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the story of an enki name Irick
« on: April 13, 2006, 03:40:34 am »
as some of you might know im a mac user and i got bored wile waiting for the mac release of the new client so i wrote up this story to pass time.
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dark, the absence of light, the first moments of life are found in dark places. there is no exception for the character of this story. his first moments of memory are of darkness but his memories are not the norm, as far as he is concerned he was thrown into the middle of his life with no clue of where to go and no clue of where he come from. when he looked around he saw the world threw unknolageable eyes, looking around for a friendly face he went to the first being he saw and bid it hello. the being was a rogue, and this rogue was having a proticulary bad day. this particular rogue had just ran into town for a bit and was being picked off by strangers, \"oh brother\" thought the rogue \"here comes another one\", then he armed himself and went to meet the enki. \"hello si....\" was all our character had time to say before the rogue expertly sent him on a trip to to world of the dead.

the little Enki looked around at the new world he was so unwillingly thrown in. searching for a way out, a few days later he found a library, now libraries are curious things to one who is just beginning to see the world, rows and rows of small rectangular items all of witch have strange markings on them. after a wile of looking threw the library he come across a friendly face. \"can i help you sir\" asked the stranger. \"yes, can you tell me what these are?\" said the Enki. the stranger then proceeded into a long and slightly boring speech about books and their perpus and in the end our enki friend was quite exhausted from listening \"yes yes i understand but how do i use them?\" he asked slightly impatient. \"oh you don\'t know how to read?\" asked the stranger. over the following few months the kind stranger had taught our little fellow all he knew about reading. after the lessons the little Enki read all the books on things thought he might need to know in the world of the living. after a wile he grew bored and began reading stories. one particular collection of short stories stuck itself into his mind, it was a simple book but the Enki had taken in the values taught by the stories to hart he was reading one of the stories and found a name, it was the name of a dragon in the tale, the dragon had just come out of his cave and a typical knight in shining armor came and slayed the dragon even though it had not even tryed him harm. the Enki found the story useless but could not help but find a sympathy for the fictional dragon. from this story he took the name given to the dragon and bestowed it upon himself. from that moment forward he called himself Irick.

 after a few months of looking around he found a portal leading back to the living world. he walked threw and emerged in a setting long forgotten. this time around he disided to explore and stay away from the dark clad figures he had learned where called rogues. after a few days he came upon another town. for a wile he laid about near the blacksmiths talking to the people who cared to stop long enough and observed the behavior of those holding conversations and greeting others. from his observations he set up a few basic motions of greeting and settled on the bow.

 one day Irick was siting in the shade of his favorite tree when he met a quite eccentric individual. her name was Zorbels and she had just tied a pink ribbon around his tail. he stood up, quite confused by the action and asked if she wanted her ribbon back. she smiled and told him to keep it for a lady friend. after a wile of talking he expressed interest in joining the guild she belonged to. she handed him a scroll and he read, he was quite surprised to find that the rules pretty much defined the morals he had learned from his book. the fenki sent for a high ranking member to instate Irick in the guild.
once he was in the guild he felt something he had never remembered having, a sense of family and friendship. on that day Irick had finally found a friend, one of his most beloved memories, and later that vary day he had his first glimpse on one of the most hated practices he would ever have the displeasure of learning about, Slavery. his newfound friends where showing him where to go and who to see when they ran into two Kran.
he learned later that they where the employees of a certain Ashrock.
but he dident know that then. all he knew then is that they where exchanging harsh words with his new found friends, and that this was certainty not civilized behavior.
after several words and few looks exchanged it came to fighting. his friends dispatched the two with little effort and it seamed not to phase them, but in Iricks mind he was reliving his traumatic first experience with death and found in his hart a tinge of regret towards these two, that is until they came back for more.

