The only suggestion I would make, is when you draw, lightly sketch the pose and over all body shape so that if there are mistakes you can erase it and continue without showing a clue that you drew there. Also then you can move around the features and body position the way you would like until you are happy with it. Then once that is accomplished ... you begin to fill in the fine details. Other than that great job Farren. Oh and one more thing, the gum eraser is your friend, and works well for erasing. Look forward to seeing some more of your drawings.