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Be famous, write a book
« on: January 06, 2003, 02:36:58 am »
Hey there, wannabe-stars! Jayose\'s Library is looking for some books to fill our shelves! Grab your feather and ink and start writing already! All entries will be reviewed!

(Please do not copy stuff from other websites or books, we can do that ourselves :) By submitting a text to this thread you agree with it that PlaneShift may use the stories ingame. Please do not make 600 page long stories. Longer text will be splitted in several parts (if used). The books will not yet be available in the initial MB release, but will be available in an update soon after.
The stories can be about anything. It can also be a guide, a cooking book, or any other type of book.)

EDIT: Be sure to add the nickname of the writer.
<Worf> These are the moments when my ego gets put back on the ground. I use linux for quite some time, and am soon 2 years maintainer of a linux distribution. I started to think I would be good at it. But then I tried to get planeshift running.

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« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2003, 02:46:35 am »
so, ya\'ll (haha) guys are actually doing that? cool

...are ya gonna be taking the good stories from the rp forum?

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« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2003, 02:52:59 am »
Maybe, if the writer agrees.
<Worf> These are the moments when my ego gets put back on the ground. I use linux for quite some time, and am soon 2 years maintainer of a linux distribution. I started to think I would be good at it. But then I tried to get planeshift running.

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« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2003, 02:54:28 am »
Ormadaire the Monk
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There was once a young and curious monk named Ormadaire. He was of the human race and he often found that his curiosity got him into trouble. He woke up one day and said, \"Time for an adventure!\". He sneaked upon the public boat and road it for hours on end. He was going through the deep sea when out of the corner of his eye he caught the glimpse of land - but a second later it was gone. Being quite the courageous (or stupid) monk that he was, he swiftly lept off the boat and began to swim for the island. He didn\'t realize how far away it was, so when he finally reached it he had to sit for a while. He turned his back to the sea and his eyes fell upon the beautiful island. There was green palm trees filled with beautiful fruits. He was sitting there peacefully when a tree, an entire tree, came sailing out of the woods and missed his head by a foot. He quickly stood up and peered into the deep forest at the spot where it had come at him. Then he saw it. \"It\" was a 15 foot, 400 lb Ogre that was red with fury. The ogre came at him from through the forest. \"Diz be my island! Diz be my island! Yooz be ded!\" Ormadaire realized that he was in great danger. Again. He was well learned, however, and knew what to do with an enemy of this size, of this great strength...

To be continued!
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« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2003, 09:25:53 am »
What about stuff taken of the boards of my site for example? If you guys think it\'s Ok, you know where to find it(link below the sig, \"About\" section of the site).
If anything, I would be honoured to have that published, although it\'s prolly not the richest of all the materials out there.

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« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2003, 10:45:18 am »
Stagger, I dont want to be too critical, but I think that to write a book for Planeshift, you would have to take on the role of a writer in the world of Planeshift. A writer in the world of Planeshift would not write of sea\'s and Islands. They would write of monsters that appear in Yliakum (I dunno, maybe they do have ogre\'s).

Anyway, just trying to help. Feel free to tell me to shut-up and mind my own business if you wish.

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« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2003, 11:33:47 am »
Yeah and your story, was a bit... short... I would say something like 1000 words atleast for a book, unless these books are just quick read things.
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« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2003, 02:01:58 pm »
Like I said, it can be anything. SOmething in the trend of Planeshift would be nice though. And books in RPG\'s usually are quick read thingies.
<Worf> These are the moments when my ego gets put back on the ground. I use linux for quite some time, and am soon 2 years maintainer of a linux distribution. I started to think I would be good at it. But then I tried to get planeshift running.

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« Reply #8 on: January 07, 2003, 03:13:38 pm »
OK, here\'s my first attempt at a book for PS,

A Lesson Learnt in Time

Bowrell didn\'t want to get the fruit. Bowrell never wanted to get the fruit. It was her job though, however much she hated it. What Bowrell really wanted to do was hunt. Just like her father. While her father and her uncle were out there, hunting for tommorow\'s feed, her mother made Bowrell collect the fruit from the family orchard. It wouldn\'t always be like this though. One day she would show them. Her father, her mother, the whole damn town.

