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Gameplay => Guilds Forum => Topic started by: Ryiel Fohpaws on January 29, 2007, 06:25:39 pm
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Website: The Syndicate (http://resident.extra.hu)
"After ages of waiting, Two strangers entered the gates of Hydlaa. They took one more step forward, then nodded to each other. They went on different ways but with same thoughts: They wanted to restore the power once they had..."
Click here for the whole story (http://resident.extra.hu/viewtopic.php?t=3)
[The reason why I haven't posted the whole story, just a short extract of it, is to drive people to our website ;) ]
What's this guild about?
RP. I saw some guilds with such purposes: "To have fun, to gather all the players of the republic of Djibuoti together, to kick some dwarf a*ses." I hope the background story is good enough to start a huge RP and smaller ones within the guild. I would like to organize at least 1 RP within the guild on each week. I accept any kind of help from any guild! All the RPs within the guild will be rewarded. (Guild points, weapons, etc...)
Structure of The Syndicate
The leaders of The Syndicate are two brothers, Knoterey and Hetrius or as they call themselves: The Heads. They are the bosses behind the scenes. Nobody, not even the guild members have ever seen them.
Below the heads, the power is in two members' hands. They are the right and the left hand of The Heads. They get their orders directly from the heads, they are the voice of The Heads.
Firstly, I would like to declare that there isn't any "lower rank". The only thing that matters is the guild points. Nothing else. Let's see the ranks so far:
1. Grunt: Everyone who just joined the guild. Of course The Heads want to make sure that each and every one of the guild members is loyal to them.
2. Merchant: As the name states, they are the "gear" in this machine. The Syndicate runs different kind of businesses, such as Inns, Weapon shops, etc...
3. Mercenary: If you can pay them, they'll fight for you, by your side.
4. Assassin: Difference between the Mercenary and the Assassin is that they cannot be hire by non-guildmembers (Because they do not exist in the eye of the public). They are the silent wish of the Heads.
5. The Voice: Those who proved their loyality to the Heads, they are responsible for recruiting new members, convince them to join us. They are the eyes and ears of the Heads.
6. Retired member: All those who does not or cannot take part of our RPs anymore. (for RL reasons)
7. Craftsman: All those who are creative enough and have the knowledge to produce.
8. Left hand of the Heads: Raaka
9. Right hand of the Heads: Ryiel Fohpaws
Alignment
Simply: Neutral.
Mercenaries are neutral. They like you if you pay them and they hate you if someone else pays more. Craftsmen like you if you buy their product. What else should I say? Of course, assassins are not the nicest persons but it's only a job for them...
Why should I join?
We try to offer as much RP as we can. I hope we can cooperate with some other guilds who are up for some RP. If you think this game isn't for roleplaying: Think again!
Ps.: This is my first guild, this is one of my first posts, all critics are welcome but please, don't be cruel ;)
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Your story won't load for me.
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You win.
I've yet to read the whole backstory but, for now, I'm quite impressed.
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So these two came through the portal and are still alive and remember it? Quite hard to believe to be honest. Asides from that it seems good. I can't wait to see how you attempt to deal with the IIA.
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@Gharan: It's up to you, thanks for reading it though ;)
@Nurahk: Thanks, I knew this is a good way to convince people ;)
@Parallo: It wasn't a declaration of guildwar ;) I just tried to make a complex story. Hmm... Perhaps Talad reincarnated them, found the river of life... :) You are right... I should patch that hole somehow... (Are those portals closed now? Forgive me but I could not find any information about it...)
I just wanted to mention some guilds (for example the IIA) in order to contact them and cooperate with them in the near future for some RPs. ;)
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Oh I'm not saying it was. I'm just hoping for something interesting to happen :P
Anyway as for reincarnation, I'd try to avoid things like that. It raises more questions than it answers. You can't, although for some reason alot of people do, fill holes with a god. It'd be much better if it was believable.
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I finally got your story to load:
I like it it's good for your first guild and you can always build on it in the future. And i'd like to see were you go RP wise, none of my characters would mess with the DE or IIA, they'd quickly find there grave. :lol:
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The Syndicate wants power, no matter the way leads to it is legal or illegal. That's why I wouldn't like consider this guild to be an evil-like guild. I edited my first response but metion my solution again: I haven't seen any information about the portals. Are they still open yet or closed now? If they are open, then Hetrius and his brother can be old enough but they're still alive. That talad thing was a joke, nothing else.
