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The story of Peacer chapter one. The sign of Talad

[we are now looking through his fathers eyes from where the story of Peacer begins]

I am on my way to work, it's still dark, the azure crystal tells me that the clock is 5am.
"sigh" but it's there i will have my best chances of meeting talad.
My name is Reddlaic Cuardian, a male nolthrir who lives at the 8'th level of yliakum in a mediumsized elven village!
The village is between the 8'th level lake from where the nolthrirs origined and a forest from where the demorians origined
The way is long to my work, but fortunately without my nightvision i wouldn't be able to see my own feet in the dark
and would probably fall. but i won't let down talad, or myself. I will continue and pray untill i get another sign like the other one i had recently
Maybe i could get some more information on what happened there, at that day, wit hthe other sign. I Certainly hope so.
I walk around a turn and see a temple of talad, where i work. I walk inside and hangs up my coat on the clothes tree.

When i get inside i see the big statue of talad at the end of the room, and my one week old colleague Nalrim Malrunor-a male demorian- running towards me with a unusual weird look in his eyes and his face.
He me and bowed over, while upholding himself with his armsto catch his breath, saying still a bit exhausted " Reddlaic! thank goodness you arrived!"
Reddlaic get's a curious look in his face "any sign's from talad?"
Nalrim nods with his eyes wide open "y... yes! Look... look at his eyes!" and points up towards talad's eyes which were switching between a green and blue color

Reddlaic smiles at the eyes and whispers quietly "another sign!" as he watches the eyes for a couple of seconds he turns his attention towards Nalrim again and says
"he tries to get in contact with me again, Nalrim, could i ask you to go get a flying scroll?"
Nalrim nods fast multiple times and runs towards the clothes tree to grab his coat and run into the night leaving Reddlaic alone with the glowing eyes and the statue.




"Mistress.... Mistress wake up, there is an emergency, hurry, wake up, WAKE UP" Why should i wake up, what is happening, is it... a dream?
No.... please.... please don't... it can't be... he is so beautiful and sweet, his heart is of light and his hair of the sweetest black as a black perl.
I want to touch him, come on, so close, so close, my hand so close, i must go closer. "MISTRESS WAKE UP IT'S NALRIM!" So close....
the picture disappears and i slowly see my bedroom and kinuale, my apprentice at the house of healing, where we heal the wounded. I am in the elite department of healers And i am the leader of that department.

Kinuale looked at me with water in her eyes. "Mistress, Nilram is laying at a bed, we don't know what to do with him, we need you over there."
I open my eyes very quick and goes to a sitting position in my bed almost meeting with Kinuale's head in my fast movement. "What happened to him?"
Kinuale looks confused and puzzled in her facedrawings and says "I don't know juliana, the one bringing him there was a bypasser who saw him collapse all of a sudden!"
Hmm that is very odd, how can someone as healthy as Nalrim collapse so easily? Perhaps? No... it can't be, why should anyone ttry to harm him with poisonous potions?
I draw upon a thoughtful look in my face trying not to show any concern as a professional and says "Very odd indeed, i must see what is wrong hope nothing will harm him!"

I draw me feet and put them outside my bed and looks at kinuale "i am goign to dress myself now.." Kinuale nods to me and understands my allusion and walks out the door.
I look at my white robe and my azure blue robe, don't know which one to use, proffesional or personal?
I walk towards the white robe but stops and turn at the azure-blue robe. I put it on and finds a bag which i pack with my white robe.
I rush down the stairs and outside my house without looking at any of my artifacts to find kinuale outside my door waiting for me "let's go" she says and we both walk fastly towards the house of healing

When i arrive at the house of healing i rush inside and throw my bag into a locker, turn they key and put it into my inner robe pocket.
I rush through the white walls with paintings of ancient healers and magic symbols which represent good health.
I turn down a sideway to arrive in familiar quarters, my home in the house of healers... my department... and my cousin.
When i walk inside i see my female healing colleagues standing around a bed with Nalrim in it, as i walk in the door they all look helpplessly at me. "We have tried everything but nothing can heal him
it would take a strong mage to heal this one, i doubt that you are strong enough for this one..." I  slowly take up my hand to tell her not to worry anymore and continue my look towards Nalrim which lies there in the bed!

He looks terrible, his eyes are normal but around them they are as red as the temple in hydlaa, and around his nose he has the colour of a kran. And his mouth, forget hsi mouth i can't describe it.
Becuase of some reason he has a blanket to cover everything but his face, i don't want to think about what he looks like there and shrugs.
It's brown but somehow looks like a crack in some stone. He is awake... poor Nalrim... i hope it doens't hurt. His lips seem to be moving, he tries to tell me something. "Juliana.... temple... scroll... nolthrir.... master... don't... worry... just... do..!"
It seems he has trouble speeking with that mouth, maybe i'd better just do it. It could heal him. I lower my head and replies "as you wish cousin, if it can give you peace i will!"
I turn around with my words hanging in the air and quickly leave the room.

Running, my feet moving my upper body fastly down the streets towards the big temple at the end of the city which i have never been at yet. I don't follow any god but recognize their existance
I stop at the entrance and look upwards the building and open the doors to the temple of Talad, I look a bit around in my first temple and see pillars along the side to support some road that leads to a balcony above me which is supported by two pillars.
The balcony seems to be some place from where the priests speaks to the crowd during ceremonies if you are to judge it on the benches alongside the wall pointing towards the balcony. On the wall there are several weird pictures i have no knowledge of as i follow no god.

There are also strange symbols cut into the wall. pillars and benches. Everywhere they are. And at the end of the room, there is a big statue and an unclear nolthrir standing and looking at the statues eyes which seems to be switching between a green and blue color.
I bet this is important, and this socalled priest is going to pay for sending Nalrim on such a dangerous mission. I walk towards the nolthrir with my eyes narrowed and the scroll in my right hand.
As i get closer but not close enough for him to be clear to my eyes i don't know why but i look at the eyes of the statue again, i keep walking while wondering why the statue acts that crazy, i notice something black and look down to find the nolthrir close in front of me who has hair that shines like a black perl!


[more will be added soon, the first chapter isn't finish yet]
« Last Edit: May 18, 2006, 10:18:04 pm by Peacer »
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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2006, 08:35:52 am »
a great story, i hope you will write chapter one complete very soon \\o//

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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2006, 03:48:18 pm »
thank you ninya ^^ i think i have more time for writing now that i have summer vacations :D
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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #3 on: June 27, 2006, 02:34:06 am »

My name is Reddlaic Cuardian, a male nolthrir who lives at the 8'th level of yliakum
 

its my understanding that the 7th and 8th levels of yliakum are always submerged so does this mean that all of the is going on underwater?

otherwise pretty good story
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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2006, 02:02:26 am »
oops my bad :)... i'll change it... doesn't go underwater as kinuale is a demorian :)
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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2006, 04:44:23 am »
Nice story. Writing is good too. I like it!

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Re: The history of Peacer, before and after he was born *update 1*
« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2006, 06:09:01 am »
thank you for the compliment faolach i will have to pull my tail (if i can find it) and go fix the rest of the story, although i'm going to germany soon where i will bring my laptop and probably get something written =)
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