It was good and all, but it\'s the same storyline (well half of one) that everyone talks about. So, it wasn\'t original...I expected it to be somewhat like that, and it was *somewhat* funny. I am using that term lightly here, too. Maybe you should think of something original (most stories are taken) but if you could make me laugh, then I, personally, think you will be victorious.
Now, don\'t get me wrong. It was a good flash, with alright animations considering you used Paint. (You did...right? If not, we will have to kill you.) It just wasn\'t that funny, and I think you hinted on that in a reply, but I am too lazy to quote it or even see if I was right, so yeah...
By the way, did you do all the voices? Or, did you have a friend or someone else do them...or help you with them? Because the voices, like Karyuu said, were the best part.