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I edited my first response but metion my solution again: I haven't seen any information about the portals. Are they still open yet or closed now? If they are open, then Hetrius and his brother can be old enough but they're still alive. That talad thing was a joke, nothing else.
This is from Q&A: August Answers (http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=25357.msg280617#msg280617):
The portals from which the races arrived are most probably closed because some old writing said there was no way to go back. But none really know because we have no knowledge on where those portals were/are.
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Thank you very much Bereror, therefore I can base my story on it. They are most probably open but there could be ones that opened later or were open for a longer period.
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I finally got your story to load:
I like it it's good for your first guild and you can always build on it in the future. And i'd like to see were you go RP wise, none of my characters would mess with the DE or IIA, they'd quickly find there grave. :lol:
And besides, your characters seem to get along well with Nurahk. Why mess with a friendship :P
The most interesting thing about this is comparing it to DE's history, it's very good timing for the Heads to pop back up. The Leader of the DE has changed, the Structure has changed, the Throne is "empty".
I can't wait to see how things unfold, feel free to contact me (I can't speak for Sangwa, but I imagine he offers the same invitation) if you want to organize something.
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Definately an interesting concept. A guild that is neither inherently good or evil but will go back and forth in others eyes based solely on economic concerns. I look forward to seeing how you do.
I'm already thinking about a new character that would be interested in joining.
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Looks quite nice. I've always had an easy time writing for mercenary type characters as well, may just have to make one for this guild.
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I'm astonished. So many positive responses. :thumbup:
Yep, Ryiel and Nurahk get along well ;)
Anyone who wants to join, feel free to contact Ryiel in game.
The first RP is on its way: "Harn is going out of business!"
But I need 10 members for it ;)
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[Phinehas mode]
I get the definate sense that you're god moding. Declaring yourself as a secretive society that controls everything can be fun and useful for roleplay, but it bugs me because of the precident it sets. You're also ignoring the ongoing history developed by the players. And this stuff about owning the tavern and Brado? And having Vodul open a portal for you? You're on shakey ground here. And does Sangwa know about this history you've written between your guild and the Dark Empire?
The Outlaws is a relatively new guild, so I'm not sure where you want them to fit in the timeline of things. I'm not familiar with The Shadow of Darkness so I'm guessing they're new as well. Are they aware of the history you've written for them?
Being an assassin, theif, or smuggler will be difficult since there are no game mechanics to support such things at present. There's nothing to smuggle and it's not really possible to steal from other players unless they keep their stuff on the ground or if you rip them off during trades. That said, I think it's great for people to attempt to make characters which are assassins and so on. But I want to ask, how do you plan to do it? What create solutions have you found to the problem of such things not being supported by the game mechanics? Is the way you're doing it at all unique in any way?
More time line stuff.... you're history has your characters arriving in Hydlaa when the city was still young, but the city has been around for something like 650 years.
[/Phinehas mode]
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I would like to organize at least 1 RP within the guild on each week.
I can't understand this. I usually roleplay everytime I join Planeshift.
Plus, we do not agree with that story. You haven't asked permission to use any of our background, so we won't give it to you unless you work together with us on how to insert the Dark Empire in your background story. The Dark Empire is the oldest cause in Planeshift. We won't accept being seen as something formed after this, not even as far as Roleplaying is concerned. I would consider that godmodding on your part: the power to rule time and insert your guild in a timeline it never existed in or knows of.
Also, the Dark Empire only fought (in public war) Xperto and The Cabal as far as I know. Under Draklar's Warlordship. Under Setill's we also might have had fights with other guilds that I can not seem to remember. All these happened along time after DE's creation though.
I'd be glad to have DE in a guild background story, however you'd have to let me help you in inserting it there, since it's my place to say what the Empire has done and seen.
And one more thing "Behind the Scenes" usually means secret. You blew that part away :P.
Your ranks aren't too original and they include a wide variety of tasks and little to the hierarchic part of the guild. Maybe that's what usually happens in Syndicate's though, I'm not too sure. It doesn't happen in gangster syndicates though, where hierarchy is important. Besides, I see no goal of this syndicate of yours, besides looking sly. A Syndicate is usually created to pursue some goals for all its members. All in all I think it should be an organization, rather than a guild (if you want to be faithful to the "Syndicate" aspect).
