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Merdarion

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Grammatical Errors
« on: February 10, 2005, 09:11:57 pm »
Well I know that this thread is weak, but I will ask you anyways.

Could you possibly correct any grammatical and in matter of typing right,

It may seem ridiculus to you, but well I think that it would really help me with my english (Well for I am a 14 year old austrian who has english as a must-to-learn thingy)


See it as call for assistance.
« Last Edit: February 10, 2005, 09:14:51 pm by Merdarion »
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2005, 10:15:38 pm »
Hello good sir,

I guess I can type in proper english, if it helps you. Since I am American I should have no problem. I just hope my little contribution will help.

Have a good day. :)
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2005, 10:21:36 pm »
Thank you very much, its pretty important for me to know when i make an mistake.
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2005, 03:22:25 am »
What do you mean? Correct the errors that you make or what? Does it include spelling also? I read your first post really fast because that color hurts my eyes. X(

By the way, I can help with stuff if you want me to. If you wanted us to correct mistakes that you make in posts are something then, *ridiculous. ;) And for not being a native speaker, you speak (or at least type it) very well.

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« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2005, 03:54:06 am »
You\'re inviting grammar nazis to dinner?
I think I\'ll join in on this.
Most people will be happy to help someone learn english.
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« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2005, 06:24:23 am »
I will be more than happy to help you. :D

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« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2005, 07:23:09 am »
If this is just you wanting help with your English then I will be glad to help; otherwise complaining about other peoples? spelling and grammar is a good way to start a fight.



(Note: A before consonants and an before vowels)
« Last Edit: February 11, 2005, 07:23:52 am by Hatchnet »

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« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2005, 07:42:45 am »
No no, I wasnt complaining about anyone else, just requestin help with my english.

Thank you all!
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2005, 12:26:46 pm »
actually your english is very good, i wouldent have noticed a problem with it.

to tell you the truth....i didnt know how to spell english...i thought it was spelt englesh or enlgish...?

and im from australia (not austria) with an education lol

englesh (english)  help is need by all of us.
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« Reply #9 on: February 12, 2005, 03:21:12 am »
You have unleashed me :D ... My first correction: capitalize your \"I\"\'s. I know most people online don\'t do it (including me on occasion :) ), but it is proper English.
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« Reply #10 on: February 12, 2005, 04:56:07 am »
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Originally posted by davo
actually your english is very good, i wouldent have noticed a problem with it.

to tell you the truth....i didnt know how to spell english...i thought it was spelt englesh or enlgish...?

and im from australia (not austria) with an education lol

englesh (english)  help is need by all of us.


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Should have been posted by davo
Actually your English is very good, I wouldn\'t have noticed a problem with it.

To tell you the truth, I didn\'t know how to spell \"English.\" I thought it was spelt \"englesh\" or \"enlgish.\"

I\'m from Australia (not Austria) with an education.

Englesh (english)  help is need by all of us.


Ok, I\'m not even sure about this phrase...
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Actually your English is very good


Yes, I know I\'m correcting davo and not Merdarion. :rolleyes:

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« Reply #11 on: February 12, 2005, 06:08:03 am »
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Originally posted by Icefalcon
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Should have been posted by davo

To tell you the truth, I didn\'t know how to spell \"English.\" I thought it was spelt \"englesh\" or \"enlgish.\"

I\'m from Australia (not Austria) with an education.

Englesh (english)  help is need by all of us.



\"Spelled\" is more commonly used than \"spelt\" is. I think it is preffered by most English Teachers/Professors/Majors. \"Spelt\" is kind of like a slang term for \"spelled\" - what you should use in a formal letter.

And \"need\" should be \"needed\" because it is a past participle. (I think that is the term for it. If it isn\'t then correct me please. I just know it has to be \"needed\" and not \"need\") and \"need\" is not a past participle.

EDIT: I never knew \") made a winking smiley. Also, before you say it doesn\'t, it is because I disabled smileys for this post so hah!
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« Reply #12 on: February 12, 2005, 07:38:03 am »
If you had looked at your post, you would have seen that it obviously doesn\'t on these boards :D
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« Reply #13 on: February 12, 2005, 07:43:28 am »
thanks Jelly Werker I often forgot to write \"I\" as \"I\"
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #14 on: February 12, 2005, 04:07:56 pm »
*Scrolls up.*

Wow, I wonder if Sirvion expected all those answers when he wrote this. Anyway... to the business at hand...

I am as much a grammar and spelling freak as anyone here, but I prefer to get straight to the heart of the matter.

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We will purge the ignorance from your very soul!!!