I actually I thought it was pretty well written. Great sense of atmosphere and mystery, and flows really well. You describe gestures and movements well and the dialog sounds natural. I\'d love to read more.
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« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2005, 10:36:55 am »
Good start!  You\'ve got me seriously intrigued.  Reminds me that I need to work on, er, start, my own story.  I\'ll probably put it off another four months though, oh well.  Anyway, good job!  And definitely keep writing, I am looking forward to that second chapter.
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« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2005, 12:10:04 am »
Hey, nifty. I feel loved. Woohoo! Ahem, right. Maybe just one more reply and I\'ll throw in the next chapter.

Hey, Ralas old chum? Hope you didn\'t mind being in my story... err, brief as it was. Just whack me with something and order me to change it if you want.


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« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2005, 02:32:56 am »
Hey, I\'m in a story!  No one\'s done that before...

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« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2005, 03:51:57 am »
Of course I don\'t mind!  I feel much the darkmoon does.  It\'s a first and it\'s neat!  Maybe i\'ll put you in mine if I ever get around to writing it...
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« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2005, 05:43:56 am »
(Yes, okay, second half is going here. this is kinda confusing, but oh well, we\'ll just deal with it.)

(23:24:35) Jjairr says: Schedueling a quick meeting with her, I asked her of her knowledge of the ruins. She promptly informed me that she knew the ruins like the back of her paw, and she had never seen anyone remotely looking like a Crystal Master there.
(23:24:55) Talamir clears his throught, \" You had a bit much to drink\"
(23:24:56) Verrliit smiles
(23:24:59) Jjairr says: Trusting Ayshe\'s knowledge, I turned my sights to the only other option - the Tower in the Laanx Temple.
(23:25:24) Verrliit listens with interest
(23:26:07) Jjairr says: I knew of course that since no one I had ever met had ever been inside the tower, there was very little chance the Priests would allow me, a simple enkidukai, to waltz right in. So I used the only other route available to me - climbing the outside.
(23:26:36) Ganinos downs all his ale once more, then refills his mug from the keg on the table.
(23:26:55) Shooree says: a brave act, Cub...
(23:27:13) Verrliit sips, and watches from over the rim of her mug.
(23:28:44) Jjairr blinks. \"I have an audience.\"
(23:29:24) Ralas nods \"a good story usually draws a crowd\"
(23:34:18) Verrliit studies the foam in her mug.
(23:40:30) Ralas takes a large gulp of his ale and greets the newcomres
(23:40:58) Crystal sits quietly as she waits for what happens next
(23:41:58) Jjairr flicks her tail nervously.
(23:42:04) Ralas says: ...
(23:42:22) Talamir says: try keeping it out of the fire, milady.
(23:42:30) Ralas has become wary of strangers. He does not look unfriendly, but is unwilling to speak much
(23:42:32) Jjairr blinks and nods.
(23:44:38) Ralas takes refills his mug \"Thanks Ganinos!\"
(23:45:30) Jjairr says: Can we continue?
(23:45:31) Shooree smiles \"we are here, finally\"
(23:45:42) Shooree says: please do!
(23:45:58) Raze bows and lifts a paw in greetings to everyone
(23:46:21) Ralas is clearly pleased so see Raze
(23:46:22) Crystal says: Greetings :)
(23:46:42) Jjairr \'s tail gives another nervous flick as she downs a gulp of ale. \"Right, um.. When we left off I had just climbed the Laanx Temple to discover if there was a Crystal Master in the tower who could tell me what my true name was...
(23:47:41) Jjairr says: Let me tell you, that climb was by far the most challenging of any I\'ve ever attempted... But It was worth it, for when I got to the top of the tower, such a view I had...
(23:48:15) Shooree finds the piece of papyrus he previuosly used and continues sribbling sown with renewed fervor
(23:48:24) Ralas listens closely and takes a large gulp o fale
