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Bonamera

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« on: September 22, 2006, 03:51:14 pm »
Here is a wallpaper I made for a good PS friend. He liked it and said it would be a good idea to share it. Enjoy!









[pictures taken from PlaneShift]

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Re: soonTM
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2006, 04:27:34 pm »
hahah very comical! :D I like it!
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Re: soonTM
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2006, 04:28:06 pm »
i know that hydlaa shot was taken from the hills outside. what was the rough position you were at?
may laanx frighten the shadow from my path.
hardly because the shadow built the lexx.
the shadow will frighten laanx from my path.

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Re: soonTM
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2006, 04:30:07 pm »
I can't remember the exact position... was one of the first screenshots I took and I'm playing for about seven months

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Re: soonTM
« Reply #4 on: September 22, 2006, 04:33:29 pm »
yea thats a nice one! :thumbup:
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Re: soonTM
« Reply #5 on: September 22, 2006, 07:19:55 pm »
I like the sleek look of that Yliakum diagram :] The whole thing has a very "clean" feel.

Though my one nitpick is "When it's ready?" being grammatically incorrect. "When's it ready?" is more like it.
Judge: Are you trying to show contempt for this court, Mr Smith?
Smith: No, My Lord. I am attempting to conceal it.

Bonamera

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Re: soonTM
« Reply #6 on: September 23, 2006, 06:50:01 am »
I'm glad you like it and thanks for the constructive criticism.
Here you can see the screenshots I used:
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j172/danamariana/Ojaveda.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j172/danamariana/Hydlaa.jpg

Bladur said the background is a bit too bright and the font used for the city names if ok but the rest of the text is a bit too military.
I won't change this one because the gift is already made and I can't take it back, but I'll keep in mind for the next time.