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Kuiper7986

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Mogura fighting a Dragon (Short Story)
« on: October 27, 2004, 05:33:24 pm »
She stood there looking over the vastness of Yliakum. The Azure Sun was not glowing as strongly as it should be and the smell of death lurked in the air. Hearing loud stomps becoming more suttle she put on her silver armor forged from the best blacksmith in Yliakum and took out her shortsword from her scabbard, she checked it and it was sharp, she thought to herself,\"No.\" She put the sword away and looked at her claws.

Mogura wasn\'t a normal Enkidukai, she had ripped out her weak organic claws and made synthetic claws made of Terithite. A  purple raw metal in Yliakum that is so powerful it can break a dragon\'s tooth.

The Fog dissapated, she looked in front of her, and there was the biggest Blue Dragon she had ever seen stood in front of her. The Dragon quickly used its tail and hit Mogura sending her flying 10 feet in the air, then started charging at her again. Mogura was able to recover and started charging at the Dragon. The Dragon used its teeth to bite her, but she dodged the attack, she jumped on top of the dragons head and started piercing and swiping at the dragons head.

The Dragon roared in pain and it started to lose its balance, then it fell. Mogura stopped attacking, took a deep breath, and then jumped off the Dragon\'s head. Mogura took a small empty bottle from her leather backpack and using her claws she poked the the Dragon\'s eye and started collecting the blood of the Dragon. She had the bottle and drank a sip of the blood. She could feel the dragon\'s spirit giving her energy...

EDIT: sorry just some typos..

« Last Edit: October 28, 2004, 03:35:21 am by Kuiper7986 »
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« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2004, 06:04:51 pm »
Nice, I like this story.
One problem... no dragons in Yliakum so I heard?
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« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2004, 06:17:27 pm »
NO MILK!?!

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« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2004, 06:32:16 pm »
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NO MILK!?!
Holy Sep on a stick! 8o
\'tis true! There is no milk! How did she manage to kill the dragon without spilling some milk first? ?(

And drinking blood of her enemies? Now that\'s something I\'d respect ;)

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« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2004, 12:42:40 am »
Go Dragon GO! Go Dragon Go!

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Hehe

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Great story
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« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2004, 02:20:48 am »
Wow, another story about/with Moogie in it... :rolleyes: :P

It\'s a pretty god story, but not what I would expect from ol\' Moogie. Well, an occasional twist is good for the mind to keep sharp and not judge people for how they are.... :-/

That makes no sense, so I am gonna leave it at, \"Not what I expected, but surprise is well, surprising. :P\"
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« Reply #6 on: October 28, 2004, 05:46:32 pm »
A while ago, I would not have understood the \'milk\' thing, but I saw a transcript of the conversation. She\'ll be mad if she sees this... you\'d better run...
Moogie, drink blood? Not sure what to make of that.
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« Reply #7 on: October 31, 2004, 11:57:42 pm »
Erm... I didn\'t give you permission to use my character in a story... especially one which shows the absolute mirror-image of what she\'s really like... :P

Nevertheless, I guess it\'s nicely written.





PS: ...I drank some milk today... and nothing blew up! 8o
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« Reply #8 on: November 01, 2004, 12:33:04 am »
sorry next time I\'ll ask....
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« Reply #9 on: November 01, 2004, 02:26:09 am »
Haha, Moogie\'s mad at you now. Not good.  :]

Anyway, the blood drinking is kinda... wierd.
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« Reply #10 on: November 01, 2004, 02:30:58 am »
Well really, it\'s a good story and all, but it\'s just entirely not suited to my character. For one thing, she would never wear a suit of armour, nor would she carry or use a sword. I myself love dragons to bits and would rather kill the dragonslayers. :P

Just replace the name with someone else, and this short story would be great. :)
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« Reply #11 on: November 01, 2004, 03:44:49 am »
Mmmm blood.... tastey :)
Kuiper you really should have known better than to include Mogura in such a story unless of course if Mogura has an evil twin....
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« Reply #12 on: November 01, 2004, 03:50:03 am »
I do have a sort of evil alt character (Iris Osiris), and she is infact vampiric... but even still, she doesn\'t use a sword either. She uses a whip. :D
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« Reply #13 on: November 01, 2004, 04:34:25 am »
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I myself love dragons to bits and would rather kill the dragonslayers. :P

I second that.
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« Reply #14 on: November 01, 2004, 11:43:20 pm »
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I do have a sort of evil alt character (Iris Osiris), and she is infact vampiric... but even still, she doesn\'t use a sword either. She uses a whip. :D


Bet Sep loves that one.

And Great story...write write more
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