Author Topic: Skagwort's Biography  (Read 2670 times)

Skagwort

  • Wayfarer
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Outcast
    • View Profile
Skagwort's Biography
« on: September 22, 2006, 10:14:58 pm »
Hey I'm Skagwort the dwarf from Elemental Lights. I originally wrote this story for a laugh for our Character Biography page in our forum but... aah... mine got a bit long.

Anyway I carried it on and a lot of guildmembers think its so good I should put it up on here so people outside the guild can read it.
Here it is! Enjoy!

EDIT: it seems I can't fit it all in one post! I'll break it up into it's chapters.

Skagworts Biography:

Aye I am Skagwort, a Dwarf that has travelled far and wide through Yliakum and now calls it his home.
The story of my past is not one that is heard often, but occasionally, it permits itself to be told.

Chapter 1: The Time Of Troubles
I have no idea where I was born, nor by whom. I am told that I was found by a roadside, up upon the surface of the world, by a merchant, a tiny baby, with no parents, no possessions, nothing but a small basket within which I was wrapped. Tucked into the folds of my quilt there was a small piece of parchment which had upon it the words;

This here be Skagwort, our beloved baby. For reasons we cannot say we are forced to leave him out here, under the guidance of Laanx and whoever may find him. We beg of you to treat him well and to nurture him as though he is your own.

The merchant had four children of his own back home so could not raise me himself, but he gave me to the orphanage of the next place that he stopped at; the Quetchenaztar Outpost, owned by Lemurs. Lemurs are an odd race, elven and ethereal yet mortal at the same time. Incredibly beautiful and very artistic. It was no place for a Dwarf if I'm honest. I grew up with my foster parents who took me in when nobody else would. I was so very different from their kind yet they loved me for my personality if not for my looks. My mother, a magical healer of renown, was very close to me and I learned her powers of healing quickly and was a competent healer early in my years. My father and I were not so close, he was a builder and his work was hard out in the suns glare, meaning most days he would return in a foul mood, often becoming angry if the slightest thing wasn't his way. Other than at working days though, he was good to me, treating me like a son at least, just one that was not quite as he wanted it. I loved my parents and they loved me back.

The other Lemurs were another matter, I was an outcast, a smaller, fatter, hairier creature than they would ever be. The children made fun of me and never let me join in their games, sometimes making excuses as to why I couldn't join in, while other times just telling me they didn't like me. It was a sad time, I spent most of my childhood with my mother or practicing my swordsmanship in my room. My dream was to join the army.

I thought that if I could be accepted into the army, I would become as beautiful and graceful and artistic as they were. One of them, one of many. Throughout my younger years I trained and trained until I was at the peak of fitness, my swordsmanship unmatched by even the generals son. It consumed me.
No Lemur boy would pick a fight with with me now unless he had a hankerin for a black eye. Occasionally they did though, and even though they started the fight, I would be the one to get scolded for hurting the boy. My parents had sympathy for me but could do nothing for the other Lemurs would see it as them turning against their own kind, and probably get driven out of the outpost. I couldn't let that happen.

At fifteen years old I enlisted in the Lemur army, excited about the fantastic opportunity I would have to prove my worth and be finally accepted. They granted me my wish and I was a soldier for the first time in my life, the special Armour was  beaten into shape by the local blacksmith, a man who I had once worked for until his shop caught alight and burned down. I saved them from the fire, all of them, him, his wife and three children but his left arm was severely burnt and he was no longer able to create the works of art he once had. Even though I saved their lives at a young age of eleven, I received no thank you. Even so he made me my Armour as best as he could and I walked into the academy as proud as I had ever been. That feeling did not last long, I did not make any friends in the academy and nobody helped me with my training. Not that I need much help, I was far superior to most other recruits, but that didn't help my popularity at all. If anything, it made it worse.

