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thingythekid

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« on: January 23, 2005, 09:49:33 pm »
Here is a pic of an Elven Swordsman that I drew:

http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/elvenswordsman.html
That\'s probably it until the weekend comes again. :D
You\'re welcome to comment and criticise!
*15/02/05 - All images moved and thumbnailed due to bandwidth problems and loading times - click thumbnails to view full-sized image*
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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2005, 10:19:50 pm »
A good look at this site: http://www.portrait-artist.org/ would probably help your drawing a lot. You get proportions right, but detail, like the eyes and that, aren\'t drawn properly.
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« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2005, 10:23:53 pm »
shouldnt draw on the back of work... tisk tisk...

doesnt look too bad, but doesnt that great either... well keep at it and soon you\'ll be better :)
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« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2005, 11:23:33 pm »
Here\'s another (considerably weaker) sketch of a Gnome:

http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/gnome.html
He\'s a little ticked off.
 Not really PlaneShift, but someone asked me to do it for them.

 Thanks for the tip about http://www.portrait-artist.org, although I have yet to produce some displayable work from what I\'ve learnt. And I always draw on the back of work. So long as it\'s not mine. ;)

I\'ll probably scan in an eye tomorrow to show you. Ach, I need some proper pencils...
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« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2005, 09:07:05 pm »
On the gnome the left arm is too short, and on the right arm the forearm is considerably longer than the upper arm.

Please, don\'t take my criticism as a downer to your work though, I know lots of ppl who can\'t draw that well ^_^

The hardest part of drawing, IMO, is getting the courage to be proud of your work and show it to others.
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2005, 08:14:34 pm »
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On the gnome the left arm is too short, and on the right arm the forearm is considerably longer than the upper arm.


Thanks for the constructive criticism! That was where I kinda messed up the foreshortening and things... Anyways, here\'s an eye:

http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/eye.html
I think I drew it much better than previously...

Next up: A Dwarf...
I\'m trying to post only when I have a sketch to show for it so the next one may be a while.

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Please, don\'t take my criticism as a downer to your work though


No worries. I can take criticism - it helps me to learn. ;)
[edit]Typos... The typos...[/edit]
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« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2005, 09:09:09 pm »
Yes! That eye is well drawn!
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« Reply #7 on: February 13, 2005, 07:42:45 pm »
Sorry about the long gap between posts - I\'ve been very busy. Anyway:

http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/dwarf.html
I think it\'s my best yet. Tell me if the image actually displays on this page or not. Comment and criticise at will. Or at me. Whichever. :P

[edit] Oh yeah, I got some pencils yesterday as well, which kinda helped a lot.:D[/edit]
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« Reply #8 on: February 13, 2005, 09:39:01 pm »
i think thats your best one.and you didnt do it on the back of work paper this time =D
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« Reply #9 on: February 13, 2005, 10:32:26 pm »
Yeah it works on that other page... the head is a little big for even a dwarf, but it looks good.
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« Reply #10 on: February 13, 2005, 10:56:02 pm »
The dwarf looks... mellow. You don\'t see that very often. :P

Pretty good work, better than I could do.  :(
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« Reply #11 on: February 14, 2005, 12:47:49 pm »
Woohoo! People are interested.
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the head is a little big for even a dwarf, but it looks good.

Thanks Frarda, I did kinda wonder about that.
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I think that\'s your best one.

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Pretty good work, better than what I could do. :(

I don\'t think that you should compare yourself to other people, because the only way you can really see the level of skill you have is by looking at what you\'re doing now and what you did, let\'s say, 6 months ago. That way, you can see how much you have improved, rather than how different your style is to someone elses. But thanks for saying it was good. :P Also, I\'d quite like to see your work. So post it - posting pics in my thread won\'t cause a nuclear holocaust. I don\'t think so, anyway.

Anyways, as I know you all love \'em, here\'s an Enkidukai. *first drawing in a new sketchbook :D*

http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/fenki.html
[note]She went through a gender change about halfway through because I decided I needed to practice drawing women.[/note]
Fire away!
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« Reply #12 on: February 15, 2005, 03:13:42 pm »
Well, seems like people  don\'t like them after all. :P
Anyways, I drew another picture and coloured it rather badly:


http://www.geocities.com/phishmod/swordtorch.html
Also, his left side is quite badly off because I forgot about it. Oh well ;).

And another Enki to colour if you feel so inclined:

http://www.geocities.com/enki2.html

Oh yes, I almost forgot:
*BUMP*
:P
[edit] New sig - What do you think of it? [/edit]
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« Reply #13 on: February 16, 2005, 01:59:40 am »
I can\'t take out a pencil and just sketch something. I always end up frusterated because it looks so different that how I want it to, so I rarely ever sit down and practice. I prefer \"computer art.\"

I make sigs for people... A few examples
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/ZephyrusSig.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/ExaeroSig2.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/ExaeroSig.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/AevanderiellSig.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/RhamousSig.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/KeungSig.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/Depthblade%20Sig.jpg

Colored this one for Phinehas, sketched by Empanado
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/Phinehas.jpg

A recent coloring of a self portrait sketched by Xythe
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/Ice.jpg

Promotional posters for my guild.  :rolleyes:
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/MercenaryGuildPoster.jpg
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/MercenaryGuildPoster2.jpg

Special effects added to a sword...
http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/images/LS.jpg

Well, you get the idea.
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« Reply #14 on: February 16, 2005, 04:07:59 am »
Ooh ooh I want to steal thingythekid\'s thread too! ...No wait... no I don\'t.


thingythekid: Nice work, I like the poses, keep it up. :)
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