I wasn't meaning to really nitpick, but to point out that while it may not have been terrible it is definitely awkward. I'm not the brightest candle on the cake so maybe other people got it all on the first read, but I had to read it twice to make sure I understood it. I don't think that every GM should be an oxford scholar but it would just be nice if they took the time to at least try to use some capital letters and punctuation from time to time.
Looking back at the post, the 2nd part about idea redundancy sounds pretty nitpicky to me too, but it really was not my intent, it just came out wrong.
a story like
once upon a time there was a story and the story was good there was a knight who was brave and valiant and he was not a coward so the many ladies loved him too bad though he was a knight with a vow of celibacy who was this knight? it is i and this is my story....
Just looks nicer and more professional like this:
Once upon a time there was a story and the story was good. There was a knight who was brave and valiant. The many ladies loved him though since he was a knight he had taken a vow of celibacy. Who was this knight? It is I and this is my story....
Obviously my story telling skills suck horribly but it was just an example of polishing a turd a little bit
I don't want to nitpick so that GM's quite putting on events because they feel worthless or unappreciated. I think a little bad punctuation spelling and grammar is better than no events at all, but a combination of bad rp, bad spelling/punctuation/grammar and weak ideas to me isn't really a good thing. PS can be much more than that if people take the time.
It's only partly annoying because of bad spelling, the thing that annoys me most is that a GM is supposed to be good with words, almost an artist.
Not everyone is an artist with words. From my story above you can see that I am not. As a result were I a GM I'd probably try to take a role which didn't require much speaking and let the community be more inventive. I could be some mute person or a wild man that only grunts. Ugg Ugg UUUGGG!!!
In all honesty I really really really wasn't trying to nitpick, but if this sentence has 0 things wrong with it then I'm a flying spaghetti monster:
Feel free i am not new i have been here i long time and i know the rules
I'm not looking for some unobtainable perfection here nor some difficult gold standard. Heck if it had just had a few capital letters and some punctuation thrown in it would have been much much better. Now if the ideas and RP had been fantastic it would be a different story since I think those go above and beyond spelling, punctuation, and grammar, but in this case it was a bad combination of all of these issues. I understand time constraints might force you to go with a weak idea, but at least try to present it nice in that case.