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Sword and story
« on: September 20, 2004, 08:46:42 pm »
Got bored. Drew a sword. Failed a lot due crashes -___- Made some parts hastily, wrote a story without inspiration and tada! (Don\'t complain about similar parts looking different. Complain about crashing proggy)



Eganrek Blade

Once there was a feared Ynnwn bandit called T?e\'kari.
He had always been taller and more muscular than his kind but at his middle teens something caused him to grow over a half meter taller than the usual height of Ynnwns. His strenght and body build was great but he wasn\'t very dexterous. For some reason he chose to start his career a rogue. His techniques weren\'t based on stealth and lockpicking. It was the opposite. He tore down the door and stole the goods he needed. When the guards came he bashed few of them and ran away (Even the ones of his kind couldn\'t catch him). Soon he became known outlaw and was almost killed in a fight against guards. He ran to a wood nearby his home city to lick his wounds. When he realized he had become known in the whole area near the city he had to think something. He started gathering a little army of bandits for his protection and soon he had about a dozen of trustworthy friends on his side. He started raiding nearby farms with his friends and he built a small underground hideout with the loot. After a while the citys militia was sent after him and he needed more henchmen. After hiding out for a long time and gathering more allies he showed himself and started brutal resistance against the militia. No lives were spared and tales about the horrors were spread along the travelers. Piles of bodies, hundreds of liters of blood and spear impaled heads became his trademark. He was very succesful and his pride rose. Soon he made a nightly raid against the city. It was a bloodbath and half of his men were killed in action but the city suffered horrible losses too. Half of the city was burnt to the ground and some of the greatests of its treasures were stolen. One of the treasures was a part of a broken blade. It has inscription like nothing he had seen. Ancient runes of power. This part of the blade made him bother. If the other half of the blade would be this big only giants like he would be able to use it. Soon he began to search for the other part of the blade and after months of bloody battles with small towns and villages he found it. He entered an old house that seemed to have something odd about it. At the back of the house there was a venerable sitting on a chair swinging forwards and backwards. Above him was the other half of the blade on a holder that was attached to wall. Tee ignored the man and took the part and started walking away. When he was at the door he heard a silent grunt behind him. The man was standing tall in there and said \"Maybe it would be more useful for you if it was whole. I am the only one who can repair it.\". Tee seemed puzzled and the man continued \"I won\'t be here if you leave now. I can already hear the calls of my ancestors.\". Tee seemed even more puzzled. \"I am dying soon.\" the man said and at last Tee realized what the man meant. \"Let\'s give it a try he thought and handed the blade to the old smith.\". He handed over the parts of blade (He had the other part with him just in case he had to compare it with other part(s). The man heated up the forge and became chanting outwordly words. The air glowed around him as he hammered the blade and melted the parts together. After melting it he chanted and redrew the runes. After half an hour the blade was complete at last and the man gave the man instructed the Ynnwn to lift it. It felt lighter than he expected and some kind of strenght poured from it. The man smiled wickedly and muttered something. Tee was sure he said \"At last I am ready to die.\". After this the Ynnwn walked out of house but turned when he realized that he didn\'t even thank the man. When he walked into the house it was empty. Tee walked out of the house wondering what just had happened. His friends who had looted some parts of the village were waiting for him with some loot. They had slight terror in their eyes as they watched afar. The royal champion and some of the elite knights had just arrived to smite the bandits down. Tee\'s men fell like hay as the skilled knights slew them. Tee who had stood little further was the last one standing. Some knights had died but he had no chance against them alone. The knights stopped and the champion rode in front of him, jumped down from the saddle and challenged him. He instantly knew that his brute strenght would be enought to take out the champion but he could only read prayers when it came to his skills. The champion stroke few quick slashes and the Ynnwn fell on his knees using his sword to support him. When the blade hit the blood covered ground wave of power came searing through him. He stood tall again and amazement crept to the champions face. The Ynnwn charged before the champions eyes even noticed it and cut the man in half. When the blade drained blood from the corpse the Ynnwn felt good. He had never enjoyed killing but this felt heavenly. Like you could do something that you had done something great long time ago and now you would do it again. Tee thirsted for more blood and attacked the knights who had started charging at him. After moments of bloodbath only Tee was standing. His eyes glowed like they belonged to a madman. Killing really felt great! He started losing his sanity and attacked everybody in his path. Some of them were his own men and he even slayed a childhood friend. Nobody was no match for him as he walked around the countryside. Luckily after months the usage of the weapon had taken its toll. The Ynnwn\'s hands had been by the gold in the weapons handle and he couldn\'t hold it for long. When he charged towards a peasant who fled from him he lost the grip of the weapon. The weapon flew many meters and something snapped inside him. He just regained his sanity. He knew where he was and he remembered everything else terribly well but he just couldn\'t realize why he had done such cruel things for no profit. Then he realized that the blade had driven him mad and he spun a cloth around it. He felt desperate and gloomy. He buried the weapon into one of forgotten and hidden passages and walked towards the edge of the world. Only few people heard of him after that. Enough for writing this story. It was said that he died by his own hand after telling his story to few storytellers.

