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wannabe Enkidukai bard
« on: October 11, 2005, 04:28:10 pm »
as I was gathering ratbits ...inspiration struck


\"rat, rat, my favorite snack;
 the more they spawn, the more I swack\"


GENIUS, I tell ya!

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« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2005, 06:25:55 pm »
I dont know if we are allowed post 2 line poems but what the hell

Trepor there Trepor here
Trepor wearing underwear :O
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« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2005, 01:11:03 am »
This is so stupid... why did you post this in the RP section?

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« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2005, 03:45:59 am »
well dragonfire, you certainly added some much-needed intelligence with your staggering wit =P

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« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2005, 04:21:26 am »
Okay , want critisism?
Enkidukai dont eat rats, We arent your regular cat. And cats dont eat them anyways, the chase the rats tail. Also, saying that they spawn isnt very in character, no?

And Yayoo

Saying that trepors are wearing underwear is just plain immature, which can be expected from one of your age (10)

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« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2005, 04:33:58 am »
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Okay , want critisism?
Enkidukai dont eat rats, We arent your regular cat. And cats dont eat them anyways, they chase the rats tail. Also, saying that they spawn isnt very in character, no?

And Yayoo

Saying that trepors are wearing underwear is just plain immature, which can be expected from one of your age (10)

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