(23:48:53) Jjairr says: All of Hydlaa splayed before me like a miiature map... But, what was below me was nothing compared to what laid before me... For the tower was solid floored, but in the middle of it lay a heavy wooden trap door, decorated with intricate carvings and designs - most of them rather unpleasant looking.
(23:50:32) Jjairr says: And of course I heaved upon the trap door with all the strength I possessed- I mean, what would you do in my situation? To my surprise it came open quiet easily, and revealed a series of ladder-like rungs leading down into unfathomable darkness.
(23:51:46) Jjairr says: I heard no sound from within the darkness, but instead of despelling my fears, it only served to increase them... Regardless, I seized the first rung and carefully lowered myself into the unknown.
(23:52:08) Shooree looks disturbed by the story
(23:52:32) Verrliit leans a little, and snuggles into Gan.
(23:53:06) Jjairr says: I do not know how long it was before my paws touched solid ground once more - the minutes ticked by unchecked, and it seemed hours before the ladder ended. I hopped off and found myself in a small room, dark but not so much, and lit slightly by a candle down a passage to my right.
(23:53:51) Raze scoots closer staring wide eyed up at jjairr
(23:54:46) Jjairr says: Seeing no other alternative, I crept quietly down the passage, keeping a paw near my falchion at all times. When I reached the light, I saw that the passage ended and opened up into a wide room. The walls of the room were pale, but you couldn\'t tell, shadowed as they were by the purple flames of enchanted sconces and daubed with crimson paint designs.
(23:55:58) Shooree mumbles while jotting \"...yes, yes, it fits perfectly! yes... that is the room we...:
(23:56:02) Ganinos says: enchanted scons? Evil I say.
(23:56:09) Raze says: oohhhh
(23:57:04) Jjairr says: The floor of the room was cold stone, grey and deathlike - a rather uninviting picture all together. Scrolls were piled in untidy heaps around the room, as were various animal parts, much to my disgust. In the center of the room stood a cauldron, smouldering over a sickly green fire that appeared to spring from the ground itself. Violent purple smoke was belching forth from the cauldron, creating a dank, hazy atmosphere.
(23:57:07) Shooree puts the drawing away for a while and eyes the gathered crowd
(23:57:15) Ralas says nothing but continues to sip his ale, gazing at Jjairr
(23:58:07) Ganinos says: see all magic is evil, yes.
(23:58:10) Jjairr says: I crept toward the cauldron, my mind clouded by the fumes... They were dark magic, I could tell, enticing me with entoxicating scents and drawing me closer.
(23:58:17) Talamir says: All magic is not evil, ganinos
(23:58:37) Talamir says: But I advice you stop drinking, before you lose your mind..completely this time.
(23:58:39) Crystal nods
(23:58:59) Jjairr says: Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder- and such a hand you never felt! It was cold as stone, and it felt scaley, and slimy... Like something that had died and been frozen and then allowed to thaw.
(23:59:08) Raze runs over to shooree and hides behind him shaking
(23:59:55) Raze says: this is too scary for raze maybe he should get you a drink shooree
(00:00:03) Talamir says: Getting the cubs worked up, arent ya?
(00:00:05) Jjairr says: The feel of that hand against my fur snapped me back to reality, breaking me of the awful spell the cauldron fumes had woven. I whipped around, hand on falchion, and saw before me a terrible looking creature.
(00:00:12) Verrliit starts to nod oiff...
(00:00:13) Shooree puts a paw on raze\'s shoulder \"you do that, dear Raze..\"
(00:01:22) Raze gives shooree an ale \"is the scary part over yet?\"
(00:01:23) Shooree is petrified \"you saw IT?\"
(00:01:25) Jjairr says: It was like an old man, with pale blue wrinkled skin. But he was tall, oh so tall, as tall as a Kran, though he didn\'t look near so strong. He was wearing black robes embroidered with intricate designs, and I knew he was who I had come to search for.
(00:01:27) Talamir taps Verrliit on the shoulder, \"might want to sit\"
(00:01:45) Talamir says: Or maybe go up to a room for sleep
(00:01:49) Shooree takes the ale from Raze\'s paw, barely noticing him
