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mosstex

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i was so board i made this in five munots plz rate
« on: October 23, 2005, 10:59:46 pm »
its my 1st one
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« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2005, 11:02:22 pm »
please use full sentences, or I shall hunt you down and beat you to death with your own shoes, capiche?
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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2005, 11:02:46 pm »
what ya think
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« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2005, 11:07:13 pm »
I think in a battle scene, there should be a greater sense of action ;) Try to think of a more dynamic pose - the characters look too stiff. Also, there\'s no reason for the negative (white) space to the left; it could easily be removed without changing anything in the image.
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« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2005, 11:14:47 pm »
I cannot spot any race which usually appears in PlaneShift; so I can\'t rate this as \"Fan art\".
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« Reply #5 on: October 23, 2005, 11:20:40 pm »
Fanart doesn\'t necessarily have to include things are are. It could have things that might be :) Granted, orc/goblin type of critters have a chance that is next to none of being seen in PlaneShift (though we do have gobbles), but as long as the art isn\'t something as \"mundane\" as an RL still life ;)
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« Reply #6 on: October 24, 2005, 10:40:13 am »
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Originally posted by mosstex
what ya think


I don\'t.

Aside from that, whys the high tech space alien fighting the monster with a sword? Soundn\'t he have like a laser gun?
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« Reply #7 on: October 24, 2005, 12:37:19 pm »
Or perhaps it isn\'t a high tech alien?
and maybe some more expressions in the art?
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« Reply #8 on: October 24, 2005, 06:00:10 pm »
ok what ya think now its a futaristic battle ground and the building is were you vuew it from
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« Reply #9 on: October 24, 2005, 06:22:36 pm »
And now it doesn\'t belong in FanArt ;)
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« Reply #10 on: October 24, 2005, 07:08:53 pm »
That guy looks as if he fell in love with that monster.
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« Reply #11 on: October 24, 2005, 07:48:04 pm »
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« Reply #12 on: October 24, 2005, 08:10:16 pm »
How funny and mature it may be (not really), I still don\'t think it\'s ok to alter someone\'s art without his/her acceptance. Not like that anyway.
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« Reply #13 on: October 24, 2005, 08:22:36 pm »
Ohhhhh.

Minutes!

*pats self on back*
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« Reply #14 on: October 24, 2005, 08:29:41 pm »
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How funny and mature it may be (not really), I still don\'t think it\'s ok to alter someone\'s art without his/her acceptance. Not like that anyway.



Oh, but it was a good-humoured exageration of an outside quality!  Surely, if he asks me to take it down I will do so with the upmost speed.  I think you might need to lighten up a bit. :-D
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