I hope you don't think I'm being harsh. I think everyone is capable of giving a healthy contribute to Planeshift's roleplaying, but you need to make some modifications.
Planeshift has no alignment system.
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Fighting the cabal implies you putting up a fight. We kinda just walked all over you :P
But that's in the past.
As for the "Behind the Scenes" Part, I don't think it's completely blown. The IIA works behind the scenes and is quite public.
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The Dark Empire is the oldest cause in Planeshift.
The oldest? There aren't guilds around today which are manifestations of guilds that predate the DE?
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The oldest? There aren't guilds around today which are manifestations of guilds that predate the DE?
No. I'm sure you don't understand the age of the Dark Empire, since it has been around a long time before your arrival, or the arrival of any guild you know of. Nilaya of the Explorers can tell you that, if you won't take it from me.
We kinda just walked all over you
No. Auran prized the Princess and he never got anyone in. In fact, we had a spy inside the Cabal. Ain't that fun?
This has nothing to do with the current topic though... Unless it serves as information to the creator of this thread, so he can further understand the depth and seriousness of the Empire.
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What about Sentinels of the Ragnarok? (December 2004 I think)
BAH (http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=1479.0)
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The DE was founded on the 7th of May, 2002.
*edit* Link which you added while I was making the post :]
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The DE was founded on the 7th of May, 2002.
Thus the link in my post.
*edit* No excuses!
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Ooops... Finally some critics. :)
Firstly, I thought a battle that was won by the DE does not shakes the ground. I thought a guild like the DE had many fights over the years. Just to "shake" the story of your guild: How can it be so powerful with just 2 battles won by the DE? I thought one more battle that was won by the DE might heighten their reputation but :oops: I can rewrite the guild story if it's a problem. But Sangwa, please do your best and help me to insert the DE in the story ;)
I would like to organize at least 1 RP within the guild on each week.
I can't understand this. I usually roleplay everytime I join Planeshift.
Ok, I try to explain it: Call it quest, mission, whatever with rewards. Read the website, I think I wrote it somewhere there. The whole PS is a roleplay game, that's right. But you have to RP that Harnquist has problems since he is an NPC. (I hope I don't have to ask permission for RPs that involve NPCs from the dev team ;D )
About the ranks:
You are right it's not that original, it's not that well developed but the hierarchy based on the guild points. Read the website. I hope this idea is more original like ;)
@Zanzibar
They had the Kada-El, even Brado had to pay them for protection.
I've started this game 4 months ago. I saw two different people running the tavern of Kada-el. Is my story that unbelieveable? I don't really see any problem with it but throw some rocks at me if I'm wrong. About Brado: Perhaps he was blackmailed or the members of the sydicate were scared away his customers and he had to play. I said nothing about how it was solved. Perhaps Brado was p*ssed off enough to kill those people who ruined his business. (Or asked the DE for help :D ) Should I read the PS story once more? I thought all the portals were opened by Vodúl but so be it. I'll edit this part. (I hope it is the biggest problem with the guild...) Nobody said that Vodúl opened that portal just for me. I don't want to sound harsh but it sounds like you just had a look at the website and did not really read the story. (Or my english is that bad...) The Shadow of Darkness and the Outlaws were just mentioned. Nothing else, nothing more. (I hope they are not p*ssed off for mentioning their names...) You have to separate the past and the present. The brothers are older now, much more older...(But i can rewrite the story that the Syndicate was led by a couple and their children returned.) Their defeat by the DE was in the past and they returned now. Hetrius started some legal businesses, the story of Knoterey is not finished yet. (I have no idea what he wants to do, it's up to Raaka.) About the smugglers: As far as I remember The Outlaws had a good RP about smuggling something to Hydlaa. (Alcohol or drugs I cant remember, It was fun.) Izzabella tried to pickpocket my character many times and I always RP'd that way. We rolled and if she won, i gave her money. (Unforunately she was caught three times :D )
I just really did not want a guild without past, without purpose. (Hmm.. Does the Syndicate have purpose? I hope it has :) ) My opinion is different about the godmodding thing. I think the defeat of the DE would have been godmodding but the DE won, that's the point. The Syndicate was crushed, disbanded, destroyed, whatever. That's the point.
I know I could not solve all the problems in one post but I'm looking forward to hear more comments.
