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dying_inside

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« on: October 09, 2005, 09:15:37 pm »
ok so i drew an idea of what my character (lokii) would look like. hope you like it.

http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lokii4tg.jpg

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ok so i played aound with darkness and contrast a bit and came up with the desired affect. the pencil drawing is a bit light so i figured i would play with the tones so as to make it more the picture i wanted.

http://img325.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lokiidark2ps.jpg


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« Last Edit: October 09, 2005, 09:29:45 pm by dying_inside »
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« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2005, 09:33:14 pm »
It\'s an interesting image, definitely, but the perspective is rather painful to look at. The body looks... twisted, or the legs too short. Also, when shading try to have the strokes follow the shape - so on something round, instead of using straight lines use curves to darken. :)
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« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2005, 10:06:31 pm »
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It\'s an interesting image, definitely, but the perspective is rather painful to look at. The body looks... twisted, or the legs too short. Also, when shading try to have the strokes follow the shape - so on something round, instead of using straight lines use curves to darken. :)


it might be the page editing. i dunno. but the legs are slightly short . i did this  at like a 45 degree agle so  its strange but i might go and draw it again if i get the urge. better it if i can.
sorry about the double posting.
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« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2005, 10:23:43 pm »
I mainly like your usage of the chains and the shading.  It gives the effect of toil, pain and slavery really.  I mean if you were too make it \"smoother\" it would just create a strong image with only a few principals.
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well i tried
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2005, 08:00:56 am »
well i have tried to  make a smother and  more curved shaded image. i dont know what you think ... im not really sure what i think but  here it is :

original

http://img436.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lokii28zu.jpg

darler version

http://img423.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lokii2dark6xd.jpg
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« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2005, 03:45:43 pm »
I personally like the 45 degree angle better, it gives more dynamic, more drastic, more epic feel to it..

But I like the pose.. great job for now :D
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« Reply #6 on: October 11, 2005, 05:56:42 pm »
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I personally like the 45 degree angle better, it gives more dynamic, more drastic, more epic feel to it..

But I like the pose.. great job for now :D
personnally i have to agree with you. i dunno this one  seems a bit .. off ? rounded maybe ? im not sure but  i agree . the 45 degree angle on looks better me thinks.
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