Other rivals rose above me in rank very fast, where as I went only as high as Sergeant, even with my superior skills. Sergeant was fine for me at the time though, I was in charge of a small group of soldiers, though that was questionable at times. The Lemur soldiers did not like to be ordered around by me, as I was a Dwarf. They told me that they had no reason to do as I told them as this was the Lemur army, and I was definatly not a Lemur.
Command gave me a mission to prove myself, we were to raid a small Klyros settlement that command had deemed too close to the outpost.
We set up camp just over the hill from the settlement, kept our fires small so that they wouldn't see the smoke and prepared to attack in the morning. We were to the west of the village so that they would not be able to see us against the glare of the sun, and it would far harder for them to fight. This was a tactic of mine, I was very proud of it. That morning, as the suns rays hit the village we stormed down the hill towards our unready foe. We saw them look up in our direction in fear but had to shield their eyes against the bright sunlight. By the time they were running for their weapons, we were already upon them.

We had strict orders to kill as few as possible, only those who proved a threat. The rest were to be captured and sold as slaves. As we entered the village my men hacked down the guards and anyone who had a weapon as had been instructed. But they didn't stop their, they carried on to kill the other citizens, slitting the throats of ones who submitted and slaughtering the rest. I told them to stop, tried my hardest to rally them and stop their blood lust but none of them listened. As the rest of my regiment set fire to the houses, three of the largest Lemurs advanced on me. Obviously I survived or I wouldn't be telling this tale but they attacked with a look in their eyes I had not seen before in any of theirs; hate. I dodged the first blow, quickly retaliating with my short sword and driving it deep into his chest, the dark liquid that spilled from the wound staining my sword. I pulled it out just in time to dodge another swipe from next to me. A dagger whipped past my head while the one in the Lemur's other hand cut a wide gash down my thigh. I cried out in pain and drove my short sword into the Lemur's head, through his eye. As his body collapsed I felt a sword slash my back and pain ripped into me through the wound. I found just enough strength in me to turn and bury my sword in his stomach. As I collapsed I heard a soldier shout something to somebody, I watched the world spin for a second and then the blackness closed in.

I awoke in my bed. For a second I thought to myself, “Had it all been a dream? Is it the day before the mission and none of this happened?” and then I tried to sit up, and the sharp pain in my back told me differently. It took me a month to completely heal, it would have been longer had it not been for my mother. She cast healing spells on me constantly and I am grateful for it, for if she hadn't I would surely be dead. Apparently my soldiers carried me back to the Outpost, though I have no idea why. I thought they must have the same feelings as the three that attacked me. Obviously not.

I was summoned by command a week after being 'able' again. I wasn't sure what to expect, the mission had been a failure and I had killed three Lemurs. I went into the huge hall that they resided in. It was magnificent, the carvings on the walls faultless, the pictures of previous commanders works of... well... art! I sat at a small table facing them as I was told to, and listened to what they had to say.

“Sergeant... Skagwort is it?”
“Yes Sir”
“You are the one responsible for the attack on Hsarkl village?”
The word responsible hit me like a punch to the stomach.
“Yes Sir”
“Could you please give us an account of what happened, Sergeant.”
So I did. I told them what I just told you, but a shorter, more compact version. Not a flicker of emotion crossed their faces the entire time.
“So your soldiers destroyed the village and all of its occupants despite your orders not to. Correct?”
“Yes Sir”
The commander paused.
“Very well Sergeant, we will inform you of our decision in a moment, please wait outside.”
So I did. And half an hour later I was told to return inside. I sat back in my place as instructed.
“We have come to the conclusion that the reason for the failure of your mission was your bad leadership, you then proceeded to murder three of your fellow soldiers, two of which were very promising. We have decided that you are to be executed in three days by hanging. That is all. You may leave.”

I sat there for a few seconds, trying to swallow what had just been said. After I walked outside, two guards took my arms and lead me towards the prison section. As I got to the door I thought to myself that it would be a crime in itself to die within these racist walls, never having proved myself better than those around me, never having been accepted for who I was rather than despised for what I was. I was stronger than these tall, lanky elves. I was tougher than them too, as I had shown when I fought off three off them by myself. Using my strength I pulled the soldier on my left towards me suddenly and grasped his sword that was in his scabbard in my hand. Pulling it out, both soldiers let go of me, the one on my right reaching for his sword to defend himself. I whirled round and stabbed him straight through the stomach. Then picking up the fallen Lemur's sword I turned to face the now weaponless one next to me. But he was gone, I could see him running back towards the command's building, probably going to tell them I had escaped. I had one last look at the Outpost I had grown up in, and then I fled. With the knowledge of my mother' healing powers and my fathers building skills, put together with the survival skills I had learned in the army, I knew I could stay alive on my own out in the wilderness.

