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The nine lives of Drakkar Azzhiranir
« on: March 07, 2005, 11:43:48 pm »
A cold and malicious gale whipped the sparse bushes that bordered the desolate country road. The sand had long since turned into yellow, slippery mud, and as Drakkar struggled uphill towards the fifth level carrying a soaked sack swung over his shoulder, his paws were almost swept away by the current of muddy rainwater running though the carttracks down into the depth behind him. A mere man or elf would have been thrown down by the merciless wind and rain already, but Drakkar was made of sterner stuff and maintained his balance on the shifty road. But how he hated this cold and wet rain, how he hated what it did to his grizzling fur, and how he hated the people that drove him on. Drakkar was good at hate these days - Hate nourished him, sent him down to the flatlands every night, and up again carrying large sacks full of food, treasure, and the occasional live animal or even child, leaving behind a trail of destruction. For Drakkar remembered his predatorial ancestry in every nerve of his aging but still powerful and agile body, and while his way of hunting was quite different from that of his ancestors, his inborn ferocity, cunning and determination had not changed at all. The initial reason for his hatred he sometimes even forgot, driven half mad by grief and anger. The hatred was all that mattered, and it nourished him, kept him alive. And now he carried the one thing he had looked for for months, found it in the house of the man he hated second most. The enemy he killed today.

It had been a good hunt. He had come down from his secret cave during the previous night, crouching from shadow to shadow and avoiding the eerie and faint glow from the crystal. Unseen and unheard, he reached the small town in the valley. He sneaked up to the pallissade wall at a place where a small stone guard tower interrupted the row of poles. The two guards on top had foolishly built a fire to keep warm, and therefore didn\'t see anything past a few yards of illuminated towertop. Drakkar however noticed everything that happened on top of the tower and waited until the guards changed. Then he stealthily climbed up along the back of the tower and quietly slipped over the battlement. The guards  didn\'t notice him until he\'d torn out their throats and left them where they fell. He knew that from this moment he\'d have two hours before the dead guards would be noticed by the next shift and wasted no time to get to the house of Baruk, the smith. Oh, the sweetness of vengeance! He sneaked up to the bedroom window of the smith\'s son and climbed in. A son for a son! With one strike of his mighty paw he knocked the child unconscious, or even dead - he didn\'t care, but quickly bound and gagged it, just to be sure. He then sneaked through the door and across the corridor to where the smith and his wife slept. Here, Drakkar repeated his treatment of the child for the smith and his son. Adrenalin coursed through his veins as the smell of blood emanated from the deep wound in the smith\'s face: Drakkar had been unable to keep his claws retracted and savioured the moment. For a moment he considered killing them all there and then, but he managed to stick to his plan and carefully placed the three unconscious figures in a circle on the bed. He then headed downstairs, where he piled every piece of furniture, everything that could burn, onto a big heap directly below the bedroom while stuffing any food and valuables into a big sack.

Then he found it. hidden underneath a cupboard that had not been moved for years, there was the one thing Drakkar never forgot about. Tears filled his green eyes as he looked upon the thing that ruined his son - The thing that symbolized all his misery, his pain and his hatred. He grabbed it and threw it into the sack, vowing no Enkidukai would ever wear it again. Then he drew a smouldering log out of the dying fire and stuffed into the heap of furniture, grabbed his sack and sneaked out into the night.

Out on the street, he suddenly noticed a patrol of city guards marching down the street. They couldn\'t be allowed to investigate the smithee! Drakkar sneaked along a few houses, grabbed a throwing knife, and sent it straight into to man\'s unprotected neck. Then he ran off into the night. Making sure he stayed well out of range of the crossbows while allowing the guards to follow him, he ran up the stairs of the watchtower and jumped off. The drop hurt him badly, but he limped off into the night, listening to the sounds of pursuit. Blast! It seemed this night they wouldn\'t allow him to get away easily. The whole town surged to life as alarm bells ringed. Satisfied, he noticed the meter-high flames of the burning smithee as they were swept over the town by an intensifying surge of wind.