She practiced every day. Even at her age, Bowrell was the sharpest shooter in town, but nobody else seemed to see it. Actually, there was one person who saw it. He was a strange man. He came to town recently. Bowrell didn\'t know why he came to town, but one day, she saw him walking past her house. She was practicing her archery as usual, shooting at a target she set up on a nearby tree. This man, very muscular, saw Bowrell shooting and stopped walking. The man just stood there watching her practice. After firing off set of arrows, Bowrell turned around. \"Hello\" she said \"Can I help you?\".

The stranger nodded in the direction of the arrow filled tree. \"Your good\" he said. Bowrell looked around at her target. There were six arrows, all sprouting out of the very center of the target. Bowrell didn\'t know what to say, so she just continued on looking at the man, making sure to keep a blank expression on her face. The well-built man, with long, thick curly hair, finally broke the silence and said \"If you wish to prove yourself, compete in Laciate, Ten days from now\". The man spun around on his heels and walked away. The man seemed to shimmer. He took the shape of a man, yet Bowrell could not be sure he was like  other men.

That was nine days ago. Bowrell\'s Mother and Father would never let her go. She didn\'t even bother asking. As Bowrell stood there with a basket full of fruit, she thought to herself \"Why shouldn\'t I be allowed to go?\" \"I can make my own decisions\". Without any further thought, she dropped the basket and ran to the stable, picking up her Bow and quiver full of arrows on the way. She took her favourite horse and rode off into the sunset. It was only a day\'s ride to Laciate. She could make it by morning.

As the sun rose on the bustling town of Laciate the next morning, Bowrell was riding down the main street. She was following the crowd to a table where everyone was apparently signing up for the competition. Bowrell eventually made her way to the table and signed her name. She was given a number and made to wait for several hours, until finally her number was called out. People began to push her. She was being pushed this way and that. Then all of a sudden she was pushed out into the open. She looked around to find that she was standing in a large arena. Big iron gates slammed shut behind her. On the opposite side of the arena stood a large creature with two white tusks sprouting from it\'s jaw. The only time she ever saw one of these was when it was dead, on the dinner table. It really did look a lot more fearsome when staring straight at you. As she raised her bow, and began to draw back an arrow, the animal started to trot towards her. In the instant that she let the arrow fly, she heard a snort to her left. She whirled around to see another one trotting towords her also. She shot an arrow at the creature on the left. Then another arrow at the one to the right. Left. Right. Left. Right. No matter how many arrows she fired, these animals seemed unharmed. Then, just before the two creature\'s came withing striking distance, she felt a sting of pain from behind. \"A third? and I didn\'t even see it\". Everything seemed to pause as she was struck in the buttocks by two strong tusks. Then she was hurled through the air, breaking her ribs when she slammed into a barrier.

When she opened her eyes, everything was a blur. Bowrell shook her head, and things started to come into focus. She lay there, leaning against a barrier, with three wild creatures charging toward her. Closer and closer they got. For some reason, she began to think of the basket she dropped before leaving home, and how bruised the fruit must be. Closer and closer, her attackers got. She could feel the vibration of their hooves thumping the ground as they ran at full pace. Then in a moment of peace, an image of the strange man she saw back at home appeard before her eyes. He wore a gold band around his right bicep. The man took hold of Bowrell and everything disintegrated before her eyes.

The next thing she remembered was the man laying her down on the front steps of her house. He put his hand to her chest and she felt a warmth flow through her body. She could feel bones healing inside her body. Before Bowrell could open her mouth to ask questions, the man had left. Bowrell\'s mother opened the front door. She was crying, but stopped as soon as she saw her daughter lying there. She brought her inside, and Bowrell told her all that had happened. Her parents were just glad that she was home and safe.

So, Bowrell was good at shooting tree\'s, but now she could see why hunting was so dangerous. She promised her parents that she would never do something so foolish again. And as for the strange man, Talad he said his name was, Bowrell never saw him again.


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« Reply #9 on: January 07, 2003, 09:02:01 pm »
Well, I kind of got that author itch during my lunch break today and here is what spewed out.  It is part one of a \"not yet named\" story that takes place in Yliakum.  It mentions my PS/rpg alter-ego, but focuses on a Ylian girl name Asuria.  Part 2 will be done in a couple days (or when I get another chance where I can\'t get access to the PS code).  I\'m guessing there will be 5-6 parts/ chapters, but we\'ll see as the story unfolds.


