very nice site, but yeah, you might wanna change some of the images. i had to highlight half the stuff there is to read it. secondly, you might want to define an alignment (good, neutral, evil, etc.) and an actual ingame purpose, not just beliefs and a story. and finally, you should have more technical information, and less Role-Playing stuff. or you should at least have just as much. i mean yes, we all enjoy role-playing and we all enjoy a purpose and ingame beliefs of a guild, but you need a bit more substance to match the style. like you could say \"in planeshift, we will gain as much land as possible and hold on to it\" or \"we will become the richest/most powerful guild in planeshift\" or just \"we will be a neutral guild ingame\" or SOMETHING to that effect. those goals may sound ludicrous, but at least they are GOALS. all you have are a narratical setup for your guild. like i said before, you have the background, now make a future. good luck with your guild.