this time there was only fighting and he found the ting of pity and been overwhelmed by a question \"are these two crazy or do they enjoy death?\"
after a similar dispatch he found the wondering gone, and returned to his friends. he asked them what was with the two Kran that had attacked them. his new friends explained about the house of Ashrock and how Zorbels had freed a slave from Ashrock himself. Irick was appalled to learn of slavery and delighted to learn of his friends stand ageist it. a wile after this encounter he met a kran named Zerrok who also belonged to the House of Ashrock, at first impression he seamed nice enough... until he opened his mouth. now its not to say that he was impolite but this Kran kept commenting on how good of a slave Irick wold make and irick had seen how well slaves where treated. it dident help that this kran was fixed on harming iricks friends. irick confronted him. \"sir if you plan on harming my friends you may find more resistance then you expected\" the kran looked at him and said calmly \"perhaps i should test your mettle now young protecter\". by this time Irick was Scared beyond anything he had ever felt but he managed to contain it \"I will not back down from a direct challenge sir, though i will most certainty die if i stand up to the challenge\" the kran nodded  and said \"yes you most surly wold, i see you are a realist.\" Irick shock his head \"no i am just not stupid\". luckily for Irick he was not sent to death realm that day and no physical harm was caused but he was scared from the encounters , even if he dident notice it. in his sub-conscience every time he met a Kran he thought about his first encounters with them and as a result it made it hard for him to forge friendships with Kran.

one day he got a bit curious about religion and asked one of his friends about the religion of Laanx. her name was Xillix, and Irick stood no chance. she took him high into the tower and proceeded to tell him about Laanx. she told how Laanx harnessed the power of the crystal to create to first race on this world. and how Talaad became impatient and in his attempts harmed her. she told him of the journeys that Laanx took and the events that took place during them. then she showed him the book of names. at this he was confused \"its just a book why do you hold it in such high regards\" he asked, she said \"this book was written by Laanx himself\"
and he replied \"so? they are just words i can right words and they wold look just the same\". she laughed and said \"yes but are your words magically suspended in a temple?\" \"no\" Irick admitted and disided that he should listen more then talk.
at the end of the conversation Irick decided to follow Laanx in hopes that perhaps the grate power Laanx had at his disposal might just trickle down and shed some light on his long forgotten past. and there is where the story lets off to be continued in life and written in the actions of a small enki, Self named.... Irick.
« Last Edit: April 13, 2006, 06:33:55 am by Irick »
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« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2006, 04:10:17 am »
Press return (enter) two times, not one. It\'s hard to read so many words smushed together.

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« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2006, 05:48:31 am »
noted i changed the text above to suite readers better
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« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2006, 02:49:04 pm »
i enjoyed reading your story Irick :)

and i hope this thread gets bigger with your story

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« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2006, 07:00:04 pm »
I enjoyed your story as well Irick. There is always room for improvment but this is a very good start. It is nice to know your history and I am happy that you are content with your desision to join the guild. We are happy to have you. :D

Zorbels says with a low growl leaking around her words \"Ashrock seems to be getting around and is becoming a pain. No matter I will soon be taking him out and asking others whom I trust to join me in this battle. Rest easy Irick, justice will be done and all the Enki\'s he still has as slaves will be freed\"
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chapter 2
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2006, 09:11:53 pm »
sleep, to rest in body and mind; to be without ordinary thought or movement.
we rejoin Irick deep in a deep sleep , thoughts swirl in his mind like a film of oil on a rolling tide of water. he is dreaming, a first for him, he looks around in wonder at a vast world . he looks down and notices the ground seems to be getting bigger. he looks up in fright and sees the Azure sun. the sight pacifies his beating hart, beautiful, he now cares not that he is falling, all he can think about is the sight above him and the sadness that it will not last.

a voise calls out to him, a voise he remembers, in anguish and loss.
looking up he sees nothing but knows that someone up there is calling him, he trys to shout \"here i am!\" but his mouth is not his own. he looks down at the ground and welcomes its embrace.


