Feh, I get long delays before someone answer meh

And I don't think i'm qualified to answer yet, I don't have any tutorials to give and i'm rather lousy at giving critics, but my arrogance fights me so I guess i'll have to give it a try

Your style's very cartoonish, not very detailed, maybe if you worked more on the textures and adding goodies. Your drawing skills seem to be fine, clean lineart.
That's all I can think of, good job
