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The Tale of Stronith
« on: November 06, 2005, 07:58:42 pm »

As he approached the gates of Hydlaa, Stronith said to himself, ?Well, here I am, there?s no turning back.?

The long journey from the underground kingdom he was raised has come to an end.  He has heard much of the great fortified city and until now had never imagined he would venture so far from home to see it in person.  With all his belongings in a sack slung over his shoulder, he looked one last time at the road leading to his home.  He strode with purpose through the gates, only to be stopped by a human, Remant.   After slipping a few tria to him, he was given directions to the plaza.  The Plaza in Hydlaa, he has heard much of this place.  It was rumored among the Kran that the plaza was a meeting place for all walks of life, a good location to obtain information.  

Along the road to the Plaza, he was stopped by a creature of a sort he had never seen.  His skin was the color of the trees in the forest, and there were wings upon his back.  Claws tipped his fingers with a point that implied that they were used for tearing flesh, or at least could be.  He looked into his eyes in an effort to judge the creatures motivations, studying the expression on his face and his stance.  He was unarmed, or appeared to be, not a threat to this Kran. He nodded.

The creature said, ?Good Sir, are you lost??

?Not exactly?, Stronith replied, ?I am taking in the sights as I make my way to the Plaza.?

The creature introduced himself as Kraith and offered to show the way.  Not in any rush to get there, but also curious of the good-will displayed by this gesture, he agreed to follow him to the Plaza.  The creature led Stronith through the streets, down a set of stairs and continued on.  Once Stronith entered the Plaza, he stopped in his tracks.  There was a huge statue and a fountain in the center, with stairs leading down to it.  To the left, he could see the most magnificent building he had ever seen.  



Thinking back to the rumors he has heard of Hydlaa, he quickly realized that that must be the famed Laanx Temple.  He made a mental note to visit the temple and see what all the fuss was about.  Realizing he was standing alone, he scanned the crowd for Kraith.  His guide gestured to him with a wave and Stronith answered by catching up to him.  

?This is the Plaza, my friend,? he said.  ?There is much more to see in Hydlaa, but I must make haste, as I have guild business to attend to??

?Guild business,? Stronith asked looking perplexed, ?Please explain what you mean.?  The term ?Guild? was not familiar to the Kran.  At home, groups of Kran would stick together for sporting events, mining for food and such. Perhaps there were more of this creature?s kin in Hydlaa, and that is what he meant.

His guide explained to Stronith the need for citizens to find others who have a similar standing on politics and other issues.  ?Strange things are happening in Yliakum as of late. The lands beyond Ojaveda Road have become dangerous for a lone hunter.?  He went on to describe the Trepors, Consumers and the infamous Ulbernauts.  

Instantly, Stronith recalled a conversation he had with Alteran, a fellow Kran back home:  

?I bet you get squished by an Ulber?, Alteran had said to Stronith in an effort to scare him out of leaving the underground.  Stronith taken that bet, stating that he would return home in 1 year?s time with an Ulbernaut skin rug to give to Alteran.

?I?m sorry, Sir. I was thinking of home.  You reminded me of something I must not forget to do,? he said to Kraith in response to the concerned look on his face.

He went on to explain his plan with the Ulbernaut rug, but stopped his story short when he seen a look he did not understand come across his guides face.  There was a grin on Kraith?s face and a slight flutter of the massive wings mounted on his back.  His guide smiled and was about to speak when Stronith suddenly understood.  There would be much training necessary for an Ulber hunt, the Death Realm is not somewhere he planned on visiting.  

Taking the advice of his guide, he made his way to the blacksmith?s shop.  Busy as it was, he was able to purchase some weapons from the smithy.  Harnquist had much to sell, but nothing notably strong.  A weapon would be required to make a living, as he was told, because the economy in Yliakum was mainly for trophies of battle with the vile monsters that had begun to spread across the land.

Wondering where to start, he asked around.  There were a few mentions of an arena of sorts, but something about taking on Gladiator with a pitiful broadsword was not settling too well with Stronith.  It was then that he heard of a rodent infestation underground.  That was where he must go, practice some swordsmanship and collect some trophies of his battle.  Harnquist had offered to buy such things, and now Stronith knew where he could get some; earn some tria and gain some fighting experience.

