i like how yours looks moogue but i can see why the devs rejected it. it really doesnt describe the game at all. while the one in AB, MB and the one for CB have characters that appear in the game and describe the type of game that Planeshift is, yours just shows ripples. While this is asthetically pleasing (i might use it when cb come out anyways just because it looks so nice) it doesnt tell the person anything about the world they are about to enter. I mean lets face the fact that most newbs dont read anything into the game before they make a character and play the game.