PlaneShift

  • Status Closed
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  • Task Type Bug Report
  • Category Setting → Quests
  • Assigned To
    Venalan
  • Operating System
  • Severity Medium
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  • Reported Version 0.6.1
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Attached to Project: PlaneShift
Opened by Jon - 11.11.2014
Last edited by Venalan - 24.12.2014

FS#6693 - All in a Day's Work grammar

“he produces a bulging pouch of coins from under his vest. He drops them on the counter with a metallic thud, then quickly hides them in his clothes again.”

Both them should be it (referring to the pouch as a singular object).

Also, Jarda’s only wearing a loincloth, so where, exactly, is he hiding that pouch?

Closed by  Venalan
24.12.2014 22:08
Reason for closing:  
Venalan commented on 11.11.2014 18:41

Text is changed. In terms of his clothing you need to refer to the description of the character not the physical in game look.

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