Irick woke up in a cold sweat,
he had seen something he did not remember, but it was familiar none the less.
he sat up and entered a deep state of mediation willing the memory to come back, to reveal its mysteries to him. but it was in vain. the memories where not Irick\'s so he had no control over them. after a few hours he got up and looked at the sky, the Azure sun glowed warmly. it was night, or at least as close to night as it got here, but the sun intrigued irick just the same. he gazed deep into the sky and made a resolution. \"i will find out how to use the powers of this sun\" he told himself \"and when i do i will find this voise and bring back the memories that are fighting to be freed\". he took one last look at the crystal, nodded to himself and slipped into a deep sleep filled with sound and pictures, but he wold remember none of it.
the only thing he wold remember is waiting to awake, and to see his friends again.
edited to remove some typos
« Last Edit: April 14, 2006, 08:04:51 pm by Irick »
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« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2006, 09:35:11 pm »
*NOTE: i intend to continue the story as a project. the post will be made on a \"whenever i feel like it\" schedule, i  plan make one large recap on events that molded Iricks rp every update. just hold tight! oh and dont be afrade to give me advise on how to make it better. i wold appreciate any feed back.
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« Last Edit: April 13, 2006, 10:17:58 pm by Irick »
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« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2006, 11:09:48 pm »
Friendship, one of the strongest bonds we can share with another being.
Irick has few friends and those few he has he is intensely loyal to.
We rejoin him in a massive library searching franticly for any mentions of a blue flame. his library run is brought on by the darkness slowly taking over Zorbels body.
his part in the cure was a solitary item, seems easy but after reading 60 books on all sorts natural and magic items he found no references to anything he could possibly use to find the item. he sighed and opened another book not bothering to look at its title. after a few seconds of skimming he stopped. the markings where not of the common language but he seamed to vaguely understand them, but when he went back to the book the understanding had gone. he sighed and tryed to remember what section he was in. "focus" said a small voise in his mind. mildly surprised at the voise but contributed it to stress and the lack of sleep, im trying, he thought,
but how am i suppose to find the item if i cant read some of the books. "you can" said the voise, "you just need to stop  trying to and just do it". what dose that even mean he thought but the voise did not reply. he sighed and picked up another book.
a few books later he still could not take his mind off of the book, after a wile he picked it up and decided to try reading it again opening the book he remembered the voise so he stopped trying to read the book and just skimmed over it, letting any thoughts associated with the symbols flow. he was surprised to find he could under stand the text again. reading through the book he found a reference to a strange crystal that then exposed to the azure sun's rays caused a reaction in the crystal that cased a light blue flickering energy, much life fire, ti appear inside the crystal. the book even had a map to the site where it could be found. a problem immediately revealed itself, the site where the crystals could be found lay in the mines of the house of ashrock. Irick let an annoyed hiss escape his lips. this task was not going to be an easy one.

Irick looked at the entrance of the mines and felt every bit of blood and every broken dream that went into the making of the giant stone tomb. at that moment any bit of regret he might have felt for what he was about to do vanished.
he took a deep breath and walked up to the guards. "greetings sirs," irick said to the guards trying his best to sound truthful " i have been instructed to bring you two this gold ore" he said with all the certisy he could manage. the two Kran looked down at him and took the ore without so much as a grunt. of course it was not really gold ore, it was a highly potent oxidant that reacted with the silicon in the Kran's bodies to create silicon oxide. the krans felt the burning instantly, "hey" said one "what was in that ore?" he asked but the little enki was already on his way into the mines. "HALT" yelled the kran, but to no avail, they tryed to give chase but the burning was to great to continue. they stopped to rest, they never got up.

