Xoel's Fan Art.

[Xoel]

Hey. Thought I'd finally set up a bit of a thread, comments and critique on the art welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oB__zWNBwHw

This is the Kore Irka Clan trailer I've been working on recently. Has no sound.

Feedback please. (It's my first skeletal animation piece)

[LigH]

- - Are those ... Sarraghi Enkis? -
_

Well done. Quite credible animations and scenarios.

[Xoel]

No, almost all Enkidukai in the video are Kore. Akaiddo, my character, has a mane. The other pale Kore with almost no stripes is Barike, leader of House Cheshire, Core Clan of the Enki Alliance (hence in the short alliance founding scene)

[LigH]

Ah, so you modelled an additional mane...

Hmm, so I still wonder how Sarraghis will look like. The image in the PS Wiki is still empty. But I will stay as patient as possible.

[Bonifarzia]

Very nice.  Akaiddo reminds me a bit of Kieve's Avatar.

I would love to see more of that very short battle scene with the vilenaut (and maybe less of the patrol with the pterosaur - the mesh has still this clumsy touch).

[Xoel]

Minus the glasses, yes, and a different tone of skin, being a Kore.

The vilenaut scene was cut short because the animation in the last half was a bit crap

And I think everyone agrees that pterosaur's face needs changing.

[Candy]

The animation itself seems very stiff - the movement could be a little more fluid and natural-looking - but otherwise it's pretty nice. I like the shot of the clan at the end.