Tanicul Efan
The Legends XVI

Cliche cliche all tah day \\o/ Gotta sleep a bit -_____-

Edit: I do all this work and nobody comments :,( This was done after writing swedish so don\'t wonder why my thoughts are spinning like catherine wheels.
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« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2004, 02:13:57 am »
Well I think it is rather rude that no one posts on this thread after he put such hard work into it ^^ and don\'t give me no excuses like I wasn\'t on today..because there was so many people. Someone needs to say it pie, that sword is so great..i like the special handle :P

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« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2004, 02:18:39 am »
A little generic, but nice.  :)  The serrated blade looks cool, but I can tell you used some kind of stone-texture.  ;)
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« Reply #3 on: September 21, 2004, 04:25:28 am »
cool sword and nice story too. vampiric blade that causes bloodlust, interesting.
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« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2004, 12:28:02 pm »
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Originally posted by Monketh
A little generic, but nice.  :)  The serrated blade looks cool, but I can tell you used some kind of stone-texture.  ;)


I have stone texture and generic blade fetish.

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cool sword and nice story too. vampiric blade that causes bloodlust, interesting.


Well it doesn\'t actually cause bloodlust since the blade dominates its user. Lets just say that I thought the blade as shard of an evil god from original homeworld of Ylians. (Those are actual runes. German ones. Had to be so dumb that I wrote Eganrak -> karnagE -_- Backward name fetish \\o/ My first real PS char was supposed to be name Serac Ydobon -____-). And about the story. Didn\'t plan it a bit. Just wrote it :F

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i like the special handle


I have fetish for special handles too \\o/ I almost always draw little curvy handles which can be used with two hands.

Own comment. The original story behind the blade didn\'t fit in so I made that one for it. I think it has too many unexplained and bloodlusting parts but ah well. Pretty good at that state of mind \\o/
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« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2004, 08:59:42 pm »
Awsome job! *claps*

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« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2004, 10:37:55 pm »
n1...really nice :D
sounds good ;)

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« Reply #7 on: September 21, 2004, 11:51:08 pm »
Hmm. Maybe I should make one thing more accurate.

He tried to destroy the weapon but he couldn\'t do it even with his brute strenght and tools combined. (Makes you wonder what powerful thing originally shattered the blade.) He seeked for a place to hide the blade but normal caves were just too easy to be reached so he hid it into an unterwater cave. It was very hard for him to get in there and he was sure that no others except Nolthrir could go to the cave. When he reached the back of the cave he stroke the blade into the rock. (The blade didn\'t posses him since it didn\'t get any power from blood.) After the blade cut through stone he sealed the shallow cave with the cave-in he made.

Nowadays it is rumored that this old but completely and accurately remained legend might be true and the blade might be buried into coastal area called Poisonvine coast. These rumors started from the monster infection of this area after some time of the legends happenings. Today Poisonvines and vampiric beasts inhabit this cursed piece of land battling agains Nolthrir who are trying to make a colony nearby.

Edit: Maybe I could tell about the origins of the blade sometime ;)

Edit2: I should read the setting more. Ah well.. I won\'t edit the story but it may sound somehow strange...

Edit3: I will tell about the origins of the blade today. But first some sleep, school and mythology ;)
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« Reply #8 on: September 23, 2004, 09:14:19 pm »
Because exams I have to continue swords story tomorrow. Sorry people. But I promise I will have better ideas than the ones I am having now -.-

Update: The story will be complete tomorrow(today ;) ). I just told the basic version of the story to Seperot and he said that it\'s okay so I will improve it a lot and post it here. I didn\'t actually want to explain Ylians with the story but bleh. I guess it just slipped. And too bad about the Ylian origins too ;)

You will see what I meant :)
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« Reply #9 on: September 24, 2004, 09:08:43 pm »
What is the story behind the blade.
I hope you have bothered it for some time.

And no. I actually don\'t know anything about scandinavian mythology. So don\'t complain >:|

This will sound farfetched but I just didn\'t know what else to write

And I don\'t want to end our world so the end is somehow happy :/

Dodge this! ;)

Loki had finally broke of from his chains and sat on his own golden throne. He knew that
Ragnarok would come soon and wipe him out along the other gods. But he had spied Odin in
the form of a crow and knew that at start of the time there was a portal to another realm
but it was covered into Father of all giants Aimir\'s blood which became the earth. Loki\'s
plan was to force part of his existence into an item which he would send through this portal.
He had sensed something radiating from the far north and knew it would be the portal.