Irick was running as fast as he could trying to not think about the two Kran that wold soon be just a pile of dust. he focused instead on getting to the Blue fire crystals, only a few more minuets of running and he wold reach the patch of dirt that the book had described. running down the tunnels he saw many enki being forced to work for their master's profit, he felt a bit of anger rise up but he extinguished it by telling himself that he wold free them after the immediate threat was over. he ran a little slower now and stuck to the shadows at to not be seen by the passing kran and enki.
after a wile of running and hiding he came to a small patch of dirt and began digging, after a few minutes he yielded results, he stuck the small red crystal into his pack, strange thing about the blue fire crystal, it was red unless it was in direct light of the crystal sun, many often disregarded it as just a common crystal, but irick had studied every picture of it in the book and knew the formation by hart. he got up and turned around to make his brake for the exit. "well well well what do we have here" said a voise. Irick froze, a tough looking kran stood in his way and two others backed him up. "look here" said the kran "looks like we found ourselves a new slave." irick had his hands on the hilts of his daggers, he wasent going to be anyones slave. "let me handle them" said the voise in his head. Irick blinked in surprise. have fun with them he thought and then, darkness.

when irick awoke he was covered in bits of rock and a dark ooze plastered his fur down. he spent little time wondering what happened, only one thing was important now, getting the crystal to Zorbels.
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Re: the story of an enki name Irick
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2006, 10:46:19 pm »
 \\o//


Irick, I applaud your writing skills and would encourage you to write as often as you feel the urge, your work is impressive and I look forward to reading more.

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« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2006, 10:50:42 pm »
:)  \\o//  \\o//  \\o//  \\o//  :thumbup:  \\o//  \\o//  \\o//  \\o//  :)
Awesome story telling Irick. I enjoyed it and you are getting better at writing with every word. Zorbels owes you one! 
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« Reply #10 on: May 08, 2006, 09:46:26 pm »
(chapter moved for later ^^)
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« Reply #11 on: May 11, 2006, 10:43:48 pm »
contend removed, because i desided it was stupit  :-\
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« Reply #12 on: May 12, 2006, 03:53:50 pm »
death, the ending of any form of life.
death is no stranger to Irick, the death guard knows him by name by now.
we find Irick in the plaza under his favorite tree. Esseda walked up and irick bowed. after the normal familiarities where exchanged and a conversation started a mention of Esseda's sister came up. a young Yawnn spoke up "ya i have seen her, Zorbels killed her a wile ago" Irick froze, Esseda looked stunned. "i failed her" she said. several people tryed to comfort Esseda but the Yawnn just laghfed and said "yes you did". at this moment Irick grew suspitus of the information. Esseda walked off still in a fluster, Irick turned to the Yawnn and lost his temper "YOU! YOU LIE" he shouted of the Yawnn. "calm down mate" came the response "i lie, cheat, steal..." Irick cut him off in mid sentence "THEY ARE MY FRIENDS" he exclaimed "YOU ARE TRYING TO CAUSE STRIFE!" he lunged at the Yawnn then remembered his manners and challenged him to a duel. the coward declined with a whisper and said loudly "See you can not touch me" Irick heard a voise behind him, a voise he remembered from his early days of the protecters "you can take him Irick".
he looked around to find a Kran, his name was Zerrok. The Yawnn ran off as Irick turned. but irick didn't notice. he regarded Zerrok with cold eyes "how are you Irick?" asked Zerrok. "i am well" replied Irick "how is Zorbels?" asked Zerrok. Irick became a bit nervous "fine" he said. "you know" said Zerrok "my master could make you rich if you decided to work for us". Irick looked up at the Kran "i was wondering why you where here, the answer, as you may have expected, is no", Zerrok nodded "i expected as much, vary well. if you are not with us you are an enemy. i will have to kill you." Irick bowed "i great an enemy as i wold a friend". Irick lunged  attacking at the legs and throat. Zerrok had no problem avoiding the blows and struck Irick in the throat and hart. Irick stumbled back and Zerrok landed the final blow. as his spirit left him Iricks last heard words where Zerrok saying "honorable menki" then, Irick died.
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« Reply #13 on: May 12, 2006, 11:05:59 pm »
I was kneeled looking at the ground. the wind blew around me. leafs rustled in the background. "you want me to find him?" i said. My master looks down upon me "yes, i want you to find him. i do not think he is dead. he was to crafty to be killed by a short fall" my master wanted me to kill my love again. it was the ultimate test of loyalty.
"he is to dangerous to be kept alive. you remember what he did" his eyes followed the scar up my arm, "to all of us". i nodded, the pain still fresh in my mind "i will obey my lord" even as i said the words my mind was racing back to the last time i saw my love. he was attempting to gather the powers of the crystal sun, the assassins all dead, killed by the powers he had successfully gathered from the great crystal. i was the last one standing. "don't do this to me" i pleaded but to no avail, he was to absorbed with the powers of the azure sun. "silence, it is my turn. the two here have been greedy. i want that kind of power." i knew that the one i fell in love with was no longer there, replaced by this power hungry monster. i set my resolve. and lunged at him.