\"Now it\'s between us, at last\", Drakkar said to the sack he held in his hand. \"This time I will make sure you end up where nobody will ever find you. You took everything from me already! You cannot control me anymore!\"

The sack didn\'t answer, but the wind whipped him harder and harder. Thunder struck, and the fields of corn and rye glowed dark yellow illuminated by the burning town. The citizens had been unable to contain the fires fed by the raging wind and could only wait, begging for the rain to fall. And then, when half the town had burned to the ground, rain it did.

On the slippery country road through the hills towards the safe forests still high above him, towards the dry and sheltered cave where his secret lair was located, Drakkar knew he was safe from the wrath of the people, and he decided to seek shelter against the ever-intensifying gale. The farms and fields became ever sparser and were replaced by tree-covered hill sides and steep cliffs where the earth had slid down the ever steeper slope. The going became ever more rough, and he was forced to climb on all fours, holding his sack between his teeth.

As Drakkar reached the top of a steep hill, the tallest in the surroundings, he became aware of a presence ahead he had not felt for a long time. He looked up in despair, and against the blinding gale he just discerned a tall and stately figure on the road ahead, down on the other side of the hill. How could it be? Cursing, Drakkar screamed out against the rage of the storm: \"You, Melchor, you will never get it back!\". But the Lemur Melchor approached with alarming speed, seemingly unhampered by the weather, staff pointed forwards in the direction of Drakkar. Despairing, Drakkar prayed to Talad, the first prayer in many years. \"Talad, save me once, just once! I have suffered so much! Don\'t let it be all in vain. Take me, and take it when you take me. Don\'t let him have it back and ruin the life of another. Are the lives of my family not enough?\"

As Drakkar stood there on the highest hilltop in the surroundings, a massive lightning strike surged down and incinerated the entire top of the watersoaked hill, which started to slide down into the valley below. Melchor turned, but soon found out that an avalanche cannot be outrun. Cursing, he was overrun by mud, crushed and buried under tonnes of stone. Dying he cast his final spell, but it sizzled into the night. It\'s target, Drakkar, had left the world of the living as soon as the lightning struck. And the collar, due to it\'s magical properties impervious to the damage of a mere lightning blast, ended up buried next to the decaying body of Melchor, where it awaits the countless aeons until someone, somewhere, drags it out of the mud and starts this story again.

Thus ended the last life of Drakkar Azzhiranir

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« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2005, 04:09:15 pm »
Very nice story. In fact, I would have to call it excellent. Well thought out and written. Hope to see more from you.

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« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2005, 04:45:17 pm »
*claps*

Really, very impressively written.

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« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2005, 09:09:09 pm »
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Very nice story. In fact, I would have to call it excellent. Well thought out and written. Hope to see more from you.


Thanks :) Still have to write 8 more lives, so I\'ll bother you again with the next story once I have spare time left and feel like writing more... Probably tonight, the next story just wants to get out and there is no way I\'m going to be able to stop it :P

By the way, I appreciate any constructive criticism anyone has to offer... First, English is not my native language and there are bound to be some expressions and grammatical constructions that seem odd to someone to whom english comes more natural. Second, I don\'t have much experience in  online RPGing and in the world of planeshift. and if I get the setting wrong somewhere, I\'d be happy to know.
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« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2005, 11:31:37 pm »
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Originally posted by Esthurin
By the way, I appreciate any constructive criticism anyone has to offer... First, English is not my native language and there are bound to be some expressions and grammatical constructions that seem odd to someone to whom english comes more natural. Second, I don\'t have much experience in  online RPGing and in the world of planeshift. and if I get the setting wrong somewhere, I\'d be happy to know.

*Cries with head in hands*

You make me feel so... inadequate.