Loki decided that the item he would create would be a sword since it could drain the blood
of its victims and strenghten the essence he would put in the blade and make it his own
incarnation. The creation of the sword wasn\'t so simple task since he had to find components
that would be strong enough to hold his essence inside the blade. So he began thinking which
materials he would use and decided that he would need Aimir\'s hair for the handle, tooth of
the world serpent for the blade and some gold from Valhalla to seal the swords power.

So he started searching for the components. First he tried to find Aimir\'s hair. Aimir\'s hair
had originally formed trees but most of these original trees had already died. For three days
he roamed around the northern lands and at last found tree so powerful that even he couldn\'t
make it fall without tricks. So he made a plan to cut the tree down to get the innest part of
it. He took a stone giant with him and ordered him to go to another side of the tree. Then he
spoke to the tree. The tree listened to him and Loki started to lower his voice. The tree bent
down all the time to hear what the man was speaking. When the tree bent enough Loki showed a
signal to the giant and he attacked. The tree screamed in the pain so hard that almost all the
birds nearby flied away. Only crows remained. The giant was surprised because the tree hadn\'t
been cut after his brutal swing. He swinged two times and the tree was cut down. Loki ordered
the giant to carry the tree to his own haven and so he got the first component.

The second thing he needed was the tooth. The world serpent J?rmungandr was one of his children
but it probably wouldn\'t give one of its precious teeth away easily. So Loki thought that he
had to replace it somehow and started thinking of the ways. He realized that the copy had to be
like his real tooth. It had to have J?rmungandrs fathers and mothers blood and similar durability
and sharpness. It also had to be capable of containing venom. Loki first tried to make it out of
the bare wood he had gotten from the tree. Seemed like it could easily be crafted to contain venom
and it would be easy to imbue it with his and Angrboda\'s blood but it wasn\'t durable enough. So
the god decided that he had to get something hard metals and so he ordered few giants to forge him
iron and some other ore. When Loki got this ore he separated the metals from the ore and mixed
them with a secret formula. Then he once again poured his and his wifes blood in the mix and
started forging the metal around the wood. When the work was done he made some runes into the
\"tooth\" and covered them with gold from his throne to strenghten them. It would nod be as good as
the original tooth but the serpent wouldn\'t notice it.

The tooth was complete Loki took Angboda with him and headed to the edges of the frozen seas. When he
finally met his \"son\" he asked his wife to sing a lullaby. Even the singer was a giant the melody
was so beautiful and sorrowful that the serpent fell asleep. Even loki himself was little shaken
but he had work to do so he took his replica with him and walked inside serpents mouth. Then he cut
of the snakes tooth and attached the replica into its socket. After that loki left with her wife
and went back to his haven.

Getting the gold was an easy task since the gold in his throne was mined from Valhalla by the giants.
Now Loki had to combine the components and seal the blade with his runes. He began to shape the tooth
of J?rmungandr to the form he wanted it. He was almost complete when he made a small crack into the
blade. Loki cursed and began to smoothen the crack but it didn\'t work. Last things he could do were
to make the blade smaller or give it a brutal serrated look. Loki chose to make it serrated. Then
he began to shape the tree. The tree was easy to shape but hard. The heartpiece was completely white
and radiant. The handle was finished in no time. Then the god began a blood ritual to seal his essence
into the blade. For three days and for three nights he spilled his blood on the blade and the handle.
The handle turned black and shiny as Loki\'s soul darkened it. It only affected the tooth a little and
made it slightly darker and stone-like. Now the tired god had to scribe the runes of power into the
blade and seal it with gold. The god thought what runes he would scribe and he chose to write the name
of his next incarnation. Eganrak was the name he chose and he scribed the runes into the blade. Then
he began singing and the earth trembled as he sealed the power of the blade with the gold. All his
despair, bloodlust, madness and loneliness had been sealed into this single blade.

The god rested for a week. The third winter in row outside was certain sign that Ragnar?k would be
near. He had to plan his next move carefully. He had to get make sure that the portal was open and
that he could get the blade to the other side with some people. And if other gods would find out
about his plan he wouldn\'t be able to be succesful.

After resting he took his blade and stone giant named Gygnir with him and headed to the portals location.
He scouted around for gods and godly spies who would be easy for him to dispatch but didn\'t realize that
there was an eagle flying a far who noticed them and hastily flied to tell Thor that Loki had broken free
from his chains. Loki arrived to a cliff that was his only thing preventing him from getting to the portal.
So he ordered the giant to use his special ability to meld with earth to go inside the cliff. The giant
did so and went inside the cliff. Soon he came back and reported that there is a room with strange whirly
surface inside. \"Idiot! Go inside and open route to it then. It is quieter if you mine it from inside.\".