Part 1

The steady dripping of water is annoying, regardless of how long you?ve lived with it.  Small drops rhythmically descended from the high roof of the cavern, dampening the small alley in which Asuria crouched.  Annoyed by the late night encounter, she constantly asked herself, ?Why am I doing this??.  Mentally repeating the phrase like a mantra, she strained her ears trying to catch hints of footfalls.  Occasionally, Asuria peeked around the stonework to check the progress of the Azure Sun.  Its light was feeble, giving away the early hour, but the small magical bracelet around her wrist kept her from loosing her visual acuteness.  It was the only thing she had left of her father and it had saved her life many times.

Far off, faint echoes resolved into the steady clicking of boot heels on paving stone.  Even though the sounds were from several streets away, Asuria?s cautious nature implored her to step farther into the alley.  Squishing sounds and foul odors accompanied the backward movement as her feet found the soft slick footing of the alley.  Nausea overcame Asuria and she quickly covered her mouth as the dry-heave reflex came.  

Slowly, the sickness passed, but not before her minute sounds gave away her position.  Shadows moved as a haggard Ynnwn stepped into the mouth of the alley.  Her bracelet let her see his ragged dirty clothes, his old and bent physique, and his wrinkled maroon skin, but his real presence was marked by his stench.  If she had not been in the putrid alley, Asuria would probably been able to locate the man by scent alone.  Additional unpleasant aromas instantly began to permeate the alley, causing Asuria to heave again under the olfactory assault.

The ragged Ynnwn?s mouth spilt into a devious smile over his rotting teeth and gums.  He deftly reached beneath his rag-like clothing to produce an overly ornate blade.  Asuria tried desperately to shift into a more defensible stance and draw her own dagger, but the slickness of the alley floor kept denying her the balance she needed.

Out of the corner of her eye, Asuria noticed a third figure entering the fray.  A lithe, hooded form was beginning to stand-up on the roof of a house across the street, abandoning the cover of its chimney.  Suddenly, dark crackling energy leaped into the alley, slamming into the Ynnwn beggar?s back.  His chest ripped forth and life-blood sprayed across the alley wall.  His smile was gone, replaced by a look of horror and shock as his now life-less corpse began to succumb to gravity.  Asuria quickly braced herself against the opposite wall to avoid an awkward entanglement with the body of her would-be assassin.

The dark roof-top form shifted, stretched its now visible wings, and glided down to the alley entrance.  This was Asuria?s current employer.  A Klyros she knew only as Kinshadow.   That was of course not his real name, some sort of reference to ancestral worship, but what employer would give their real name to a tomb robber anyway?

?Your gods will not save you if you do not make sure you are not followed.? whispered Kinshadow as he stepped forwarded.  Asuria did not realize she spoken the small prayer to Laanx aloud.  Talking to yourself is not a good habit for a thief.

?Thanks for your personal intervention.  Do you have the payment?? Asuria asked, trying exceptionally hard to not make her voice carry.

Kinshadow simply smirked under his cowl and reached into his belt pouch to produce a tooth sized red gem.  The gem emitted a faint orange glow that pulsed like that of a slow steady heartbeat.  After a moment of Asuria staring at the gem in his hand, he cocked his head and impatiently asked, ?Do you have the rod??

?Of course, of course?, Asuria responded as she broke her trance with the beautiful gem.  She quickly unslung the small pack she carried and began to dig through the assorted odds and ends that it contained.  Moments later, she pulled her hand from her pack, revealing an intricately carved black metal rod, as thick as a dwarfs thumb and as long as her forearm.

Kinshadow?s eyes flared with desire and he snatched the rod from her hand.  He hurriedly tossed the gem to her and turned to leave.  ?I will see you again in a week to give you my next request.? Kinshadow whispered as he began to walk quickly and quietly down the street.  His form became gradually translucent and then invisible within a few steps of his departure.  A magical aura persisted for several seconds after his leaving.

Asuria pocketed the gem and frowned at her employer?s abruptness.  She shifted her thoughts the beggar, wondering how he had followed her and where he got the nice dagger he carried.  With precise movements she searched and hid the body, taking only the troubling blade.  She would study that in more detail when she got home.
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« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2003, 01:47:44 am »
Shutup everyone! I\'m about to add a thrilling end to my great story:







...and then he died.












I\'ll be available for autographs in an hour!
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« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2003, 08:54:39 pm »
Well, here\'s part 2 for all you PS fanatsy lovin\' kiddies out there.  I\'ve decided to temporarily title the story \"Planeshift - The Quest of Lineage\", but that is still up for debate.  Whenever I\'m done with the story, I\'ll probably refine it a bit (fix any setting errors and smoothe out some of the descriptions) and stick the end work on the web some where.