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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2005, 12:05:02 am »
Leaning against the weather-worn and lichen-covered stone of the locked tower room he was currently residing in, Drakkar looked towards the distant marketplace through the small barred window, his tear-filled eyes fixed on a small patch of brown fur down far below. The joy of finally having found back his son struggled against the anger of seeing what had been cruelly inflicted upon him. Even from up here he could see his son lacked one of his legs and that his fur had disappeared from a large part of his body. But then, who cared if an enkidukai lived or died, Drakkar thought bitterly. Even better if your slave lost his claws, strength and will to resist due to malnutrition. Meat was too expensive anyway.

Drakkar longed to jump out of the window and run towards the market, to tear out the heart of the man who broke his son. However, Drakkar was prey now instead of hunter, captured prey. Old instincts took over and he repressed all thoughts of his son and instead applied them to the task at hand: To escape from this wretched prison tower before they mutilated him even worse than his son. He knew he was on his own in these cruel lands, this city of doom for all that had pointy ears and furry tails. And for him, the notorious vagabond, there could be only one fate: Better than slavery, death did not seem so unattractive to Drakkar anymore, and secretly he wondered what would happen after it. He\'d never got the chance to find out... Always a reason to make the sacrifice and come back. He always had a son to care for, and enemies to kill.  

So, how to get out? The walls of the tower were made out of solid rock. However, the mortar around one the bars shutting the single small window was crumbling and he had been able to prise it out. Unfortunately the hole was just too small for him to squeeze through, and the drop beyond would have killed him anyway. But at least he was now armed with a rusty iron bar. The door was made out of steel reinforced oak and looked as solid as the thick granite walls around him. The room was square, and floor and ceiling were constructed out of the same sturdy oak as the door. Even though the wind blowed freely into the roam and water leaked everywhere through the leaky tiled roof, the oak still held strong. There only seemed to be one way out: Through the door, which meant fighting the three guards who brought him bread and water a few times last week. Bread! As if he ate ground remains of dead plants like common prey.

When Drakkar heard footsteps on the creaky stairways later that night, he had thought out his plan. He carefully took his bar between his jaws, ignoring the awful taste. He jumped up, and firmly hammered his two front claws into the hard wood of the beams of the ceiling above the door.  He then swung his legs up to the ceiling and after a few missed tries succeeded in grabbing the beam, hanging by all fours from the ceiling. He hardly dared to breathe, and his claws already started aching.

Soon, surprised cries came out of the hallway beyond the door. \"He\'s gone! A bar has gone missing in the window! Geran, alert the guards!\". Drakkar heard one of the guards running down the stairs and knew he had to get out before Geran returned. Yet the guards had crossbows and Drakkar had to be able to get them both at once. Wait, and wait, and be quiet... The door creaked open and one of the guards carefully entered the room. Fortunately he didn\'t look up towards the ceiling, but instead scanned all the corners of the room before proceeding towards the window. The guard carefully examined the other bars and looked down. \"Dunno Fred... Looks like an awful small window, and I don\'t think the beast could\'ve got through these bars. Take a look yerself\".

As the guard called Fred walked into the cell, Drakkar finally relieved his aching claws and hit the guard on the head in Mid-air with the bar. This guard dropped to the ground with a surprised yell, but Drakkar had already jumped at the first guard, and smashed him on the back of the head. Within a few seconds, it was all over. After tearing out the guards\' throats, just to be sure, Drakkar ran down the stairs. Free at last! But how to get out of the city, and towards his son? Drakkar knew he only had minutes before the guards would be back. Halfway down the tower, an unbarred window overlooked a flat roof. Only a small alley separated the two, and Drakkar did not hesitate. He jumped out of the window and landed on all fours on the roof. From there, he quickly jumped down into the shady alley.