The sparring he had done with his friends back home usually amounted to not much more than hand-to-hand horseplay and sometimes stone clubs. Alteran had found a small tree-trunk stashed somewhere (Stronith hadn?t fully understood what it was until he emerged from the underground to see the forest) that packed quite the punch when he?d swing it at Stronith. Swords were not overly familiar to this Kran, but he realized that flesh and blood creatures such as the sewer rats he was going to hunt might appreciate the sharp edge.  It would take much practice to wield these weapons effectively against much more than these sewer creatures.

   After spending some time in the sewers, searching for an exit he was once again helped by his new friend, Kraith.  Although his eyesight was keen in the dark, he could not figure out which way he had come from.  His guide sought him out in the depths of the sewers and led him back to the surface.  Showing Kraith what he had looted from the rats, he was pointed back to the blacksmith.  Although Harnquist?s specialty was dealing in swords and other weapons, he did purchase the loot from him and this put some more tria in his pocket.

    It was then that he overheard a voice that sounded familiar.  Looking behind him, he saw the speaker. It was the accent of a Kran that sounded familiar, but the face was not.  This Kran had an air of importance about him, his face having expression of natural confidence that Stronith revered immediately. Hesitating only for a moment, he then made his way though the crowd to the Kran that was selling swords, all of them having interesting sounding names.  

?A fire broad sword?? Stronith thought to himself, ?I wonder how much he would sell it for??

    ?Hello, good sir.  Are you interested in a Fire Broad Sword?? the Kran asked and also introduced himself as Talad.  Stronith was handed the blade to inspect it.  The steel was warm to the touch, much warmer than it should have been ? given the temperature in the air.  Intrigued, Stronith purchased the sword from this Talad fellow, not realizing until much later that the sword was worth ten-fold what he had paid.  

Thinking nothing more of the encounter, he thanked the Kran and bid farewell.  There was much to explore, but always being on-purpose, Stronith made his way to the temple.

?to be continued?



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« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2005, 08:06:04 pm »
I love it Stronith but you know that seeing as I got to read it before anyone else.
/me can\'t wait till our storys merge
« Last Edit: November 15, 2005, 07:24:03 am by zorbels »
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« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2005, 07:27:57 am »
It makes me sad that not many have come to see what a great story teller you are stronith. I was hoping you would have had more support from the PS community for I feel your story is like ten times as good as mine. Whats with the double posting you all ask...I am hoping that someone will notice how much this story adds to the PS community by putting it to the top of the list.....

/me walks away unhappy with the lack of support
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« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2005, 08:15:20 am »
wow, what a great read... please keep it coming.
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« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2005, 11:39:22 pm »
Very Very nice story , I love the situation when stronith met Talad ....

I want to add : it is was easy for me to read, i read without  dictionary , pleasant to read ...
maybe the best for the moment for me
« Last Edit: November 16, 2005, 11:51:20 pm by Bebel »
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The Dark Empire is the little floating part you can see, but below this, there is a huge part...

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« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2005, 12:30:17 am »
Superb!

Your story has inspired me Stronith. Magnificent!

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The Tale of Stronith (continued)
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2005, 12:49:46 am »
There was little activity in the temple itself, in fact it was complety deserted other than a couple of folks who had little to offer of interest to Stronith.  Outside, though there was a couple of dwarfs quarreling.  This proved to entertain for a few moments, but that was it.

  Deciding that there was no better time than the present to explore the wilderness, Stronith set off for the gates of Hydlaa.  Remant was on shift again, so Stronith stopped to say hello.

  ?I trust you located the Plaza without much trouble, Sir.?  Remant had said, nodding slightly.

  Stronith said he had, and thanked him.  Remant went on to ask where Stronith was heading.  ?To the forest, and then to explore the land beyond.  I hear there are some unwelcome creatures that lurk in the valleys??

   Remant laid his hand upon Stronith?s forearm.  ?Sir Stronith, I cannot recommend proceeding with that plan unless you are??  He then noticed the broadsword on his hip. ?Nevermind, I see you have gotten that taken care of.?  Stronith nodded and grinned.  ?By chance, if you happen to come across a simple broadsword in your travels and return to Hydlaa, I would be grateful if you would sell it to me.  You see, my sword is worn, and with the rumors of rogues and bandits in the area, I cannot leave my post.? Remant explained.  

    Stronith assured Remant that he would keep an eye out for the weapon,  going on to say, ?I have had enough of the sewer dwelling annoyances, and am looking forward to assisting with ridding the area of these rogues.?  With that, the two bid farewell, Remant remaining still and alert at the gates and Stronith passing through them towards the forest.  