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You're writing stories involving people's characters without first getting their permission. That's a big no no.
There is an actually history progressing in game from player interactions, but you seem disinterested in it. There's nothing wrong IMO with writing stories, but what about finding a ballance?
And you ARE godmoding by inventing wars that never happened and saying that you own Hydlaa from behind the scenes. If I remember right FROM READING YOUR STORY, one of your members is even Vigisemi.
Your time line is also out of sync with the time line described in the game settings and in the (ever evolving) ingame history. If you want to just write and say whatever you want to, then fine, go for it. But you're going to run into a lot of problems when you try to get others to play along with you.
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7 May. Wow thank you. I knew DE was old, but I didn't know its birthday. It shall be reverenced from now on. *points at 2004 and chuckles*
The Dark Empire has never been too warlike. We usually win without shedding blood and that's what Sun Tzu calls a victory by excellence. I've been repeating this since I joined the Empire. I would think this to be common sense by now. So your remark back there is shaking your own head at what should be known, not shaking DE's story.
Plus, the victory of ours you mentioned wouldn't "highten" our reputation, it would smear it. People know (or should by now) we don't fight without a reason, and you just named a battle out of the blue.
About the RP thing: The interaction you operate with other guilds and people will shape the roleplay in the best way possible. Making up stuff doesn't do us any good. That doesn't mean your char shouldn't plot and organize schemes. It just means you, as a player, shouldn't be out there trying to input something that's already there and just needs some tending to. In the end we get a continuous storyline, instead of events detached in time and space, and forgotten as trivial entertainment.
Saying DE won won't make up for anything. You consider yourself to have been here since the birth of days, since before DE. I can't cope with that. I'll gladly help you with your background, if you PM me what role you expect from the Empire in your background story, but not if you insist on shaping all these things incoherently. Your story should either not conflict with other people's notions, or it should be made: like DE's background (at our library. Feel free to check our site, it's linked at my sig. At the forums you'll find the library with some chronicles. I'll be adding "Aelya and Dark" story soon [tm].)
I'll put some emphasis on this and tell you that referring one of you was meant to be a Vigisimi contributes to that unreal touch. Makes me remember that girl who was going to be an Octarch... and laugh. Now, what would you think if every guild started saying they were here since always, that the Octarch had been friends with them for a long while now, and that they'd lived since the opening of the Portals? What if I said I was the result of one of Vodul's and Laanx's nights of fun?
I don't like your point system, as it allows powerlevelling idiots to succeed just because they are maxxed out.
don't be cruel.
I'd never think about such a thing. Now get rid of that alignment thingy! :devil: Also, don't make it look like you can just offer RP like it was lemons. We're all roleplay guilds here, and everyone should be a roleplayer. People should join your guild because it is interesting, different or because it links well with a certain kind of characters, not because you give away what everyone else should be giving away.
Thanks for taking my critics as critics. Some people tend to overweight opinion and cry about our ways of being helpful. Sorry for the long reply, I'll be more succinct if you ask me to.
[edit: removed some info to make the post smaller]
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I see there are some misunderstandings going on. :)
You're writing stories involving people's characters without first getting their permission. That's a big no no.
I think i mentioned nobody's character. I mentioned guilds. (But I can see now that even heightening some else's guild is wrong in times like these :) ) I see it was wrong to mention other people's guild. I could not even image that one more victory can make any difference in other's guildstory but you are right, I want to force nobody to follow my way, even if it makes no difference and all that i needed was nodding.
There is an actually history progressing in game from player interactions, but you seem disinterested in it.
The story of the DE develops since it had been founded in 2002. It's 2007 now. I'm up for a history lesson, would anyone be kind to sum up what happened in the past 5 years? :D To be honest, there must be some problems with me because I still don't see what's that big deal. I hope someone can open my eyes.
And you ARE godmoding by inventing wars that never happened and saying that you own Hydlaa from behind the scenes. If I remember right FROM READING YOUR STORY, one of your members is even Vigisemi.
You are right, I invented a war that was won by the Dark Empire. I haven't asked for their permission, I didn't know how to deal with these things but I asked Sangwa to cooperate in my last post to fix the issues. I'm up for any solution that's good for the DE. I would even cut that part of the story and write something else. So bomb me with your suggestions you guys!