Drakkar sped from alley to alley, trying to stay away from the whistles that the guards used to locate each other. More and more whistles were blown, and although the guards were still some way off Drakkar knew he had to get out of the city quickly. But then, he saw something that made him forget about that. In a gutter in one of the darkest alleys, a ragged creature lay motionless. Even though most of it\'s fur had gone, Drakkar knew it\'s pattern and colour by heart. \"Ziro, my son!\", he called out, and ran towards the body, which slowly rose from where it lie. \"Drakkar? Father? Are you still alive?\". Drakkar embraced his son and held him tight, and for a long moment they savioured each other\'s body and smell, all other things forgotten. Happiness spread through Drakkars being, a feeling he hadn\'t felt for a long time. But soon reality returned. His son was weak, too weak, but he could not think about that, not now. \"You are free, Ziro! Run with me, we have to get out before the guards find us. Get on my back and I will carry you out\".

His threadbare son on his back, Drakkar ran off as fast as he could towards the river. Though he hated swimming, the river seemed to be the only way out of town as all gates would probably have closed already. \"How did you get away, my son? That collar...\". \"I was left to die in that gutter when I fell there out of exhaustion, father. Dukar just took the collar and left, without even glancing back. I... don\'t know if I will make it, father\". \"You must, my son, you must!\". But deep in his heart, Drakkar knew it was hopeless. He already felt his son would die during that first embrace.

They sped through alley after alley, and were already close to the river when suddenly they ran into a guard, who aimed his crossbow and shouted \"halt!\". A mere 5 yards in front of the guard, Drakkar pulled to a halt. The guard smiled as he blew his whistle, all the time keeping his crossbow aimed at Drakkar\'s heart.

Ziro tensed his ravaged muscles once more and half jumped, half fell from Drakkar\'s back towards the guard. The guard did not hesitate and fired his bolt straight into Ziro\'s chest. Ziro didn\'t even sigh and dropped to the ground, motionless. Drakkar however immediately jumped over his son\'s body and slew the guard with three swift strokes from his paws. Then he turned to look at Ziro, pain tearing his brain apart as he saw the last vestiges of life flowing from his beloved son\'s body. Ziro had gone towards the next world, and Drakkar would not be able to save him again.

Drakkar ran off, and though his mind had shattered he ended up at the river and jumped in, oblivious to the cold water that surrounded him. He swam and swam and almost drifted out of town when a guard at the riverside shouted and aimed. A shaft of fire seemed to penetrate his side and blinded with pain he drifted out of town and into the safety of the plains beyond. He washed up at the first turn of the river and lay motionless, spread out on the riverbank. There, he felt the last life flowing out of his body as, again, he died, the realisation of failure, failure yet again, filled his brain.

An eternity passed, and Drakkar awoke floating in an ethereal mist. A familar malign being looked upon him, and spoke: \"Verily thou hast returned to my realm yet again, Drakkar Azzhiranir. What carriest thee this time for me? or is it thy time at last to pass on to yonder world, and forsake the world of the living?\".

Drakkar burned with hatred, hatred for the people who ruined him competing with hatred for the being that took so much from him already. But his hatred for the people won, and with great reluctance he removed his medallion. The memory of how his wife, his beloved Serinah, presented it to him on their wedding day maddened him, but he knew he could not die - not yet. He had to repay the sacrifice of his son and yearned for revenge himself. He threw the medallion at the evil spirit in front of him. \"Begone, you greatest evil of all. Not yet shall you claim my immortal soul!\". And though the light of the world filled his eyes again as he struggled, physically healed, back onto his feet on the river bank, his mind had turned totally black and never again would light be shed inside it\'s warped confines.
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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2005, 07:44:37 am »
Missed this while my PC was down. Sorry.

Bravo! You have my attention now. That was most excellent. A step up from even the first. That leaves seven lives. I hope you haven\'t given up. I await more.

