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[Spetyco]

Laragorn!  You dirty theiving dog!  You're the villian aren't you!

[LARAGORN]

It just seemed like the right thing to do
and i guess time will tell......

I dont think anyone is gonna catch Laragorn, he is an amazing runner. but if you feel there should be a chase then so be it.

[Spetyco]

It just seemed like the right thing to do
and i guess time will tell......

I guess it depends what you find in my bag.  Keep in mind that whatever it is, I wasn't aware of it at first, so it must be hidden.  But I've begun to have some memories returning, slowly, and that's why I was after it.

I think I may still have an evil villian hidden within me somewhere...

As you say, "time will tell"

[LARAGORN]

I guess Farren didnt read my post above.
Farren you seem to exellent at everything.
I will change what i had in mind.

[Farren Kutter]

I doubt your character could outrun me IRL, much less a dermorian Ranger who loves running... Farren sucks at fighting for the most part, doesn't think far enough ahead. sucks at magic. can't cook, or wash dishes, nor clean his room.

[LARAGORN]

Laragorn is a dermorian, and speed is his only tallent (well so far), he has no fighting ability as you can see with his first attack, he was impaled by an ulbers claw.

[Spetyco]

...Spetyco is a clumsy Ylian, who has a nasty habit of falling into caves full of gobbles.
Where he happens to be right now if anyone cares!

[Farren Kutter]

The point is Farren was the Master Ranger and only Enkidukai will outrun him... such as Zorbels. Or Zhai, who is even faster, and the new Master Ranger (or Lady of the Rangers as she likes being called). Aside from that, Farren has likely been around longer than you, meaning he has had more time to hone his abilities. Especially running.

[LARAGORN]

You mean to say that there is now way you could meet someone who can run faster than you ? hhmm
No one knows Laragorns history, you dont know his age , occupation, or anything else other than what has been seen in the last 2 days.
Ok this ends here. this will not get out of hand, I concider this topic closed. you are the fastest runner.

[zorbels]

I doubt your character could outrun me IRL, much less a dermorian Ranger who loves running... Farren sucks at fighting for the most part, doesn't think far enough ahead. sucks at magic. can't cook, or wash dishes, nor clean his room.

Farren I am thinking an enki could out run you easy. Our race was built for speed.

I agree with Laragorn, you seem to write yourself as good at everything. That isn't a compliment, more than a could you tone it down plea. I am not trying to insult you, but I think this should be team work, not Farren always comes to the rescue. I enjoy your writing and would like to see your character be a little more demorian and a little less godly. Your style of writing fits into the story well, and I hope you veiw this post as me just trying to help. For example when you were chasing Laragorn maybe write in that you stumble on a rock and lose time catching up to him, and then you have to work harder to catch him. Sometimes the good guys don't always catch the bad guys as well.

I hope that helps. Anyway I will let Farren and Laragorn lead the way on this chase.

[Edit] I didn't see that before I posted Farren.  Thanks I see it now.

[Farren Kutter]

Erm, Zorbs... I just said enkidukai would outrun Farren...

[Spetyco]

OK, Laragorn.  The balls in your court now.  What was in Spetyco's pack?  I think this and what is found at the magic shop will give us a clue to what is going on.

[zhai]

Spet, you should decide that. after all, it's about who you were and where you gonna go from there.

[Spetyco]

Spet, you should decide that. after all, it's about who you were and where you gonna go from there.

Good point, but I may need some help deciding, since I've never actually played PS yet!  Though I'm getting a pretty good feel of things from the forum.  Any help would be appreciated.
Thanks.

[zhai]

items used in previous rps regarding mind control or spirit possession are weapons, crystals, apples, and potions. it could also be something that links you to a dark guild (like guild seal or book or again a weapon or something of the sort) with no magical properties but a strong statement to bare. that way you wouldn't necessarily be evil but you'd still have a dark past.