Let me quote some lines from my guildstory: Click here to read the whole story! (http://resident.extra.hu/viewtopic.php?t=3)
It begins with these words: "Long time ago..." I think it's clear that it did not happen yesterday. Not even on the day before yesterday.
"Hetrius had been elected to be a Vigesimi while Knoterey started to run a smuggler network. " <-- I think this sentence is in past perfect tense.
"But someone had found out the relation between Hetrius and The Syndicate so he had to leave." <-- It means that Hetrius is no longer a Vigesimi, doesn't it?
"He had to flee, he had to give up all his busniesses, belongings and dreams... " <-- The Sydicate had been abolished.
"After ages of waiting, Two strangers entered the gates of Hydlaa. They took one more step forward, then nodded to each other. They went on different ways but with same thoughts: They wanted to restore the power once they had..." <-- The last sentence suggests us that they have no power now...
Sangwa, I saw you were faster than me but I have no time right now, so I'm gonna answer you later. Just one another thing! The line that you quoted does not look like the original one. That had a ;)
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I see there are some misunderstandings going on. :)
Yes, and we're trying to help you with your misunderstandings.
I think i mentioned nobody's character. I mentioned guilds.
And you think that changes anything? Besides, a guild is the group of characters that run it. When you say the Dark Empire, you refer to the people who run it.
(But I can see now that even heightening some else's guild is wrong in times like these :) )
You are not in any position to heighten the Dark Empire. However, they are in a position to heighten you, and that's all you've tried to do. You wrote them into your history to try to make yourself look better.
To be honest, there must be some problems with me because I still don't see what's that big deal. I hope someone can open my eyes.
The problem is that you're godmoding without shame.
So bomb me with your suggestions you guys!
I don't think that your history is worth saving. I don't think it's possible to save, because you've writen yourself as a 650 year old character who secretly controls all of Hydlaa from behind the scenes and you have a history of wars with old guilds but you ally yourself with guilds which haven't been around for a month RLtime.
Let me quote some lines from my guildstory:
Let me tell you once again that I've already read your guildstory, and you would do well to reread the responses people have given you.
Listen, I don't mean to be mean. I don't want to scare away new players. I don't want to put an end to storywriting and storytelling and people going slightly outside the settings to further their own roleplaying. But what you've tried to do is incredibly impractical.
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I hope someone can open my eyes.
Gladly. In the view of the DE a victory by bloodshed is not something to be proud of. It's something bad. Forceing that upon the DE is therefore something bad. The DE's perception of a good reputation is obviously different to yours. I'll put it more into your terms then by way of a hypothetical situation. A guild appears 5 years from now. Your guild is still around. They're history says that they battled you and drew. Would no not find that irratating?
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I'm late for my meeting dude. But who cares :) I spent a lotta time on having debates on political issues. I do admit if someone has the talent for reasoning. I know you see someone here with 10 posts and with 4 months of playtime who tries to explain you something but the thing is that he wants to explain is out of your sight. You're trying to show my guildstory in view that hardly covers the truth. I don't see any kind of reasoning, only attacks with full force in bad way of manner. I don't really like this kinda "showing the right way to newbies" help but if it's the way how you wanna tell somebody that he is wrong, so be it. I took Sangwa's critics as critics but yours are rather offence than critics. I don't wanna compare what Sangwa offered as helping newbies and what you did but it's hardly the same. You just ignore my posts, my reasoning.
Nothing proves it better than these facts:
1. The portal thing. Bereror posted the link to the Q&A: August Answers. Nobody knows where the portals are, they are closed or not. PROBABLY they are closed. Nobody said the brothers arrived when Hydlaa was just founded.
2. They control nothing now. They have no power now. But you keep telling me that they still control everything behind the scenes.
3. Nobody said that The Syndicate is allied with the shadow of darkness or the outlaws.
I don't know who you are and why are you twisting my words. But have fun mate, I don't blame you. Peace :surrender:
@Parallo: Thank you, I did not know that. Sangwa offered his help to solve this matter and I gladly accept it. Perhaps i could not emphasize that this Syndicate is not the old one cause they had nothing when they fled the city and went back to the cave system. Only the two persons are the same. (But I already wrote that you are right guys and they cant be the same, the timeline is a bit messy now. The past Syndicate could have been led by a couple and the brothers are their children. Sounds better, huh?) Anyway, thanks for all those who opened my eyes, my story is hardly flawless. ;) I hope I can patch the holes.