(00:03:04) Ganinos says: The undead can shake the nerves of the strongest of warriors.
(00:03:05) Jjairr says: Amazingly, I managed to keep my head. I bowed before him, though baring my neck to such an atrocious creature was almost more than I could handle. He scowled at me, his peircing crimson eyes boring into me like knives. Gathering my courage, I asked, \"Are you a Master of the Crystal Way?\"
(00:04:09) Talamir looks around and throws a few trias to Raze, \"Mind findin me an ale, cub?\"
(00:04:09) Shooree takes a big gulp, paws shaking...
(00:04:35) Jjairr says: His voice, grating across the still air like the rasp of stone on sword, cut into me like a whip. \"Who are you?\" he asked, and I noticed his hand clenched before him. He would attack me if I didn\'t think quickly.
(00:04:54) Ganinos says: I put a keg of Dwarven ale on the table help yourself.
(00:05:04) Ralas takes a gulp of his ale and continues to listen
(00:05:19) Jjairr says: \"Jjairr Wolfhound,\" I said, my knees quaking. \"of the Feline\'s Lair.\"
(00:05:50) Raze hands talamir an ale and goes back to listen
(00:05:57) Talamir takes the ale.
(00:06:04) Talamir says: Thank you, cub
(00:06:08) Jjairr says: He continued to glare at me, growling in his terrible voice, \"Why have you come here? What do you want of Dulandar?\"
(00:06:45) Jjairr says: I dropped my eyes, staring hard at the floor between my paws, not daring to straighten from my bow. \"I... I have come to ask you what my True Name is.\"
(00:07:18) Raze bows to talamir \"your welcome\"
(00:08:28) Jjairr says: He laughed, a horrible laugh, the laugh of the devil himself. \"This is heavy information. I do not give out thing such as this lightly.\"
(00:09:13) Jjairr says: I was trembling so hard, I swore the temple itself was shaking. \"What do you need in return?\"
(00:09:44) Raze leans in closer tranfixed staring wide eyed at Jjairr
(00:09:55) Gellule hugs Nilaya
(00:10:03) Nilaya hugs back silently
(00:10:12) Jjairr says: His horrid eyes turned to the pendant about my neck, the wooden cross and piece of crystal that I had had since I was born. \"I want that,\" he cried, pointing to my amulet.
(00:10:49) Talamir looks around the crowded room, sipping his ale
(00:10:58) Jjairr says: Throwing away caution, I straightened up and backed away. \"No!\" i shouted. \"This you cannot have.\"
(00:11:04) Shooree shrugs \"you have a way of telling things, young one...\"
(00:11:19) Jjairr blinks. \"Is that a good thing, Shooree?\"
(00:12:04) Shooree smiles \"oh, but of course, my dear! just look at all the people you gathered!\"
(00:12:09) Talamir sips his ale
(00:12:32) Anndius wants to hear the end.
(00:12:45) Jjairr says: His brow creased in a frown as he pulled back his hand. Blue energy crackled about his clenched fist. I could tell I was going to die.
(00:12:46) Ralas does, too, as he is intriuged
(00:12:51) Raze says: yes jjairr you must finish
(00:13:04) Harvey says let her continue
(00:13:37) Jjairr says: \"Wait!\" I shouted, ripping my single most prized possession from my neck and letting it dangle between us. \"Take it, take it! But please... do not kill me...\"
(00:14:09) Shooree looks away, taking a huge gulp of his ale
(00:14:17) Jjairr says: The creature smirked and let the blue energy from his fist die. Leaning forward, he snatched the amulet from my paw and gave an evil grin.
(00:14:44) Jjairr says: Staring sadly at my former amulet, I asked him, \"Now, our deal? What is my true name?\"
(00:15:29) Ganinos looks saddened
(00:15:29) Jjairr says: Bringing the amulet to his eye, he examined it closely. \"Your true name?\" he said, and began to laugh maniacally. \"You wish to know who you are?\" I could only nod.
(00:16:04) Jjairr says: \"You are foolish!\" he cried, and swung his fist forward. It collided with my jaw, knocking me backwards. I sank into blackness and knew no more...
(00:16:17) Raze gasps
(00:16:24) Nilaya \'s eyes narrow bitterly
(00:16:32) Anndius gets angry..
(00:16:41) Ralas says: ...
(00:16:46) Crystal says: Hmm...
(00:16:48) Shooree stops writing down, loks up and nods
(00:17:10) Ganinos says: true evil takes & never gives. Ha I new it.
(00:17:12) Talamir wonders if this man had nowhere better to aim..the gut would have given better results...