    The short walk from the walls of the city to the edge of the forest was uneventful.  There was a few travelers that passed, none-of-which said hello.  This was fine, as Stronith was not keen on idle conversation.  He was used to spending time with a select few of his kin, not mingling much at all - even at the party that was thrown to see him off on his journey, he had spent most of the evening with Aridon and Alteran swapping stories.

 Not far into the forest he could hear the sounds of swords clashing.  Quikening his pace, curious as to what was happening, he rounded a corner and was able to see the source of the sounds.  There was a human and a rogue dueling near a fork in the road.  The human was parrying blow after blow from his opponent but seemed to be losing ground.  The rogue was forcing the fellow towards a rock face speaking some words Stronith could not hear clearly through the mask of sorts he was wearing.  Only his eyes were showing, but that was enough for Stronith to assess the rogue was fighting with the confidence of a well-seasoned combatant.  

  The human took a slash on the shoulder of his sword-arm, dropping his weapon.  In his other hand he had a wooden shield.  Stronith evaluated that the wooden shield would not stand up to the force of the blows that the sword had been warding off, and no sooner did he unsheathe his own sword to assist, he observed the losing fighter raise the shield at a sharp angle and catch the rogue in the chin.  A cry of sudden pain was clearly heard from under the mask the rogue wore and he stumbled back a few steps.  In that opportunity, the human picked up his sword and lunged at the rogue with a downward slashing motion.  At that moment, the rogue stepped back and tripped on a small rock protruding from the road.  It was that stumble that saved the rogue, as the slash missed its target.  With obvious skill, the rogue then countered the attack with a kick to the shins, bringing his opponent to his knees.  Stronith was almost upon the two of them when the rogue brought the hilt of his sword down directly on the human?s unprotected head.  With the battle won, the rogue eyed the sword of his enemy, sheithing his own and reaching for the fallen human\'s.  A trophy of battle, Stronith knew, and at that moment he was on the rogue to avenge the murder of the human.

    Stronith swung his sword in an upward arc, catching the rogue under the chin.  A scream escaped his lips as he fell dead, next to the human he had slain moments before.  It was only then that Stronith realized he was not alone.  There was a female of the Enkidukai race sitting on a rock nearby.  She was sharpening a short sword while watching the action.  Stronith acknowledged her with a silent nod, and an awkward grin.  

The Enki smiled and introduced herself as Zorbels.

...to be continued...
« Last Edit: November 17, 2005, 01:10:47 am by Stronith »

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« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2005, 03:30:50 am »
I will say the same thing than my first post here ... You have a talent  for writting story
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I love it!!!
« Reply #8 on: November 19, 2005, 01:35:14 am »
I can\'t wait to see more writing from you.
Dylia wait under a tree for Stronith to post the next one. :D

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« Reply #9 on: November 19, 2005, 01:43:26 am »
Wow Stronith I love the story and the way you introduce me. :D It is exactly how it happened when I first joined PS. I envy the way you discribe things and events......

/me bows to Stronith and looks forward to more.....
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« Reply #10 on: November 19, 2005, 12:52:45 pm »
great story Stronith i can not wait for the next part

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« Reply #11 on: November 28, 2005, 12:40:50 am »
Must... resist... addiction... to... your... story...
In the beginning, the Universe was created. This has made quite a lot of people very angry, and is widely regarded as a bad move.

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The Tale of Stronith (continued)
« Reply #12 on: November 28, 2005, 05:13:27 pm »
When Lady Zorbels stood, and extended her paw for a proper greeting, Stronith naturally gripped it in his massive hand and shook it heartily as he had the other citizens he had met in his travels.  Zorbels produced a look on her face that made him second-guess what he had just done.  Perhaps this female expected something other than a handshake when she put her paw out in front of him.  He awkwardly released her from his grip and asked if he had done something wrong.  He had much to learn about the customs of those outside his kinfolk.  Zorbels appeared about to say something, and change her mind.

?Do not worry, Good Sir.  Nothing is the matter,? she had said to him. There was a twinkle in her eyes, and a slight smirk that told him perhaps he did miss something, but decided not to press the issue.

Stronith regained his composure and introduced himself. ?My name, Lady Zorbels, is Stronith.  I am new to this land, and am pleased to have made your acquaintance.?

?Stronith, that is an interesting name, Sir,? she said to him. ?Stronith,? she repeated, ?Your name carries the tone of physical might, and by observing your quick dealings with that rogue over there,? she pointed to corpse of Stronith?s fallen opponent, ?it serves you well.?

