zanzibar, I'm not going to try and fight with you, but...you started this post by trolling. The story wasn't done in first-person, meaning that this is you, not Shal, you're telling it, not your character, it's your view, not his. So in other words, you're trolling, because you made this post with many complaints about how Quittaa beat you. Everyone else is just criticizing you for it.
Now, I'm not posting in this thread anymore, for a few reasons I won't say.