(00:18:43) Jjairr says: When I awoke, hours, maybe days later, I was in a cold, square cell. My jaw pained my horribly, and I felt dried blood on my back where I had hit something sharp when I was struck.
(00:19:19) Anndius holds Gracyndia
(00:19:24) Kandrek whispers \"So a ghost story?\"
(00:20:10) Raze whispers back \"and a very good one\"
(00:19:48) Talamir says: And what happened to the twit who hit you?
(00:19:57) Talamir leans back, eyeing Ganinos
(00:20:31) Jjairr says: The only way to exit the cell that I could see was a large sturdy door set in the wall. For many hours I pounded at it, trying to break it down. Of course, it did no good...
(00:21:11) Jjairr says: I had finally given myself up for lost when I heard a commotion outside my cell. Leaning against the door, I tried to make sense of the odd sounds.
(00:22:05) Talamir looks at raze, then puts his hand on the hilt of his sword
(00:22:07) Jjairr says: Suddenly, there was an explosion, and I flew backwards, splinters of the door flying toward me like a thousand needlepointed knives.
(00:22:40) Jjairr says: When the dust cleared, I saw a vague form. It was tall, and I feared it was the Crystal Master coming to do away with me at last.
(00:22:41) Ganinos sees Tal put his hand on his sword so Gan does the same.
(00:23:12) Talamir sees Gans hand go to his sword, \"Dont fret Dwarf! I have no quarells with you, as of yet\"
(00:24:06) Jjairr says: The form took a step forward. I realized I still had my weapons and hasitly drew my falchion. Scrambling upwards, I found my footing among the rubble and growled at the figure. \"Stay back!\" I called, my throat dry and rasping. \"Let me go! You can keep the amulet, but you\'ve no right to lock me up like this!\"
(00:24:45) Jjairr says: He chuckled, only the chuckle was quite different from the one I had last heard... This one was warmer, friendlier... Familiar.
(00:25:10) Shooree puts away the papyrus
(00:25:12) Jjairr says: I felt my heart leap in my chest as I whispered, hardly daring to hope, \"Darkmoon?\"
(00:25:15) Jjairr says: And it was he.
(00:25:25) Shooree nods
(00:25:32) Gellule grins
(00:25:35) Nilaya brightens at the familiar name.
(00:25:39) Talamir says: Did he ride a valiant tefusang as well?
(00:26:31) Shooree makes a serious face at Raze then turns back to Jjairr
(00:26:48) Talamir plays with the hilt of his sword
(00:27:00) Raze puts his head down and trys to melt into the wall
(00:27:03) Jjairr says: He entered the remains of my cell and pulled me to my feet, smiling. I felt faint, as if I would collapse at any moment from shock. He dusted me off and said, \"Quickly, Wolfhound. Pull yourself together.\"
(00:27:24) Anndius raises pick axe and dagger... \"feels another pub brawl coming on\"
(00:27:57) Gracyndia prepares for fight
(00:28:13) Talamir says: Twits...let the story finish first...then I will dispose of you.
(00:28:45) Ganinos laughs at the RedMan\'s words.
(00:28:47) Nilaya raises a hand and whispers authoritatively. \"Calm yourselves.\"
(00:29:03) Jjairr says: I reeled backwards. \"How... why... where...?\" Catching me, he pulled something from his pocket and pressed it into my hand. Pushing me out into the hallway, he said, \"The Crystal Master is unconscious. You must get out of here- he could reawaken at any moment.\"
(00:29:17) Talamir looks at the fenki, then chuckles and turns his attention back to Jjairr
(00:29:57) Jjairr says: Opening my paw, I saw what was there and nearly fainted again. My amulet was safe, clasped between my fingers. \"How did you..?\" i began to ask, but he shushed me and continued to move me down the hall.
(00:30:53) Jjairr says: Finally I murmured, half dazed, \"I still don\'t know my true name...\" A secret smile curled about Darkmoon\'s lips as he stopped. We had reached the end of the hall.
(00:32:13) Jjairr says: \"I gave you that dagger for a reason, you know...\" he muttered as he drug me down a curving spiral staircase. I blinked several times, not understanding. \"What does that have to do with...?\" Patiently, he stopped and drew the dagger from my belt, presenting it to me hilt first.
(00:34:03) Talamir says: hilt first, disappointment...
(00:34:07) Talamir laughs
