Forgotten Tale

[Krayn]

You ask who i am? Well, i don\'t quite know who I am.  But there is one thing i know i am forgotten. Yes. No friend. No family. No nothing.  I am known as  Krayn. But is that really my name?  Well i am on a journy to find my idenity.


        How do you like the intro?

[Krayn]

If you like it so far i will right the story

[Efflixi Aduro]

Its 5 centances... how bout a paragraph or so.

[DepthBlade]

Hey back off, I support any creative writing and so should everyone. Yes continue to write looking good so far

[Efflixi Aduro]

No I never said it was bad I was saying we need mor if we want to judge it. Keep writing it

[Krayn]

That is an intro. You know a teaser.  I do something like that for every story before I write it.

[Krayn]

Krayn clumsily stumbled out of bed.  This was his day to become a warrior. He was about to take a journey that no one in his family had suceeded.  He was going to defeat the Jakit.  A villain that controlled millions of orks. He walked over to the kitchen and saw his mom cooking pancakes.  
  \"Krayn, since this is a special occasion i whipped you up some pancakes.\"his mom said joyfully
  \"mhhhhhhhmmmm.  My favorite.\" The Krayn said enthusiastically.  
  His brother was stumbling around because he was trying to fly and his father was glued to the newspaper. Then all of a sudden he heard the cry of an ork.  His parent motion him to take his brother and run.  He flew out of the house and into the soaring around.  Then he saw an Ork with a bow. It shot an arrow right through his wings.  Krayn shot down and down to the ground.  His brother was crying and that is the last he remembered when he hit the ground he fell uncousios.

[Krayn]

should i continue my story?

[Thenior]

hmmm, maybe take out the modern parts.... Pancakes (while pancakes are very old, it gives the story a non-old feeling), newspaper, etc. Sounds like you are decent at writing, though unconcious was spelled wrong, and it is orcs not orks, but you may have one that to add a twist.



But I thought you said you forgot the tale?

[Krayn]

well there are different ways to spell orcs. Orks are orcs but more of orge type people.

[Krayn]

Ok i havent been writing for a while ok so dont sue me

    Krayn slowly open his eyes and looked around.  He saw a table with  medicine on it, a window and a Enkidukai.  

  He quickly sprung to his feet \"Who are you and where am I?\"

   The enkidukai looked at him \" I am Lora and your in Hyldaa Plaza.\"

  \"Hyldaa Plaza?\"He asked dazed

   She looked at him sympathically \"Well you would know what this was but saldy you have a bad case of memory loss.\"

  \"How?\" He asked as he walked over to her.

  \"Well, all we know is that you fell from a great distance on your head. How you ar alive. We don\'t know.\"She remarked.

   To be continued....

  How you like it so far.