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willen

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Monster, drawing bye me
« on: September 14, 2004, 08:20:04 pm »
this a monster who looks like to a turtle :

http://site.voila.fr/willendias/tortue.jpg?0.9573074108094217





Give me your opinion on my work thanks for your answers.
« Last Edit: September 14, 2004, 08:20:56 pm by willen »

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« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2004, 08:29:42 pm »
Hey, that\'s awesome :D Excellent drawing, in my opinion. Two things though: 1) try scaling it down some so the viewer sees all of it at once instead of having their eyes wander around and try to put it all together, and 2) finish it! ;) It would make excellent line art if you darken some of the lines and vary their width.

Thumbs up, anyway :)
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« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2004, 08:35:55 pm »
I think it\'s really good.

1 thought though, could you like paint some simple Kran or human race stuff at the side of it so we get some perspective?

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« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2004, 10:30:41 pm »
the monster in color near an ylian, but the color is not good because i havent got a good logiciel for painting if you know one tell me please thanks and excuse me if my english is not so good


http://site.voila.fr/willendias/tortue_colorie1_et_ylian.JPG?0.44743202941005033

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Looks Great!
« Reply #4 on: September 14, 2004, 11:00:27 pm »
I sort of see what it would look like with proper coloring?
I think it could even be an underwater mount. :D

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« Reply #5 on: September 15, 2004, 06:54:56 pm »
not that cool a monster.. but it IS a very good drawing very nice.  Tho the coloring was ??horable??...i can visualize how it would look :D

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« Reply #6 on: September 15, 2004, 09:58:02 pm »
help me to find a good logiciel to coloring my draw, this monster was  coloring with paint but is not good :(

help me and i\'ll give you some more drawing :) , and if you want you can use for improve, and thanks for your opinion

and here an another monster :

http://site.voila.fr/willendias/lermite.jpg?0.261972211724271
« Last Edit: September 16, 2004, 11:14:06 am by willen »

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« Reply #7 on: September 16, 2004, 08:35:11 pm »
Some tips:

1) Mirror your image often. Every few minutes, flip (mirror) your digital canvas horizontally. If you are working traditionally, look at your picture in a mirror, or hold your paper up to the light backwards. You will see errors that are not otherwise visible. Often your picture will look skewed (pushed diagonally).

2) Clean up your lines. Unless you plan to have a detailed, textured image, lines need to be smooth and without excess strokes. There are two main purposes of lines - to define shape (http://www.icefox-studios.net/centaur_ink.gif), and to add texture (http://pratt.edu/~mcorrier/sketch/warface.jpg). If you\'re aiming for a sketchy look, then by all means ignore this, but if you would like to have a polished, finished image, then erase the scribbles you don\'t need, and vary your line width. It prevents even simple line art from looking flat. To do that, you\'re going to have to think of a light source, a direction the light is shining from, and then figure out where the image is going to be darker, and make your lines thicker there.

3) If your image is more sketchy/texturized than pure line art, coloring it in any paint program will only take away from it. So unless you ink your picture, or at least erase extra pencil lines and make the others darker, you better leave it without color. Otherwise, the next step is either separating your line art from your background, or painting over it and letting your lines show through. This means no white spots where the lines and color meet. Again, think of a light source, and concentrate on your lights and darks to avoid having a flat picture. Also, don\'t blur colors all the time. Avoid soft-edge brushes and pick some hard ones. If you smudge too much, it will look washed out.

4) Color choice. Think of natural colors, and complementary colors. Study the color wheel. For example, don\'t color the body of a creature blue then have it quickly fade to red. While nature can have a lot of bright colors and surprises, they are always well-matched. Think of where your creature will live. In the desert? Choose warm colors, such as yellows, reds, oranges, browns, etc. In the forest? Choose yellows, greens, and browns, with perhaps red for decorative elements if its in the tropics. In the ocean? Stick to cool colors, such as violets and  blues. It\'ll make a difference.

5) To make it really well-done, don\'t paint on a white background! The color and value surrounding any area you are working on affects your perception of color and value. A red background makes your subject look green, a light background makes your subject appear dark, etc. Rather than a white canvas, start with a neutral tone, like a grey or beige. If your picture is going to have a lot of red in it, you could start with a medium red. Once you have a background color in place, lay down flat areas of color for each object in your picture. By defining the correct colors as early as possible, you can see how the colors will interact when the picture is finished.

6) Do not create lights and shadowed areas using white and black. This creates a very dull and artificial appearance and assumes that the light source is pure white. Most light is colored. The highlights on an object will be tinted with the color of the light, and the shadows will be tinted with the complementary or opposite color. Afternoon sunlight, for example is yellow, and will cast blue-purple shadows. Fluorescent light is blue-green, which casts a slightly orange shadow.


Think that\'s all for now, hope it helps :)
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« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2004, 09:11:32 pm »
thanks for you tips but im french and i have not understand all that you says :(

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« Reply #9 on: September 17, 2004, 12:57:59 am »
... Well then. That makes things a little hard. Try using a translator? XD http://dictionary.reference.com/translate/text.html
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« Reply #10 on: September 17, 2004, 02:06:20 am »
:D

Karyuu went all-out on that. If I could sketch anything better than a stick figure, I would say thanks for the tips.