(00:34:18) Jjairr says: I took it warily, examining the blade. He rolled his eyes and said, \"Turn it over.\" I did. There, inscribed in the blade, were tiny, minute letters.
(00:35:34) Talamir eyes the crowd, \"I\'ll be taking my leave, enough fairy tales for today\"
(00:35:36) Shooree eyes the blade hanging from Jjairr\'s belt
(00:35:45) Jjairr says: \'Leana Incendia\' I murmured, and as he thrust me into a side corridor, he whispered the translation to me.
(00:36:00) Jjairr says: \"Lion of Fire.\"
(00:36:22) Anndius bows
(00:36:34) Shooree mumbles \"lion of Fire....hmm...\"
(00:36:51) Crystal says: hmm...
(00:37:24) Ganinos says: so your true name was on the blade given to you.
(00:38:24) Raze raze looks at his own weapons and frowns
(00:38:33) Jjairr says: I think I passed out again after that. At any rate, when I awoke, I was outside once more, and the light was fading as the day drew to a close. I straightened up, for I was laying on the grass, and saw the dagger lying before me. I grasped the hilt and returned it to my belt, as I whispered to the evening air, \"Thank you, Darkmoon.\"
(00:39:04) Jjairr blinks, smiles nervously, and preforms a clumsy bow.
(00:39:11) Kandrek applauds
(00:39:20) Raze says: wow Jjairr thats was the best bestest story Raze has every heard yep best bestest
(00:39:24) Gracyndia nods
(00:39:24) Harvey applauds
(00:39:26) Kandrek shouts: well done!!!
(00:39:33) Crystal claps as Jjairr bows
(00:39:40) Gellule comes back with a handfull of mugs and set them on the front table
(00:39:48) Ralas claps too while taking a large swig of his ale
(00:39:49) Nilaya applauds!
(00:39:58) Jjairr smiles.
(00:40:04) Gellule bows to Jjairr
(00:40:12) Anndius bows to Jjairr, and says \"well done.\"
(00:40:17) Jjairr says: Thank you all for listening, I hope I didn\'t take up to much of your time...
(00:40:18) Nilaya says: Thank you, Jjairr!
(00:40:21) Raze runs up to Jjair and looks at her with unabated wonder
(00:40:21) Harvey takes a mug and drinks her is to jjairr and her story well done
(00:40:25) Kandrek says: I do appologize that I came late into the story, but who is this Darkmoon?
(00:40:46) Jjairr shrugs. \"I still am not sure. He\'s very mysterious.\"
(00:41:04) Nilaya nods slowly
(00:41:10) Ralas says: that was great JJairr
(00:41:18) Gellule points at the mugs and whispers: Help yourself, it\'s on the house.
(00:41:25) Gracyndia says: yes an excellent tale
(00:41:30) Nilaya says: I\'ve...known Darkmoon for over a year now...and I still know almost nothing of him...
(00:41:30) Anndius drinks his fill
(00:40:44) Raze says: Jjairr could raze maybe look at the dagger just for a sec
(00:41:48) Jjairr points. \"There is the dagger.\"
(00:41:44) Raze says: ohh thats very nice now take it back raze does not want to tarnish it
(00:42:06) Ganinos says: Lady Jair, it is though stories that we know the past, & though stories that we know the present. It is through stories that the future will no of us. Congratulation.
* It was at this point Darkmoon appeared on a table in front of me*
(00:42:08) Jjairr says: Oh holy frick... You really need to quit doing that!
(00:42:12) Darkmoon says: I just came from the Pit! There is trouble afoot.. Jjairr, please meet me at the nexus.
(00:42:32) Darkmoon says: I must return to the front. Be wary!
* It was at this point Darkmoon disappeared again*
(00:42:40) Nilaya blinks
(00:42:54) Anndius thinks darkmoon is cool
(00:42:55) Jjairr chuckles nervously. \"Told you he was mysterious.\"
(00:43:02) Gracyndia agrees
(00:42:59) Nilaya says: that...did not just happen...did it...?
(00:43:37) Raze says: oh my Jjair raze does not know what just happened
(00:43:50) Gellule cannot believe what just happened either
(00:44:11) Anndius smiles and says \"the way of the powerfull can not be explained\"
(00:44:13) Kandrek says: Who was that?
(00:46:13) Ganinos says: Good night Lady Jiar.
(00:48:36) Anndius says farwell, Gracyndia and i are off to slay some bad guys.
(00:48:43) Jjairr says: Okay, now i\'m really leaving
(00:48:43) Gracyndia says: .me nods
(00:48:49) Nilaya says: Farewell...
(00:48:51) Jjairr says: good night everyone, and thank you for putting up with me.
(00:48:52) Ralas says: farewell JJairr, and goodnight
(00:49:00) Jjairr smiles. \"Good night!\"
« Last Edit: September 02, 2005, 01:52:10 am by Jjairr »


