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Re: [OOC] Community Story For All To Join Comments
« Reply #225 on: July 06, 2006, 07:08:53 am »
The evil guy looks like Spetyco, and the two of them have an uknown connection, that I plan on writing a different story about.  He switched bodies with the real Spetyco, so if you kill the real Spetyco's body, the real Spetyco's soul dies.  If you kill the evel one's body, his soul dies.  That's why he's hidden his body away and set guards in place, though they were less competent that he expected.  Make sense?
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« Reply #226 on: July 06, 2006, 07:10:57 am »
I just read what was written and I like it alot. My only concern is others who want to have a final say in this battle as well. They may want to have something to kill, or be included in the ending as well...... Not sure what do you guys think?

[Edit] Maybe the campers could team up on the evil spetyco?
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« Reply #227 on: July 06, 2006, 07:14:05 am »
Absolutly, Spetyco gave us a wave of serpents to take care of :)
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« Reply #228 on: July 06, 2006, 07:19:38 am »
OK!  Bad guys dead, but the huge serpent is still coming.  BTW, Laragorn, it's just one.  It's the serpent from the magic shop.  It's big, and supposedly can fly as well.  I'm not sure what other abilities it has.  So here's your final battle.
And you might have someone hurry to try to help the real Spetyco's spirit return to his body, though I think Spetyco and Aphtarin should have a battle in the DR, or else Aptharin may come back.  Maybe Xlaal could help with that battle?  Then again, we could leave it open for Aptharin to come back in another story...
  But for now I must go to bed.
« Last Edit: July 06, 2006, 07:51:28 am by Spetyco »
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« Reply #229 on: July 06, 2006, 07:30:12 am »
 \\o// Wooooo Hoooo! Well set up guys. Now everyone in the camp can have a peice of the snake well the "good" Spetyco fights the "evil" Spetyco. Write away peoples, I will follow lead with the snake and everyone's writings. I will also help close up the story if needed.
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« Reply #230 on: July 06, 2006, 07:34:30 am »
You got  it Zorbels :)
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« Reply #231 on: July 06, 2006, 08:52:13 am »
I'm going to be out of the office all day and unable to post for 8-9 hours so do what you like with Hoki just remember magic doesn't affect him and he hates to kill unless necessary and will mostly try to protect the  child
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« Reply #232 on: July 06, 2006, 05:37:10 pm »
sorry guys had a lot of stuff going on lately, and wasnt able to post fast enough thanks spetyco for RPing for me, and unfortunately i did have to use anduintalonhawk for my in-game name.



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« Reply #233 on: July 06, 2006, 06:02:46 pm »
 :thumbup: Nice. Can't wait for the finale.  :D

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« Reply #234 on: July 06, 2006, 06:55:42 pm »
FYI.  We have created the second, and the third largest topics under the "Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting)" section of this forum!

Hurray for us!
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« Reply #235 on: July 06, 2006, 07:05:14 pm »
@Zorbels  would you like to discribe what is happening to Aphtarin, since his real body is now dead. Zhai is working on leading Spetyco to his body, so we need to explain what is taking place.

Who is gonna give the first blow to the evil serpant?
Will they be able to stop this creature?
Will they survive ?
Or are they all doomed to die ?
For answers to these questions and more, please stay tuned for the final chapter of "The Battle For Yliakum"


Side note:  I am off to explore, and enjoy the game, I'll check back here around 5 or 6pm  ( 4-5 hours from the time stamp on this post)
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« Reply #236 on: July 06, 2006, 08:12:11 pm »
Laragorn and Zhai!  Who has the book?  If you go back a little, Laragorn says he switched the real book for a fake one.  So Zhai, you would need to get it from him, or else Laragorn needs to edit a few posts.

[edit] But Aphtarin never dealt with Levrus, he just summoned the snake and left quickly, so there's good chance Levrus was chasing after the snake.  So he might show up soon...
« Last Edit: July 06, 2006, 08:15:08 pm by Spetyco »
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« Reply #237 on: July 06, 2006, 08:13:40 pm »
oh, dang... ok, i'll fix mine.

edit: if Levrus is half way to the camp, we just need to give him the book. whoever has it...
« Last Edit: July 06, 2006, 08:31:17 pm by zhai »
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« Reply #238 on: July 06, 2006, 10:46:41 pm »
As it stands it is still tucked in my belt, behind my back.

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Re: [OOC] Community Story For All To Join Comments
« Reply #239 on: July 06, 2006, 10:51:12 pm »
So I was thinking, when the story ends and is locked what should we call it? Community Story For All To Join won't really work because once locked no one can join. Any suggestions?
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