NEW GUILD! Vampire HunterLords

[Colinb]

I got a little story for the portal
Long ago in the lands of planeshift there was a portal linking a dark world to the lands of planeshift. From these lands vampires poured out they were hungry and very tired of there world. The portal was based at the fort Bronze Doors the vampires walked the road attacking the merchants in cold blood. Then they came to a quiet town known as Hydlaa. It will never be the same again...
Feel free to comment my story.

[Suno_Regin]

A long time ago in yalkium there was a god named Talad and he was a giant rock!  People got bored with the rock and became vampires.  The first vampire bit Talad the rock and stole his powers and now the whole planeshift is threatened!  Many died and others are maimed or injured or homeless.  Worse still the land divided into guilds of vamipres and guilds of not vampires.  They began to feud!  Soon many had become werewolfs or leikans! This was very scary and no one liked turning into a werewolf.  One such warewolf was powerbeast himself. He got that name when someone at school said he was ugly like a beast and so he threw the kid through the laanx temple!  Talk to the guard near there he knows it all.  Then powerbeast was sad because no girls like him because he turns into a werewolf and kills things so he decided to make a magic spell that could turn him into a regualr Xalcha again!  He did it with mushrooms and apples and carrots!  Then he took the cure and gathered all the werewolf beasts who were  sad and cured them  and then started a guild to kill all the evil vampires.  They were called the vampire hunterlords and now they come to kill vampires with special weapons!  One day they came across Jekkar his guild was being eaten alive and turned into vampirs and werewolfs by vampires!  Sickened by the slaugter powebeast rose up and called upon his greatest mopst powerful daylight shiner to brighten the land!  THe land became like day and the vampires vanished in a puff of green and red smoke!  It was a great day for vampirehunterlords and then Powebeast cured jekkar and Induane from vampireness as tehy were the only ones who could be saved and they joined and became darkness killers!  Powerbeast turned to jekkar "Welcom aboard stranger! Today is indeed a good day for vampire hunterlords!"

...What are you, 9? Seriously...read up on Yliakum history sometime. This is a very sorry excuse for a guild as far as I'm concerned, especially the "biggest and bestest guild in ps history" part. Waste of 20K.

[Induane]

PowerBeast don't worry about what suno_Regin says.  btw I made you some fan art!

[Colinb]

Ummmm I am not going to say a thing but suno was right about the history maybe that can use some editing.

[Suno_Regin]

I don't have any problems with the vampire part, but the history and spelling is just pathetic...It's things like this that make me want to stop playing. Guilds require a solid history, a lot of work to maintain, and especially matured roleplayers as higher-ups to take care of recruitment. Right now what I see is a bunch of kids who are looking to mass recruit everyone and become a huge guild...reminds me a lot of Radiant Fate.

[Jekkar]

History is fine. I as Jekkar officialy aprove it! Now there, that's enough to let it be like that isn't it?

[Suno_Regin]

Jekkar, if I were you I'd go back to the Dark Empire...

[Jekkar]

That's the biggest insult someone has ever given me  .

[RayvenD]

A long time ago in yalkium there was a god named Talad and he was a giant rock!  People got bored with the rock and became vampires.  The first vampire bit Talad the rock and stole his powers and now the whole planeshift is threatened!  Many died and others are maimed or injured or homeless.  Worse still the land divided into guilds of vamipres and guilds of not vampires.  They began to feud!  Soon many had become werewolfs or leikans! This was very scary and no one liked turning into a werewolf.  One such warewolf was powerbeast himself. He got that name when someone at school said he was ugly like a beast and so he threw the kid through the laanx temple!  Talk to the guard near there he knows it all.  Then powerbeast was sad because no girls like him because he turns into a werewolf and kills things so he decided to make a magic spell that could turn him into a regualr Xalcha again!  He did it with mushrooms and apples and carrots!  Then he took the cure and gathered all the werewolf beasts who were  sad and cured them  and then started a guild to kill all the evil vampires.  They were called the vampire hunterlords and now they come to kill vampires with special weapons!  One day they came across Jekkar his guild was being eaten alive and turned into vampirs and werewolfs by vampires!  Sickened by the slaugter powebeast rose up and called upon his greatest mopst powerful daylight shiner to brighten the land!  THe land became like day and the vampires vanished in a puff of green and red smoke!  It was a great day for vampirehunterlords and then Powebeast cured jekkar and Induane from vampireness as tehy were the only ones who could be saved and they joined and became darkness killers!  Powerbeast turned to jekkar "Welcom aboard stranger! Today is indeed a good day for vampire hunterlords!"

...What are you, 9? Seriously...read up on Yliakum history sometime. This is a very sorry excuse for a guild as far as I'm concerned, especially the "biggest and bestest guild in ps history" part. Waste of 20K.

Amen

[Colinb]

Please no flaming here i dont want to be accused again of somthing going bad here.

[Farren Kutter]

Ummm.... Is this some joke? I mean, seriously, are there really people like this playing Planeshift???

[Suno_Regin]

Apperantly so...-.-

[Jekkar]

Ok ok, I apologise....for ever being in the DE

[Suno_Regin]

So you'd rather go to a guild formed by kids trying to sound cool, than go to a nicely thought out guild like the Dark Empire?

[Colinb]

Well I just like to tell stories and yes there are people like that there is already a vampire guild testing how it will go always good to use alts!