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ragglare

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What is love?
« on: June 21, 2005, 09:09:42 pm »
Now i\'m confused. What does the word love meen?
I am a young Kran. Strong with a steel blue skin (i\'m proud of my colour).
I met a nice girl not long ago. She had soft fur and a strange moving tail.
She told me that she love when a man is big and strong.
And her claws was perfect for to scrash my back. You know that point you can\'t reach without a minepick.

But after a short time she told me that i was to cold against her.
Offcaurse i\'m cold. I\'m kind off a walking piece off a rock, i told her.
I\'m hard and cold. She must have notised it from the beggining.
No, i talk about the night activity, she say.
Night? What about it? It\'s the sleeping time. What else to do in the dark night\'s?
After that she was saying something real strange.
She told me that she wanna make children.
How? My father allways told me that he and my mother dig me out of a rock.
And besides, the mine is closed at the night\'s.
We didn\'t talk more about it.

After a week, when i came home after digging some crystal powder for the food, she was gone.
The only trace was a note on the table.
She have run away with a dwarf. Yes a little weak, greedy dwarf.
That kind that dig food, and sell it or make wapons of it.
She missed a sex-life she wrote.

So now i curius. What is that sex-life, and what is love?
And how is they connected?
Whit regards from a nice and strong Kran.




*writers notes*
This is my first try to write some kind of a story.
My spelling and granmar is bad, i know, so no need to tell me.
But is there any hope for me, or am i supose to give up?

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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2005, 09:35:16 pm »
dont give up, I really like that.  If anything, I thought your spelling and grammar helped to characterize your Kran.   Brilliant!
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« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2005, 11:50:04 pm »
Thank\'s Ralas for youre kind word\'s. *blushing*
Well i\'m not sure how i manage to puch the post ikon.
But it was fun to write. So i\'m glad someone like it.
Next time i\'m trying to make a proper story, and not only write down what\'s in my head at the moment.
Yes. I was reading storys here, and the radio start to play the song: What is love
And there was a little story.
Happen\'s all the time, but this is the first time i write the story down.

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« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2005, 03:12:24 am »
wow that was a pretty good story :D

can\'t wait to here more stories! :tup:


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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2005, 01:15:09 pm »
Thank\'s.
There will be more.
I\'m know my Kran friend have more stories to tell me about his life.
I heard him mumble something in his sleep, and he promiced to tell me what it was someday soon.
He may be young, but he have lived a rich life.
I gonna write it down as soon he tell me.  ;)

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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2005, 05:39:03 pm »
Very entertaining. :) My only gripe with it is that Kran do not have a gender. So you can\'t have a mother/father and you can\'t say you\'re a \'man\' either. :) But apart from that, good work!

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« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2005, 07:05:45 pm »
Well. About the gender of a Kran. Who know\'s?
The playguide don\'t say anything about it.
http://www.planeshift.it/guide/setting-races.html

And in the soon coming story, my Kran friend have told me more about it.
I don\'t realy understand it, but i have allready wrote it down exactly like he told me to.  :P

What we do know is that they can\'t mix with other races.
And now he know about it too.

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« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2005, 07:37:57 pm »
I can assure you Kran are very much genderless. :)

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« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2005, 08:43:27 pm »
Well Moogie. I have post my next story now. It\'s the first real story of my friend. This one was only a tryout.
I just couldn\'t stop, so it\'s a bit to long.
And he is stubborn. He is a male he told me. Can be becaurse he don\'t wanna stick out from other races.
So please, let him be a he.  :P