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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2005, 11:57:02 am »
I actually tried to write the 7th life once already, but discarded it after the first few paragraphs because it wasn\'t good enough... I am going to give it another go, once I have both time and mood to write :)
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« Reply #8 on: May 10, 2005, 11:34:17 pm »
\"The grand and glorious market of Keruna\", Drakkar thought cynically. A few smoking heaps of burnt wood, some broken pottery, cutlery, chains and other scattered signs of recent occupation were all that remained of the once thriving market upon which countless slaves had met their masters. Little now remembered of the yelling vendors, screaming and begging slaves and bullying market guards. With grim satisfaction, Drakkar noted the charred remains of the huge pyre that had consumed their bodies. Justice, and vengeance. The liberated slaves had finished what the Klyros army had started. But where was Ziro?

Suddenly, Drakkar heard a soft snapping sound behind him. He spun round and at the same time dodged to the side, just in time to avoid the club which decended towards his head. Drakkar leapt onto the assaulter and threw him down on his back, gripping the man by the throat. Several keys and a pair of manacles rolled out of the man\'s pocket. Now, wasn\'t that interesting? Not all slave traders had died.

\"Screaming won\'t help you now, you know\", Drakkar said to his frightened opponent. \"Before anyone even enters this field, I will help you breathe a little easier\". Drakkar pressed his exposed claws slightly into the man\'s fleshy neck, drawing some bright red blood. The man closed his eyes in fear. \"Your only hope lies with me now. Tell me: Who bought that Enkidukai who was sold a week ago? He was young, had a brown-and-yellow fur, a strong back and was sold by a Lemur wizard. You must have noted him at least.\"

As Drakkar squeezed yet a little harder, the man squeaked: \"Don\'t kill me! Please, I beg you! The Lemur sold the cat to a smith from a town not far from here. The smith comes here every few months to buy a strong slave - I know him. His name is Dukar\".

Drakkar committed this name to his memory. Now, what to do with the slave trader? He deserved to join his brethren on the pyre - But even though Drakkar hated this man, his  conscience hadn\'t totally left him yet and it prevented him to kill a helpless man, one who begged for mercy. Sighing, he grabbed the manacles with his free hand, cuffed the man\'s wrists and took the keys with him. He ignored the screams from the trader and quickly left the market.

For several weeks Drakkar wandered through the countryside in the lush agricultural valley he had entered, asking for the famous smith Dukar. Finally, he arrived at the gates of a small pallisaded town through which a river ran. However, he was forbidden to enter the city by the gate guards. \"We don\'t need no cats here, you filthy beast! Get out of here before we feed you to the dogs!\".

Enkidukai weren\'t well loved in many parts of Yliakum, but Drakkar had never met such a hostile response before. It seemed as if this city had something to hide for him. Drakkar left, deep in thought and already observing the city and wondering how to get in. The pallisade wasn\'t too high, but getting in undetected would be impossible during the day. He would have to wait until night-time.

Drakkar climbed a nearby hill and looked down on the city. Where could the smithy be? With his sharp eyes, he discerned the smoke column arising from the forge and just managed to see an anvil through a window in the building. Satisfied, Drakkar spent the rest of the day waiting and polishing the wonderful coronet he had taken from Melchor\'s strongroom. How he wished he had never been there! Wasn\'t it ironic that the very treasure he coveted most from that raid would now save his son! At dusk Drakkar put the coronet in his bag and climbed over the unguarded palissade. Clearly, the inhabitants of this city did not expect any intruders.

He sped through the deserted streets towards the smithy, taking care not to be seen nor heard. There, he crept up to a window and looked into the smithy. The smith still hammered at a sword on the anvil, assisted by a dejected and underfed looking Ziro. To be near to his son at last! Drakkar leapt up with joy, and ignoring all caution he climbed through the window and addressed the smith.

\"Dear Sir, forgive me this awkward intrusion. I rejoice at the sight of my son, who holds the sword you are forging at this very moment. I have come to bargain for his life. A slave is a valuable asset, and to compensate for his life I have brought you this treasure: Worth ten slaves at least. See the magical gleam which wraps around it, feel the power emanating from it! I beg you, take this and release my son!\". Drakkar prepared himself for the worst.