I still regret not being able to say goodbye to my parents before I left, but no doubt that is what the army would have expected me to do, and would be waiting there. I had escaped the Outpost, but the journey ahead of me was long and without any map, Laanx was my only guide.
Unksi -- "Get your own ass potato!"


Get your own Gamercard Sig.

Skagwort

  • Wayfarer
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Outcast
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2006, 10:15:59 pm »
Chapter 2: The Depths of Yliakum

The hours drained past as I trudged forward under the heat of the sun, the grass came up to my middle and the mud around it sucked at my boots with every step. After a while I gave up trying to keep track of time and just drove forward relentlessly in the direction I was sure was East. The night was bitterly cold and with nothing but grass and mud around me I was forced to go hungry and without a fire. The following day I carried on walking... and walking... and walking...

It must have been 4 or 5 hours before the grass and mud began to thin out. Slowly but surely the long grass became plains and the sticky mud became firm ground that I could sit down on without sinking a few inches. After another hour and a half or so, I spotted a large dog like animal that I had not seen before gnawing on what looked like the remains of some smaller animal. The scene reminded my slightly of the Outpost and the Lemurs, gnawing on me and my sanity in an effort to kill and devour me whole, still the thought didn't last long as I soon crept near the dog before stabbing it with one of my short swords. The nearby bush provided both berries and firewood to cook both bits of meat on so after eating it all I was full of energy to help me onwards. I saved some meat for the rest of the journey and off I went, East... ish.

I could tell you all about the different days I had while on this long journey, but frankly it's just too boring, so I won't. I found the entrance to Yliakum after seven months of traveling around, stopping at various villages along the way, meeting different races including Enkidukae, Diabolos, and even some Ylians, which is odd as I had heard they were very scarce on the surface and that they were mostly found underground. At first I had thought that the entrance was just a cave, just a very roomy one but I followed it to the end, searching for the back to make sure that nothing could creep up on me while I was sleeping. It just seemed to keep going and going, getting darker and darker. The further I went the more traveled the cave seemed to be, which struck me as odd for, surely, the entrance to a cave would be walked upon more than the inner part right? But the further I went the more I saw this was no ordinary cave. It had large carvings covering the walls depicting people like myself, dwarves I assumed. I carried on going, mesmerized by the carvings that were like everything I had ever wanted to be. Massive pillars of stone topped by great warriors of both my stature and size. If only I could find these people who made these I thought to myself as I walked.
The carvings began to get thicker and thicker as I progressed down the cave, also the light began to come back, which I found odd for a cave this big, I thought it must be one huge light source. I started to creep after a while, for the light was so bright and I wasn't sure if I was going to be welcome. I came to a vast gate, upon which there were words that were huge but in some language I did not know. Not that this was uncommon, people speak different tongues in different lands, and this land was most definatly different. I kept to the shadows under the statues and tried to find some way in other than the main gate, but there was obviously none. I stayed there for half an hour before deciding that it was hopeless, the gate was not going to open and I may as well just use the mouth of the cave as shelter for the night. As I turned and began to trudge back up the cavern there was a shout. I turned to see who had shouted but nobody was there. Once again I turned my back and once again somebody shouted something. I couldn't tell what was said, it was too far away. I took a step back towards the gate and at that moment there was a deafening creaking sound. The gate, though slowly, was moving.

Once it was fully open a small group of dwarves came out with axes and full Armour. With nothing but my tattered, well used Armour and my swords that desperately needed repairing, I backed off, knowing I had no chance against their advanced weaponry and protection. The middle one, the only one with a large gold stud on the center of his helmet, shouted something to me in a language I did not know. He emphasized what he was trying to say with his sword however as he motioned it to the ground, and I fell on my knees, hoping they wouldn't slaughter me on the spot.

