Hi
Looking good Demarthl! I like \'em! The second picture reminds me of Moogies latest picture at \'More faces behind players\'-thread.

To Karyuu: I made the same mistake when I first saw this thread. Being such a well educated ma\'am, you may also be aware that your nick \"Karyuu\" resembles the finnish word \"karjuu\", which means \"roars\". I wonder what events have led to the fact that someone from the opposite side of the world knows finnish? Ah, I\'m forgetting my manners, as it is none of my business. Bye!

Back to Demarthl:
I think your tablet drawings look good too. Here\'s what I would add: (I hope it\'s ok to use your drawing as a source)
- Steps -
1.
A) Lightened lower eyelid (usually lower eyelashes don\'t need to be drawn, they\'re so light).
B) Rotated the upper eyelashes to reach more to the sides and less to up.
C) Added a side bump & nostril (women do breathe) to the nose and turned the nose to point more downwards.
D) Added left cheek
2.
A) Lifted eyebrows a little and trimmed them (women tend to pick out unwanted parts of their eyebrows, especially from the middle. Usually the darker the eyebrows, the manlier the look.).
B) Added left forehead.
C) Added gleam to the pupil (an eye is wet). And lifted the right eye few pixels up.
D) Made the lower nose a bit thicker.
3.
A) Added lower face to see how it would fit. (a female chin is usually pretty smooth and not very broad)

Hmm, that\'s how I see it. Just my opinions though.