i felt his blood run over my hand, withdrew the dagger from his hart and watched him stagger back to the edge of the cliff. he stood there for a second, just looking at me with sadness in his eyes. then he let himself fall.

i rushed to the edge of the cliff tryed to catch his hand. i was to late. i screamed out his name and fell to my knees sobbing.

a voise broke the memory "are you sure you are up to this task?" my master asked a slight tone of tenderness in his voise. i stood up "i killed him once. i can do it again"
and with those words a firmly placed a soul glyph in my dagger's hilt and sheathed my blade. "this time ill make sure he dose not return."

OOC: i have Irick"s permission to post this.

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« Reply #14 on: June 26, 2006, 07:11:39 am »
we rejoin the Enki Irick, deeply in slumber, reliving a the few memorys he had reseved from his past. the preist called them a blessing. Irick called them a curse.
Irick stirs slightly, his mind going over the earlyest memory he has.


a young Enki on a ledge, crying. his black fur matted down with sweat, his cheast covered in blood. he wipes the tears from his eyes and looks down at the toun below. a singal word runs about his mind ...... Beautiful. the young Enki looked in wonder at the people going about there busness, at this hight he could see evry detail of the town. his mind distracted by the wander of this toun failed to relize that he had lost  his footing and he sliped. he wieldly scrambeled to get a hold of something to halt his fall and ended up hanging barly by the tips of his claws.
he felt a mew of dispaire excape his throught and serched wieldly around for another rock to clime up to. he found none. the enki felt his grip sliping and he paniced. the rock gave way and for a split second time stoped. "this is it" he thought "i am going to die." he closed his eyes tight "mother... father... wait for me".

a hand shot out and grabed his, saveing him from the freefall. he looked up to see a Human climer pulling him to safty. one he got his bareings the little Enki huged the climer tightly, crying out "you saved me from the fall..." the human just smiled down at the Enki "its not the fall you shold be woryed about young one, its the sudden stop at then end that gets you" the wity coment did nothing to calm the small cub down. the human looked woryedly at the Enki "young one, where are your parents?" the boy stoped crying, a new fealing replaceing it. one of hatrid
"dead... evryone dead" he said scornfully "those....... bad people.... they killed them, tryed to get me to. but i was quick." i said ponting to a large cut above his hart.
the human kneeled down to the cubs level "what is your name young one" he said in a sothing voise. the young Enki replyed "i do not have a name. my nameing day was set for after my 5th seson..... today is my day of birth.... i am 4 sesons"
the human nodded, "i will respect this. for now i will call you Tabei. [freind] for lack of a better name." the enki boy sat down, not realy lissoning to the human and begain to plot to revenge his parents.

he was 4, his parrents had been killed in front of him by a gang of bandits.
he prayed to no god in perticular, just prayed for help geting vengance for his parents. little did he know this request wold be ansered, and becuse of it, he wold become one of the most fearsom assasens of his time.... but his storry is to be conteued....
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