The encircled me and for the first time in many months I was truly afraid. These people who looked just as I do, were suddenly more frightening than anything I had met in my life. So similar yet so very different. The gold stud one barked something and one of the Dwarves ran off. I knelt there as they watched me, waiting for something. Not long after the Dwarf disappeared from sight another one appeared, but this one was much older, and  female. She stopped next to the gold stud Dwarf and they conversed for a time. Then suddenly she said, in my own language; “Are you hungry?” Well that made me jump right out of my skin! This female Dwarf somehow knew my language! I replied that I was and she said something to the gold stud Dwarf and him and his men ran off into the town.
“Don't be afraid, we would never hurt one of our own. Kralgen and his men are simply there for the protection of our citizens.”
“Kr-Kralgen? The Dwarf with the golden stud upon his helmet?” I asked, trying to hide the fear in my voice, along with the wet patch in my trousers.
“Yes,” she replied, “Please stop worrying, I will teach you our language and you can join with us. Which settlement do you come from my dear?”
“Ah... I'm not from any settlement anymore, but I used to live in the  Quetchenaztar Outpost, quite a way from here...”
She laughed “Don't be silly, thats a Lemur outpost, do be serious my dear.”
So I explained my position and my past to her over the food that was provided. She looked quite troubled by the end of it and excused herself once I was finished. I was provided some sleeping quarters for the night until I could find myself a job and a home. The female Dwarf, who's name turned out to be Kirineldine, began to teach me their language, which I picked up pretty fast, as I was surrounded by people talking it. I was soon admitted to the defensive regiment of their small but well armed army. Even though they were people like me, the Dwarves didn't seem particularly friendly and I soon learned that this was because I had been raised by elves. It turned out that Dwarves were not particularly friendly to elves and vice versa. I was being watched closely for any signs of a betrayal, in particular contact with the Lemurs. I was ashamed. My own kind did not even trust because I was once affiliated with people who now want me dead. Perhaps I would never find a place where I would be accepted for who I am now, rather than what I was then...
One day we were to go out hunting as the settlement was low on food. We went out the other side of the settlement, deeper into the cave I now knew was called Yliakum. We went very deep, yet the deeper we went the lighter it got, which struck me as odd.
“Why does it keep getting lighter even though we are getting further away from the sun?”
“Thats not sunlight Skagwort,” replied one of the older Dwarves “thats the Azure Crystal, a large sunlight absorbing crystal that sticks out of the ground but also sticks into the center of Yliakum. It uses the suns light and transfers it to itself, lighting this entire cavern.”
I was fascinated, I asked him all about it until we finally got to the right place, and the leader, Kralgen, told us to be silent. We crept as quietly as possible across the rubble strewn cavern, into a small cave off the side. Inside were four huge creatures I had never seen before, they were gigantic spider-like creatures with a large bulbous sack on their back. Suddenly I wasn't sure if I wanted to fight after all.

Kralgen attacked first, smashing into the creatures sack with his Axe and watching piles of eggs fall and smash on the floor. Immediately it was upon us, slashing the Dwarves with it's long, spindly legs and attempting to bite them with its small, hideous head. It was no match for five Dwarves though and soon with much slashing of swords and Axes it fell on the floor, limp and bleeding from numerous wounds. It was only once it was dead  that I realized I had not lifted my sword throughout the entire thing, as I was too shocked by it's foulness that I could not move. I looked to the other Dwarves, expecting to be shouted at but instead, they were laughing! “Ye shoulda see t'e look on ye face!” cried one through his laughter as I stood there bemused, watching them pointing and laughing, not sure whether to be offended or laugh along with them. “You've never seen a Trepor before?” asked Kralgen as the laughter died away “You certainly looked terrified.”
I looked at him sheepishly and fiddled with my beard, “There's nothing like that on the surface, I've never seen anything like it... do you encounter them often?” I asked, thinking that perhaps I would find myself a new job if they did. “Aye all the time, they be easy pickin out here though, theres much worse out there so be careful, never go out on your own.” I thought on this for quite some time as we began to cut the Trepor up so that it could fit in the leather bags we had brought. What things are there out here? Worse he said? Perhaps I should not stay here for too long if such things are out there. I have lived on the surface for my entire life, perhaps I should stay there!

