Nalair

[anogro]

Ok i am going to try again this time no goofing off and no old stuff only new.

Edited Ranks:

1. Scout
2. Archer
3. Strider
4. Ranger
5. Drow
6. Shadow Ranger
7. Pure Ranger
8. Counsel
9. Elder Ranger
Goal:
no goal yet

Edited: History
no history yet

Edited Alignment: Neutral

Email if you want to join or just critisize it at anogro@yahoo.com

[Cyl]

It still lacks of major features,

the goal is rather an, well ...., common one.  And it would have been prudent if you wrote the history before you posted it here.

It seems that you try hard, but well, ...

I think you have the wrong view on guilds.

Guilds aint groups of people with no special propose, or just a minor one, therfore you have the \"group\" function. A guild is a organization of specialized individua (or individui; individuum sounds like a neutra of o-declination so ot should be -a as nominativ plural, but well I dunno and I really dont care) , groups who represent a force to recognize with.

Some guilds may have the goal to root out evil, to rule the world, to survive,  to provide support, to teach or whatever.

[anogro]

If anyone has a starter sentence then i could work off that for the goal and history.

[Phinehas]

Originally posted by anogro
Ok i am going to try again this time no goofing off and no old stuff only new.

Ranks:

1. Scout
2. Scholar
3. low rep. Mercenary
4. average rep. Mercenary
5. good rep. Mercenary
6. Best rep. Mercenary
7. Guard
8. Advisor
9. Warden

Your ranks are unimaginative to say the least. They are all boring, but ranks 3-6 are awful. Fix this if you want to have any flavour in your guild whatsoever.

Originally posted by anogro
Goal:
Our goal is to help other guilds rise then add them to our treaty so we can grow but the guilds must make a list of rules that they will follow first.

So... you\'re guild exists for the sole purpose of making treaties? I don\'t get how this makes any sense... Who in their right mind thinks, \"Well, I just joined this game, and I want a guild, but I don\'t actually want to DO anything, just have treaties,\"? If anyone reading this has ever actually thought this, don\'t talk to me. Ever.

Originally posted by anogro
How to join:
You will be tested before being able to join our guild of course you will have to reach me first and then ask me but what you will have to do is fight one of the low rep. mercenaries to prove yourself of course if there are none at the point in time then you will get in for free. You will not officially be in the guild until you are tried as a scholar. so work hard to get in so I don\'t get the chance of not letting you in and no bribes if I find out you bribed the advisors then you will be kicked out.

Ok... Besides the fact that anyone who has to read that has to read it twice to try and figure out all the run-on sentences, you need help. I\'m not going to go through it all, because I don\'t care that much. I will, however, say this: if your advisors are so untrustworthy that they\'re likely to accept bribes, then you have a serious problem.

Originally posted by anogro
Edited: History
A group of travelers of all races worked together to build a town only to have it be destroyed by something so then they decided that instead of getting mad over it that they should help others that have had a problem that brought them to bankruptcy and get them back on there feet and they took a vow never to let there friends become enemies and to become a group with the name of all their first initials they were Nostruk, Anseteas, Lodsater, Airseca, Incesac, and Rudfasc. Together they were bound to make there own choices that would determine there goal in life and to recognize each other they bought supplies and armor that made a uniform that has been passed down to all in there ever growing group.

Ok, it looks like you got bored with this before you even started writing... \"Something\" destroyed the town? Pathetic. In general it\'s awful writing, a pretty sad way to come up with a name, and this whole utopian \"let\'s all help each other and get along...\" sounds rather naive.

Originally posted by anogro
and there will be no alignment the member chooses but has to get along with others.

This is non-aligned, and in your case it means you aren\'t confident enough to choose an alignment and stick with it.

You walking a fine line here. I\'m guessing you\'re going to fall and become just another newbie guild that didn\'t make it past two weeks. However, you could shape up, realize that it takes lots of hard work to start a guild, and actually start taking yourself seriously. Your choice.

[anogro]

I actualy am trying my best to revise all of this so that its better but i am having trouble with the history and goal. When i have them i will show them this is my rough draft after all. I\'m glad you didn\'t critisize my guild name after all that and of course i am going to change the ranks since i didn\'t think of them. Thanks for not ruining my whole guild and finally my guild alignment is neutral.

[Under the moon]

Advice for history:

1. Don\'t start with your town/city/vilage/family/world/cookie being destroyed. Been done...way over done.

2. Don\'t start with an uber-godlike-powerfull leader type. Also been done, and cheesy to top it off.

3. Keep it simple. Don\'t go crazy with names. No one will remember them anyways.

4. Do not take liberties with the PS history/story. You will be flamed.

5. Do not create an uber-evil force that your guild is destined to face/destroy/dance with.

6. Do try to make it interesting.

5. I really shouldn\'t give advice while I\'m half asleep.

[anogro]

Thanks for the advice and i am what stands between good and evil i won\'t face either of them.

[Sangwa]

i am what stands between good and evil

You mean neutral right?

And I hate secret stuff. Well, other people\'s secret stuff anyway.

[anogro]

yes i mean neutral and this is a secret to find out all the internal orders and who all is in the guild.

[Annah]

First of all, for god\'s sake change the background color of your home page. It hurts. Hurts so bad. I need time to recover. :|

 Also, your links aren\'t working. Pressing on one, it sends you to a page that\'s located on your hdd.

 Like:

 \"C:\\Documents and Settings\\Anogro Atarel Vexadi\\My Documents\\My Webs\\Goal.htm\"

 You should fix those.

 What can I say more, Good Luck!

[Phinehas]

Originally posted by Annah
First of all, for god\'s sake change the background color of your home page. It hurts. Hurts so bad. I need time to recover. :|

After reading that, I decided to check it out, to make sure you weren\'t exaggerating. What can I say... It took the headache 4 hours to go away...

[Cha0s]

If anyone\'s looking for the secret bit, just select the whole page. You\'ll notice a little bit of the background that stands out. You\'ll need to modify the link though, as it still goes to the HD. Tip for linking: put everything in a base folder and then link with short path names. i.e. As long as the index is in the same directory as the goals page, the link can just be Linky

[anogro]

thanks guys i will work on the web site and get back to you.
does it work now?

[druke]

its your links, you are using MS frontpage, open the site up with notepad(the only good MS program)
you should se ethe lines
Home

that needs to be chnges to Home

make changes liek that to all your links b/c they dont work

secondly

your BG colors, your goign to give your potiential members Seizures. Stick with something and keep it, Analagous dark colors are good schemes.

I\'m not even gonna touch your actual guild info. You\'ve got your work cut out for ya though.

[anogro]

i am taking it off until i can fix it i don\'t have time right now so i will work on it when i do.