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Sifright

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« Reply #15 on: November 09, 2003, 04:50:21 pm »
im a asuming klyros are quite small b hes wearing leather armour of some sort in which the wings are folded back
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« Reply #16 on: November 09, 2003, 05:39:56 pm »
Nice story :tup:, the grammar is bad, but you can always edit it. maybe you should try to make the sentences somewhat longer, they\'re a bit short now.
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