After the way was clear Loki felt something was wrong. He didn\'t believe his eyes when he saw Thor\'s
chariots. He cursed and ran towards the portal with the giant and the sword. Thor would soon catch him
and he needed a quick plan. He ordered the giant to meld with earth and grab Thor when he comes. Loki
took the blade but clumsily dropped it on the ground in haste. He cursed and was about throw the blade
into the portal when Thor\'s hammer flew through the air and smashed the blade into two pieces but Loki
grabbed both pieces and threw them to the portal. \"Fool. Now your are an easy target for me.\" Thor
boasted. Loki tried to look surprised and was succesful. \"Now I am going to chain you back into your
prison. We still won\'t forget what you did long time ago.\" Thor said and his voice echoed like thunder.
Loki stomped the ground as a sign for the giant and began running towards Thor. Thor was about to smash
the gods head with his hammer when the giant grapped him from behind. Loki ran away from the cave since
he had no time to fight and the giant looked at him stupidly like excepting for aid. The giant\'s strenght
was no mach for Thor\'s godly powers and the giant was quickly smashed into pieces. Thor jumped into his
chariots and tried to follow Loki who had assumed crow form but realized that the Trickster had sabotaged
his chariots and he couldn\'t follow him before he had repaired the chariots.

Loki was satisfied when he got away from Thor but still he had to do even more work since the blade had
broken and he couldn\'t go through portal for two reasons. First was that there would be other gods in the
other side of the portal and it would be dangerous to go through. The other reason was simple. Thor had
assigned Valkyries to guard the cave. Now the god had to give a human part of his powers and send him through
the portal. He also wanted to send other humans to aid this humans journey. He also needed a huge distraction
to lure the guardians of the portal off.

First he planned the distraction. The valkyries wouldn\'t go easy on him so he decided that the Ragnar?k that
he knew was nearing was the best distraction. He started meeting giants and his children to create a force
of evil beings. When his plans were complete and his forces gathered he chose fourty two humans around the world
to complete his task. He chose the oldest of them, smith called Siegfried to lead his mission and keep his secrets.
The man agreed and the god gave him part of his power by performing a ritual and tattooing the man. The ritual
gave the man endless lifespan until he would forge the sword again. He would also become part of Loki\'s new
incarnation.

So Loki sent the men to travel towards the portal and rushed towards plains of Vigrid. The good gods were
waiting for the forces there with their own army. So the battle clashed and slaughter began. Gods and their
children and people fell one after another. When Loki saw the two seraphims who had been guarding the cave
he was sure that his people would make it. When the battle was at its fiercest and final phase Loki fell
and his death scream set the plains on fire burning everything down. Even the tree of the life Yggdrasil
was caught on this searing fire and burned down. After the battle only humans and animals were alive. The
humans groaned for the loss of their precious fathers and the tree of life but then something happened. Like
new god would have replaced the old ones the tree of the life and many other tree rose from the ashes. The men
who still were sad stood in awe but after surviving from sorrow they rejoiced about the trees and survival of
their kind and the animals.

And what comes to the group who traveled towards the portal. They made it and took the parts of the sword with
them. They had bad luck and enkidukais who came from near them had thieves among them and one of the thieves
managed to steal the second part of the blade and was never seen again. Siegfried cursed and let the humans to
safe place in the lands of Yliakum. One day he disappeared with the part of the blade and his son Ylian started
leading the people. Soon they met the others races who had already came to Yliakum and started colonies with
them. This group of humans wasn\'t the only one since other people came from the portal as well. Later on the other
races started calling this kind of humans Ylians.

Well.. That should be it. I feel like something is whirling inside my head. Bleh -_-

Comments please ^_^

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« Reply #10 on: September 24, 2004, 10:27:56 pm »
Nice story & how to explain Ylians origens... lots of Norse mythology here, this happened on Earth or in another realm of existence? 1 thing though, if this is going to be a background history of the Ylians then I would think you may want to re-name the gods to something else other then earthly mythology, then you can start an Ylians religion! Cool! :D

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« Reply #11 on: September 24, 2004, 10:40:12 pm »
Heh. Thank you for comments Zeraph.

You guys want more. There is long uncovered time in this story. Of course Siegfried had the other part all the time but what happened to the other :) ??

I know just perfect story to connect it with.

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i really like it
« Reply #12 on: October 02, 2004, 11:43:25 am »
yea i like it, it looks good and would have a powerfull swing to it and place some nice damage

if i had in ingame sword it would Definatly be that one.

keep up the good work mate !
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« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2004, 03:10:16 am »
heavy-lookin\'! Definately a damage causing weapon. however, the handlydeal looks slighty impractical, like it break off on contact. other than that i like it... good story too.
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