The smith looked down on Drakkar and for some time remained silent. Finally he said: \"Give me the crown and Ziro can go with you\". Relieved, Drakkar offered the smith his coronet, who put it on a table next to him. \"Now go, you filth\". Drakkar turned and grabbed Ziro by the arm, to leave before the smith changed his mind. Ziro however looked questioning at the smith, who grinned evilly. \"Ah yes, I forgot... The collar. You\'ve just been bought free Ziro, but you don\'t want to leave, do you?\". Ziro desperately struggled to move away from the smith, but every time he gained a step he screamed with pain and moved back again. The smith just laughed and said \"Well, if you won\'t leave, Ziro, make yourself useful for once. Test the sword I just made and kill that filth!\". Drakkar stood paralyzed as despair gripped him. How could he have forgotten about the collar? Ziro looked horrified and struggled to disobey, but the collar was too strong for him. Trembling and against his will he grabbed the sword and stabbed his father in the chest. Drakkar collapsed, his life fading into blackness. Ziro ran towards him but couldn\'t undo what had already been done. Dukar had already turned towards the fire and called: \"Ziro, throw the body out, will you?\". Ziro quickly and silently grabbed the coronet and placed it on his father\'s head before dragging him out of the smithy.

The black void slowly faded into gray mists, and a hollow voice sounded. \"Drakkar Azzhiranir? Wishest thou to enter my realm at last? Or bringest thou the price for prolonged life again?\". Drakkar looked with contempt at the kingly presence floating before him, but also noticed the king was not the only one to wear a crown. He removed his coronet and presented it to the king. \"Here. This is of no use to me anymore now. I MUST go back and free my son\". And even as he spoke, the gray mists faded back into total forgetful darkness.

Drakkar woke up in a gutter outside of the smithy, in the middle of a circle of guards. \"Look! He\'s not dead. He breathes!\", he heard shouting, and felt the tip a halberd prodding between his ribs. He grunted and rose, his mind filled with despair and unable to resist as the guards marched him away.
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« Reply #9 on: May 11, 2005, 06:53:21 am »
:D You have made my day. I have been waiting for this...and haven\'t been disappointed. Another fine addition. I like the way you are working backwards from ending to begining. I know how the story ends, but for once, I am left wondering how it all began. Simply brilliant!

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« Reply #10 on: May 21, 2005, 01:24:58 am »
Well, if you appreciate it so much, I\'m not going to let you wait for another part :) Thanks for the support...



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\"I will see you again, Serinah, whether in this world or beyond that evil spirit which separates us now, I will come back to you. And we will be united with Ziro. I\'ll find him before the end, I promise you\". Tears dropped from Drakkar\'s eyes onto the rough and weathered stone that now marked the final resting place of Serinah Azzhiranir. \"I miss you so! Rest softly now, until we meet again\".

Slowly, Drakkar got up and turned away from the grave. At the edge of the small and peaceful forest clearing he looked back at the stone under the huge oak that dominated the trees around it. Yes, it was a beautiful place, and Serinah would not be disturbed any further here. If only she could have seen this place! Eyes again filling with tears Drakkar turned away and headed back to the road, not even caring whether he would be seen. What did life matter now? He had lost his wife, his beautiful wife! But deep in his heart he knew the reason why he had to go on, why he had had to part from her in the mists beyond time. Ziro was still possessed by that vile sorceror, and it was all Drakkar\'s fault. He could not leave his son to his miserable fate.

Drakkar walked the endless forest, not caring much where exactly he went, nor caring for himself. His mind needed time, time to adjust to the emptiness beside him. He couldn\'t understand his loss and often talked as if she still followed him, listened to him as she had always done. And what had she been killed for? Why had those villains come upon their camp, anyway? Drakkar suspected the hand of his enemy but wasn\'t sure. After all, there were some villains even in the heart of this rarely visited and beautiful old forest.