EDIT: Just to clarify, if refered to in game (via a Library Book), the story is called \"The Quest of Lineage\".  If posted anywhere else, it is called \"Planeshift - The Quest of Lineage\" (Kind of like that of other book/short story series/genres/settings like Forgotten Realms, Dark Sun, etc).

BTW, all the work (and its characters) is copyrighted by me and is released under the Planeshift license.  Do not reproduce these words without mention of the author (Brian \'Kinshadow\' Murray).



Part 2

Despite her success that night, Asuria remained frustrated.  An angry twist of her arm sent the newly acquired dagger into her bedroom door.  She had already spent several hours that night trying to make sense of the arcane symbols to no avail.  Grudgingly she pushed herself out of the lumpy bed to retrieve dagger.  Her brother would ask questions if he saw it there.

Being eight years younger than her, Surin had that pre-teen inquisitiveness that irked everyone he met.  Surin had never met their mother, with her dying at birth and all, and their father had died a mere four years later in a mining accident.  Asuria was his only real family, supporting them with odd and usually illegal jobs.  

Recently, life has been good.  A twist of fate happened to get her a reputation as a talented tomb robber.  Tomb robbing was not a common job in Yilakum, where the corpses of the dead were usually disposed of but tossing them in the abyss.   Only people who are both important and eccentric get sealed in tombs.  Even then, the tombs are usually more like memorials with no actual corpse to speak of.  Little of value is kept in these vaults, usually personal items.  The pay off is when the person was a sorcerer and ancient magic items are mistaken for personal ?trash?.  Despite the lack of worth, family members still tend to trap the tombs honoring their loved ones to discourage snoopers.  That combined with the fact that they are usually located deep in the Stone Labyrinths makes the job less than desirable.   The mining skills of her father, a quick mind, and an unusual dose of luck has kept her alive so far.  A steady stream of specific treasure requests (sometimes with tomb locations and information) for the last two years have kept the two orphans off the streets and well fed.  Most of the well paying requests were from the mysterious Kinshadow figure, but her reputation insured her that other (if not as well funded) relic hungry mages were eager to wait in line.

Asuria pried the knife from the door and tossed it a nearby drawer.  The growling of her stomach urged her to open the door and make her way down to the kitchen.  Asuria and Surin rented a pair of rooms above a cobblers shop in a ?not-quite-seedy? area of town.  For the most part, order was insured by the town guard, but not so much she couldn?t sneak around when she needed.

The kitchen always contained some bread and cheese to nibble on and Asuri helped herself wondering who could have a grudge against her.  Who else knew of the drop location or the job in general?  She had stolen several similar rods for Kinshadow in the past, but he always insisted on secret meeting places, and took great measures to insure no word was said to anyone about their activities.

Asuria finished her meal and went to bed as the city rose for a busy day.  Dark troubles weighed heavy on her mind and she would not have a restful sleep.



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Kinshadow?s magical darkness faded as he strode into his workshop.   Tossing his ji-gi cloak aside, he opened up a black lacquered box on his worktable in the middle of the room.  Four black rods laid inside the box, each with its own indentation in green velvet interior.  The two empty indentations made the set look wrongly incomplete.  With swift hand motions, Kinshadow drew the new rod from the secret pocket dimension in which he?d hidden it and placed by its brethren.

A thin smile crept across his face as he looked on the newest member of his collection.  Each of the black rods was carved differently; each representing the deeds of the original owners in more detail than most could imagine possible.  These were the Us-Si Lim, or Soul Rods, of the greatest of his ancestors since his kind journeyed to the caves of the Azure Sun.  Their magic is not apparent to any not of the lineage and without a magical talent.  The rods not only tell the story of the individual, but also hold the great knowledge and experience that person held.  Unfortunately, the power and knowledge one can gain from and individual rod does not compared to wealth that they hold.  Only a set of rods working together in a hive-mind can unlock the power they contain.

The quest to own his own lineage of rods has consumed the one known as Kinshadow for many years.  With his recent public political success, he gained access to the libraries of knowledge that most citizens Yilakum do not have the privilege to view.  The locations and intricacies of his key ancestors tombs were then only a matter of research and persistence.  His secrecy insured he did not gain a negative public opinion and kept political opponents from drawing the wrong conclusions about his sorcerous ways.