But i should have left one hour ago. :) I come back tomorrow, hopefully.
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I was reading that thinking it was directed at me! Didn't realise till I got to the "@Parallo:" bit. Heh. Well good luck with fixing it. It shows flaws but glimmering beneeth those flaws is potential. You just have to clean away the flaws to get to it.
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Ryiel Fohpaws, the reason I find problems in your guild story is not because I'm too stupid to understand what you're saying. The reason I'm finding problems is because your guild story is severely flawed.
I don't see any kind of reasoning, only attacks with full force in bad way of manner
They are full force attacks that are well reasoned out.
You just ignore my posts, my reasoning.
No, I've replied to your posts in detail, quoting the parts that I'm replying to. That's hardly ignoring your posts.
Nobody said the brothers arrived when Hydlaa was just founded.
Except you. You said that you arived in the city early enough to witness its early developement.
They control nothing now. They have no power now. But you keep telling me that they still control everything behind the scenes.
They controlled everything behind the scenes at one point, yes?
Nobody said that The Syndicate is allied with the shadow of darkness or the outlaws.
After rereading your history, you're right. You merely mention them as disobeying the law.
Anyway, thanks for all those who opened my eyes, my story is hardly flawless.
No, I would venture to say that it's very much flawed.
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I haven't decided yet what to do. I just would like to ask one little thing zanzibar: Spare your full force attacks to RL, I suggest you kickbox or wrestling. :) This "duel me noob" manner fits perfectly for diablo2 but I thought this game is different. I know you don't wanna hear my opinion but this game is for having fun. (with others) I wanted to ruin nobody's fun, guild, IC life. I've read others opinion about my guild, my guildstory and my mistakes. I always try to be a person who learns from his own mistakes and from others as well. All the guys who met me in game (Not me, Ryiel :D ), I hope I could make you smile once at least. This guild was another attempt to have as much fun as possible but some guys know no mercy, instead of just letting me know what's wrong with my ideas, how to fix the cracks and patch the holes told me: My story does not worth to save it. You know what? You are right. And I don't think I'll spend more time on this story, to save this story. It simply does not worth the time and the struggle. I hope all those who's characters I involved can forgive me, I had no thought of offending you. Peace :surrender: :thumbup:
I think I'm gonna rewrite the whole story, the whole guild. I don't know yet what to tell those who put their trust in me and joined my guild. I have only 6 active players in my guild. That was a good start guys. I already talked to one of them who said she won't let me down. So, I will come back, I don't know when and how but I let you know it.
Pm sent to Sangwa, one of my guildmembers convinced me to give it a shot. She is damn wise. ;)
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Upon creating a thread about your guild, you open yourself up to full critism.
Zanzi was simply pointing out holes in your guild's story, that need to be filled. Preferably, with something that fits the settings of the world and is believable.
Constructive critism like what Zanzi has done is a good thing! It helps you see problems with your ideas and helps to get you started on how you can go about fixing the problems.
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You're the one taking things personally here, Ryiel... You just need to take these opinions as they are: opinions. They might sound harsh and cruel, but they certainly aren't, since you can just select what parts you wish to take into account and ignore the rest without any repercussions. Be at ease, no one's telling you to go away. Simply making sure you understand what are the standards around here.
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Zanzi was simply pointing out holes in your guild's story, that need to be filled. Preferably, with something that fits the settings of the world and is believable.
Indeed, don't expect any of it to be upbuilding either, Hence why I don't post much around here.
Though I like the idea of a syndicate sort of guild.
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I think it's time for an advice:
The Dark Empire background did not claim they were already powerful, known and victorious over other organizations when they were founded years ago(Someone correct this if I'm wrong), so the best solution for fixing this history, is by going back on time on it and put the Syndicate in the current time as when it began from what it seems, in other words, as a group that is being founded now, that still must achieve power through both public and not so public means, that is trying to push someone(the brother of the leader) to become a Vigesimi and that may in the future enter in conflict against the Dark Empire(not in the past like the history claims), or perhaps not. And then just add more details to this initial part of the history and it will probably become acceptable. Of course you could also write everything from scratch, but this suggestion is here for you.
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Exactly what I mean when saying "earn your story."
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You cannot rewrite past but, who knows; maybe you can rewrite the future.
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Thanks for your support guys! I should start this rewrite thing now while the server is down :D