As we began to make our way back towards the settlement I decided that I would find out from Kirineldine whether there was any Dwarf establishments above Yliakum, as I was just not comfortable below ground as I had lived as a surfacer for my entire life. Surely there must be Dwarves above the ground...
However I did not have long to think about this as while I was thinking I was not looking where I was going and tripped over some rubble in my way, falling flat on my face in the dirt. Grumbling I got back up, shook my head to wake me up more and looked back at the line of Dwarves behind me, complaining that there was precious little time left to get back before it was dark. When it was dark, worse creatures came out, creatures none of the Dwarves wanted to face. I turned back to the front, just in time to see Kralgen nod at me to keep going, before getting sliced in half by a huge blade that slid through the wall effortlessly, sending Kralgen's blood splattering against the wall along with various bits of rock that had been pushed from the totally solid wall of the cavern. A look of confusion spread across Kralgen's face, before the blankness of death washed it away. The blade then pushed itself sideways, creating a huge hole so that the large brown creature could access the tunnel full of 'prey'. Unlike the Trepor this time I was definatly not frozen with terror, the terror was certainly there, but my feet seemed to have a life of their own.

As I ran the other Dwarves ran too, but I was faster as I had been traveling for a long time and was still very fit. The other members of our party were not so fit though, and began to lag behind. I could hear the beast smashing it's way down the cavern, the echoing screams it made curdled my blood and fueled my energy and need to escape even more. I heard a crash and somewhere behind me a Dwarf started screaming. Abruptly, it stopped. I carried on running for a few hundred yards before stopping to catch my breath. After a few seconds I held my breath, listening carefully for any sign that the horrible beast may still be coming. The silence was now more deafening than any scream it had made. I could not hear any of my party running along the cavern and I knew that there was no hope for them. I crept back the way I had come, hoping the beast had gone and I could go back the way we were headed without any trouble. I eventually got back to the hole it had made, mainly by following the trail of blood and destruction. Luckily the hole had not caused the cavern to cave in and I was able to carry on back towards the settlement. I was nearly back, the gate was just around the corner, when I saw it. It was sitting in a small cave, eating something voraciously. As it ripped into what I could only guess was one of my friends, I noticed a small bit of leather, dangling from it's mouth. I attempted to creep past. Slowly... one step at a time... carefully so as not to disturb anything on the ground and attract it's attention. The minutes that passed felt like hours as I expected it to turn round and see me at any moment. I could see the side of the gate now, it was just behind me, still visible, but barely. I slowly approached the gate, silently begging Laanx to open it silently and save me from the beast. Suddenly, without warning, a loud horn burst to life, echoing around the cavern making the sound even louder than it already was. It was the horn of help, a horn they sounded when any enemies were sighted or a party that had gone out and returned wounded or without some of their comrades. It was designed to alert the rest of the town and ready them for anything to come. It was designed to help. Today it had the opposite effect.

As the echo died away it was followed by a low, guttural growl. A sound that could only be taken as anger or malice. The gate had already opened and as another party of Dwarves came out to see what happened, I ran forward, screaming at them to get back inside and close the gate, as fast as they could. They looked at me for a second, confused and startled, but then their gaze drifted behind me and their eyes grew wide with terror and they too turned and ran back inside, running to help the sentries close the gate before the beast could make it, shouting something along the lines of 'Ulbernaut'. The huge brown beast ran headlong into the gate, just as it closed, sending tremors through the entire cavern and bits of rock fell from above. Dwarves ran to the battlements with crossbows and lined up in two rows across them. The first row fired and ducked down so that the line behind them could aim and fire whilst the first was reloading. It was excellent defensive tactics but I barely had time to think about it as I was too busy helping the towns folk deep into the mine where it was safer. All the time the beast smashed itself into the gate, trying to batter it down and fulfill it's vengeance for the hundreds of arrows sticking out of it's spine lined skin. Once the children and a group of protectors were safely down in the mines, both men and women alike grabbed spears, Axes, swords and maces and ran down to the gate to defend against the great beast should it break through the gate and attempt to destroy the settlement. We stood there, the ground shaking violently beneath our feet, unsure whether this gargantuan beast would be the last thing we would see.