EDIT (to specifically mention the PS political structure :) ):  This attitude was not uncommon among newly appointed Vigesimi who did not inherit the position.  Unlike the Internal Circle, politics in the External Circle can sometimes be turbulent.

Kinshadow concentrated deeply on the new Us-Si Lim, experiencing as much as the sole rod would let him.  Several hours passed and his focus remained absolute as he wove the spells necessary.  Only when the hard leather sap smashed into the back of his head, did he realize he was not alone.
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« Reply #12 on: January 08, 2003, 11:22:51 pm »
The word \"Planeshift\" is not known to the citizens of Yliakum.  Its just the title of the program.

Make sure that you include writing about government and religion, such as what is already on the website.

Also someone should write some kind of myths about the surface.

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« Reply #13 on: January 09, 2003, 12:06:22 am »
I knew there was something I was going to ask yesterday!

So, do we really know anything about what is on the surface, or is it a total mystery?

How I set my timezone:

ln -sf /usr/share/zoneinfo/Antarctica/Davis /etc/localtime

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« Reply #14 on: January 09, 2003, 07:45:09 pm »
Well, here is part 3.  Same (c) as before and let me know if there are setting problems.

Part 3

Asuria woke to hard punching of her younger brother.

?Get up, mud head!?, Surin chided as she struggled desperately to ignore him. ?There is a stranger downstairs asking for you and I don?t like his looks.?

Asuria shot wide awake and grabbed her brother firmly, ?What does look like?. who is he?!?

?Let go, he?s just some fancy ?up-stag?, rich fellow.  A Diaboli dressed all in greens and purple.? Surin spurted as he slipped away from his sister.  ?Master Hobilstin has almost sold the picker a second pair of boots!?  The cobbler who owned the building, and lived on the third floor, was such a good salesman that he could sell hiking shoes to Mounted Defender.

Asuria did not like this attention after last nights adventure.  The fellow could be innocent, an employer or a messenger from one, but she wasn?t about to take that chance.  Besides, she always went to great lengths to make sure her employers knew nothing about her residence.

?Go to your room and lock the door until I tell you to come out.  No arguing, this could be dangerous.? Asuria said in soft direct tones.  Surin got his sister?s meaning and quickly exited the room, shutting the door behind him.

Without a sound, a dark form stepped out of the corner previously concealed by the closed door.  ?Do not be startled, I am here to help.? Kinshadow said as he took a seat in the room?s only chair, the magical shadows of his disguise flowing onto the worn wood of the old furniture.  

Asuia nearly jumped out of her skin seeing the enigmatic stranger in her room.  Still dressed in the clothes from the night before, she jumped out of her bed and pulled open the drawer holding the knife she pulled off the beggar.

?Looking for this?? Kinshadow said with a hint of amusement in his voice as he flourished the silver dagger. ?It is inscribed with runes of power, bidding a specific ?weak minded? individual to a someone that is now my enemy.  The man down stairs holds a similar dagger and will undoubtedly kill you if you give him the chance.  I was attacked earlier by another of my enemies minions, but the attacker did not expect my ?wards of protection? to last so long.?  One of the few tricks he had learned from the Us-Si Lim.

?How did you find this out?? Asuria inquired.

?The weak minded can be a surprising wealthy fountain of knowledge if properly motivated.? Kinshadow mused as withdrew a second dagger covered in drying blood.

Asuria grimaced, having no taste for torture or its like.  Trying to gain composure, Asuria began to slowly rub the temples of her head and mouthed a quick blessing of Laanx.  ?Why would they want to kill me, I have no knowledge of your plots and schemes.?  

?They don?t know that and wouldn?t believe you if you told them.  Besides, if they think I?m unconscious, then they are only after you for insurance reasons.?

Asuria saw the truth in the dark Klyros?s words.  A slight depression overcame her and she sat heavily on the lumpy mattress of her bed.  ?Then it is pointless; Surin and I will have to move to a lower level or flee into the Stone Labyrinth!?

?Untrue, my faithful thief.  These attackers are but pawns used against their will.  If we destroy their controller, you and I will have nothing to fear.?

Asuria brightened a bit and firmed her determination. ?Then lets do it and you owe me big.  Where can we find the head-of-the-snake as it were??

?Your right, I do owe you? Kinshadow affirmed as he tossed a gem into the air.  Four times the size of the firestone she was given earlier.  Asuria beamed at her newfound wealth.  The dark stranger stood, moving fluidly toward the door. ?And we can find this snake in the last tomb you?ll ever need to loot.?