But slowly, after weeks of wandering and reliving the last moments of his previous life Drakkar was dragged back to reality by his body. He had lost weight and his muscle strength began to fade, forcing him to acknowledge his loss and catch food. And he needed to follow Ziro\'s trail and save him.

At last Drakkar got out of the forests and into civilization. A few farmers hurried to their farms as soon as he approached them. Drakkar felt utterly alone but understood why the farmers fled. His fur was unkept and his clothes torn. And he was enkidukai, of course. \"What prey ever loved it\'s predator?\", Drakkar thought cynically.

He washed himself in a pool and relieved a fat priest of his mantle. That he, the great Drakkar Azzhiranir, widely feared by all with more money than virtue, had to rob some petty clergyman on the roads was a greater humiliation than having to wear these foul-smelling and ugly-looking robes, but at least the risk of being killed on sight somewhat decreased. Now Drakkar was able to inquire some people about his son.

At last he found someone, an old and immobilized man who spent all his days sitting in front of his house. \"A cat, you say? Held by a Lemur? Oh yes, I\'ve seen \'em, them strangers\". He bowed a little closer to Drakkar. \"You see, we doesn\'t like strangers here, stranger. Though of course a priest like you...\" the man shrugged. \"But the cat and the lizzard, they passed only a week ago. Oh yes, I remember \'em well. What an odd pair. How often do you see a cat like you with a collar, eh?\"

A collar! It had to be Ziro. Drakkar thanked the old man and rushed on, hoping to catch up as soon as possible. He pressed on with only a cat-nap every now and then, and inquired in every village he passed. Thus he slowly caught up with his son and the wizard. The days passed, and at every hilltop he reached he looked along the path in front of him, hoping to actually see the wizard and his slave.

At last, he reached the last hill that overlooked a vast, sparsely forested valley. He could see for miles, and followed the path as it wound down in it\'s last descent and crossed the plains. At the very edge of his eyesight he noticed two small figures on the path. Could it be them? Drakkar couldn\'t see, but he felt it. At last, he had found back his son.

But there was something else on the plains too. A large collection of what looked like tents resided next to a crossroads. Drakkar could make out several villages and towns distributed through the plains, but the two figures were clearly headed towards the brightly coloured tents near the crossroads. What could that be? Drakkar had no idea, but he intended to find out. After casting one last look, he set out on the path down the hill.

However, he didn\'t get far. A harsh and somehow distorted voice called down to him, \"Halt! Why does an Enkidukai travel towards the slave market of Keruna?\". Drakkar looked around him, but saw nobody. \"Up, you groundhugger. Speak to me!\" And as Drakkar looked up into the sky, he noticed two flying Klyros up in the air. They were armed with heavy bows and looked terrifying. Drakkar\'s mind raced as he put all pieces in their right position: \"I am pursuing the captor of my son who is being led towards the market right there\", and he pointed down into the valley. \"I must save him!\".

\"Then maybe we can cooperate. You cannot go into the valley by day anyway. The people there are hostile to all that look different. We have come to free our brothers held captive down there, and we will end the days of the slave market of Keruna. We will attack tomorrow night, when our brotherhood is complete. You can look for your son during the attack if you like. And if you kill some traders, even better\".

Drakkar reluctantly agreed. Although he wanted to catch up with his son as quickly as possible, he knew he didn\'t stand a chance against a whole slave market on his own. He slept for the first time in weeks that night, and spent the day studying the valley. It was a magnificent sight: The valley ran on as far as he could see in either direction. In the middle a small winding river slowly flowed from his right to his left. Behind the river and the valley, he saw hills of increasing size and behind these mountains Drakkar could even see the steep cliff of the next level. Many roads wound up against these slopes towards the vineyards that occupied most of the opposing hills.  The landscape somehow was familiar to him to Drakkar had never been here before. Though the view was beautiful, it depressed him. Drakkar knew he would not leave this valley for a long time, and perhaps never. And he felt pain, a new pain as if from memories he did not yet acquire.