Lilura: ralas and Jjairr  be all like "oh i was a xiosia worshiper before she existed" "rivnaks are too mainstream I ride a yulbar" "I was a nolthirir before they were green"

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« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2005, 09:29:28 am »
arg in 10 lines give or take I managed to make a million typos, where you made none or very few in many lines.  \"Ralas takes refills his mug.\"  arg.  sorry.  anyway

wow Jjairr, that was great!  defenitely worth reading again, and the lack of server issues (lost lines or lines repeated 4 times) only made it that much better.  Excellent work!
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« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2005, 06:42:37 pm »
mighty nice... as I stated previously on the FL forums, I was trying to take screenshots, because the scene was sooo nice... but I kept pressing PrtScr instead of typing... bummer. Shame, because the thread would have been even better with some photos... :( anyhow, nice going!

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« Reply #9 on: September 06, 2005, 06:10:06 am »
Fascinating :)

I\'d love to hear more!
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« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2006, 12:25:02 pm »
Ah Ha!  (*looks like ideas are churning*)  Got it!

Looks good, I knew I had met you before.  That was a great night!  I think this was the night I met Jinkeen and Dylia for the first time.  

Keep writing!
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« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2006, 09:37:36 pm »
O.o

The done one is a lot better than the logs, I assure you..


Lilura: ralas and Jjairr  be all like "oh i was a xiosia worshiper before she existed" "rivnaks are too mainstream I ride a yulbar" "I was a nolthirir before they were green"