Flattered, Stronith smiled.  ?Thank-you, Zorbels.  Your words are kind.?

Stronith felt there was something he should say, a compliment to pay this maiden in return.  In his mind, he fumbled through things he could say.  He could comment on her name, but did not know what he would say about it.  He noticed her fur was shiny and her tail was long, but did not feel it was something appropriate to say.  The combination of her smile and her mischievous eyes was something that intimidated him more than anything. He was at a loss for words.  

Zorbels seemed to have picked up on Stronith?s feeling of being uncomfortable and saved him from blurting out something silly.  She said to him, ?Stronith, would you be so kind as to meet me at the tavern later this eve?  Are you familiar with Kada El?s??

He shook his head no, as he did not know of the place.  He saw her face fall for a moment and realized she must have taken that as a refusal of her offer and quickly said, ?I do not know of this place, but I am at your service, milady.  If you ask me to meet you at the top of the Laanx Temple I would find my way there.?

At that moment, he recalled the massive height of that structure and hoped that Zorbels would not, in fact, ask him to meet her there.  There was a huge contrast between the underground home he once knew and the height if the tower atop the temple.  He was relieved that she did not ask such a thing of him, but the smile she had been maintaining throughout the conversation seemed to widen, just a little bit, in response to Stronith?s offer of such a feat as climbing the tower at the temple.

Zorbels explained how to get to the tavern, but did not tell him why she wished to meet him there.  He did not ask either, which was quite out-of-character for Stronith.  He always knew where he was going, when and why.  Something about the Enki affected him in a way he did not understand.  There was a warmth in her smile, a certain gracefulness in her movements and an interest in him that he had not seen or felt before this very moment.  

Zorbels reached to pick up her pack, and Stronith instantly (instinctively?) picked it up for her.  The bag had some weight to it, and Stronith inexplicably offered to carry it to where she was going.

?That is quite all right, Sir Stronith. I have carried my pack for many miles, and am able to manage it. Thank-you, though.? She told him. ?I regret that I must be going; as I have business to attend to.  You will see me later, will you not, Stronith?? she asked.

He assured her that he would be at Kada El?s as requested, although he was not certain what a tavern was and why she wanted him to meet her there. Stronith had lost track of his plan, forgotten where he was going (again, very much unlike Stronith).  When she asked him where he was off to, he stuttered and stumbled his words, but managed to get out ?going for a walk?. Zorbels giggled as she bowed to him with practiced grace, and bid him farewell.

As she walked the road toward Hydlaa, Stronith watched her intently.  He admired how the muscles in her legs flexed and relaxed as she stepped.  He watched her tail rhythmically dancing behind her. Sitting down on the rock she had been sitting on only moments ago, he wondered why he noticed these things at all.  It was strange for him to take interest in such things.  Stronith did not understand why he was disappointed that Zorbels had departed.  He reflected on this for a moment, attempting to understand these strange feelings. She had smiled at him constantly, a smile like he had never seen on any creature, smiled honestly even when he had stammered trying to answer the simplest of questions.  And that, Stronith did not stammer or forget what he wanted to say; that was odd as well.

As he watched, Zorbels stopped before reaching the bend in the road.  It occurred to him that he was muttering to himself. Had she heard him? Did she feel his stare and was going to confront him for his lack of manners? Thankfuly, she had only stopped briefly to fiddle with the strapping on her weighty pack.  It was heavy, he knew this and he admired her strength.  He considered how strange it was for him to have offered to carry her things for her.  She did not want help, in fact she insisted on carrying her own pack.  He watched as she made the proper adjustments to balance the weight and carried on towards Hydlaa.  Stronith, relieved that his private thoughts and private mutterings had not betrayed him and put him in a position to explain his gawking, looked up at the sky to ponder these strange feelings further.  

If he had not taken his eyes off of Zorbels at that moment, he would have seen her pause again before rounding the corner and look back at him, with that same smile he had yet to define the meaning behind.

...to be continued?
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« Reply #13 on: November 28, 2005, 06:46:40 pm »
wow... keep it coming... cant wait.. must seek out Zorbels and ask... about the smile thing.. hehehehe
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« Reply #14 on: November 28, 2005, 07:18:36 pm »
:D The story is coming along really well Stronith. I enjoyed every word of it. Oh and thank you for writing in that I wouldn\'t let you carry my pack ..... *chuckles* you know Zorbels well......

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