When night fell, no one was more anxious to attack than Drakkar himself. He joined the Klyros towards the slave market. There, the Klyros readied their bows, flew into the air, and started the assault. They carried torches and fired burning arrows into the sleeping market. The tents and wood constructions readily burst into flames, and the Klyros coolly picked off the slave traders one by one as they sped around in confusion and panic.

Drakkar entered the terrified and chaotic crowd, carrying two blades. He easily killed alll opposition and hurried through the camp, searching for his son. The longer he searched in vain, the more desperate he became. He started interrogating people at the edge of his blades, but nobody was able to help him. Most were just to scared and confused to even remember anything at all. Finally, the fires had consumed most of the tents and the panic and confusion slowly died down inside the camp as people either died or ran away. Only the jubilant cries of freed slaves remained, but even that faded as the slaves rallied towards the Klyros. The once bristling market town of Keruna had been destroyed.

But still no Ziro. Drakkar sped through the camp and freed many of the slaves himself, always looking for more information. But that he didn\'t find. Finally, he got to the far side of the camp, where one tent was still intact, mysteriously saved from the fire. When Drakkar opened the flap of the tent, he was welcomed and sarcastically bid to come inside.

\"So, Drakkar, my honoured friend. Uninvited you enter yet again? Make yourself at home, as you always do so well. I am afraid there is not much I can present to you this time, even your son has already left me. Alas, he cared for me so well... Do you know he did absolutely everything I asked of him, everything? But as he is gone, do allow me to present you a gift\". Smiling but with eyes filled with malicious glee, Melchor held out a second collar and tossed it towards Drakkar, who caught it and absent-mindedly put it in the pocket of his robe. \"Doesn\'t it look quite like the one that decorates your son. It will look so well on you too, or maybe on your beautiful wife. Oh, how could I forget? I already sent someone to help her feed the worms...\"

Draklar lost all self-discipline and charged even before Melchor had finished speaking. Melchor grabbed his staff and a vicious battle ensued, in which Drakkar slashed again and again at the wizard who had cost him so much. However, the long search and the fury had tired Drakkar and he began to falter under the combined magical and physical attacks of his opponent. But Drakkar had gone berserk now and didn\'t think of giving up.

At last, he made his final mistake. Melchor brought his staff crashing down on Drakkar\'s head, bashing his skull with tremendous and unnatural force. Drakkar at once slipped away into nothingness, the last sound in his ears the mocking laugh of the wizard who killed him for the second time.

Still shaking Drakkar stood before the King of the Underworld. He was still too outraged to even be able to hear what the king said to him, and for some time after the king had finished speaking he still stood there. Then however, as he relived the taunts Melchor had made to him over again, he remembered about the collar and took it out of his pocket to take another look at it. The King watched with greedy eyes and extended his hand to take it. Drakkar let go of the collar, hardly even knowing what he was doing.

As life flowed back into his broken body, some sanity flowed back too. Melchor and all the slave traders had fled the scene of destruction and the Klyros army had retreated together with the slaves. Once again, Drakkar was all alone.
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« Reply #11 on: May 21, 2005, 06:15:58 am »
So we we finally begin to see how it began. Very good job at keeping things tied together.

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« Reply #12 on: May 22, 2005, 12:35:17 am »
Hehe, it\'s fun because I just make up things as I write :P I know I am going to have to cheat at least once by editing an older post... In fact I already did that once for a very minor point. But as this story is fairly modular, I hope it will turn out to be more or less consistent :)
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« Reply #13 on: May 22, 2005, 05:01:13 pm »
I have just read all the parts and I really your style. Though I can imagine that with each previous life it becomes a bit more difficult to keep them linking up properly. So far you\'re doing a great job, keep them coming!
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