With the archers firing in perfect synchronization so that the beast was constantly under a hail of arrows, it began to back off, and left the settlement screaming at us as it left. The entire town was shaken up, terrified by what had just happened to this peaceful mining village. The gate was in bad shape, some Dwarves saying that if the beast had not left when it did, it would have burst through for certain, slaughtering many of us if not all. I helped to repair the gate, feeling slightly responsible for what happened. I could tell by the way people were to me that they blamed me also. The look in their eyes as they watched me. The language their body spoke as they talked to me. They blamed me for it, and there was nothing I could do. I guess the Dwarven settlement was not my home, not the place I would live my life. I talked to  Kirineldine of my problems, and asked her if there were any Dwarf establishments above Yliakum or above the ground at all. She told me that Dwarves do not normally live above ground and that I was an exception. She said that there was a place for people like me, a place where people are not judged on their past but only judged on their actions and choices they make while there. I begged her to tell me of this place, so that I may go there and begin my life anew, again. She seemed reluctant but she eventually told me that it was a city called Hydlaa, a place full of seekers of adventure and fortune. Apparently the city was huge and full of all the different races from Yliakum. After that day I began preparing to leave. The other Dwarves became more friendly to me once they knew I was leaving, as if their last impression would be the one I would remember.

Four days later, map in hand, food and water in my rucksack, I departed wearing Armour and weapons the Smithy had graciously provided me. It seems my journey is not yet over, but at least this time I am more prepared for the dangers and hardship I would have to face. Hydlaa my destination, I set off once again down the cavern that had held the monsters of my nightmares.

Unksi -- "Get your own ass potato!"


Get your own Gamercard Sig.

Skagwort

  • Wayfarer
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Outcast
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2006, 10:16:32 pm »
Chapter 3: The Labyrinths of Stone

The caverns seemed to get rougher the further I went into them. Constantly I was tripping over stones and rubble that was strewn across the floor down the long winding passage. There were few monsters, a couple of rats crossed my path but little more then that because it was daylight and most monsters were sleeping in their dens and for that I was thankful. The Azure light got brighter the further I went and sometimes it would reflect off large crystals that had grown up through the walls, leaving multi-coloured stains all over the walls around them as the light from the Azure Crystal filtered through the prism of the smaller one that pointed at me from where it had grow, almost accusingly.

I progressed through the caverns well, but even so night was coming fast, and with it would come monsters that I could not face on my own. According to the map I was halfway to the Stone Labyrinths, a place that, once you were inside, the way you have to go was no longer shown. Being a labyrinth there was no known way to the exit, you just walked, and hoped you got to the end before you run out of food. I prepared a small camp in an alcove, carefully making sure the fire would not make too much smoke so that it didn't attract monsters to me. I sat on guard after eating my meal so that I would not be surprised when I was sleeping by any monsters that thought of me as the very meal I had just eaten but soon the weight of sleep began to get to me. My eyelids drooped but I forced them open, my head nodded several times but I shook myself hard and told myself to not be so stupid, if I was going to survive I needed to stay awake. It reminded me of when I was a young boy, only five years old. The darkness frightened me so badly and I was afraid that monsters would leap through the door and tear me apart. Thinking of old times made me even more drowsy and I felt myself slipping into a deep sleep, a small part of my mind protested but it was not enough and I was swallowed up by the the monsters of my nightmares.

I awoke the next morning realising what had happened and jumped from the spot I was lying in. As I stood up an incredible pain ripped through my back, making me groan suddenly and stumble. I looked back at where I had been sleeping and saw a small odd shaped rock sticking up right where my back had been. I cursed it and began, in pain, to pack up my camp.

After a while the pain went away, the walking had probably helped, and I was able to make faster progress. I went down the cavern at a reasonable pace, seeing that I was over half way to the labyrinth now. The way was much clearer here, as if more people had used it, which I thought was odd as the dwarves said they never travelled this far. Obviously somebody lives out here, in these caverns with nothing but bloodthirsty monsters in them. But even with my curiosity making me pause, my common sense told me to not worry about it, to keep moving in the direction I was supposed to go. I kept going down the long winding cavern, going with the shadows at corners in case something was waiting for me behind it. Cautious as I was I still made great progress and settled down to camp just a little way off from the labyrinth. I had decided I would need rest before entering it, it probably wouldn't be easy.

This time I thought I was quite safe from the marauding hordes of monsters as I was so close to an area made by sentient beings like myself. Well... hopefully sentient beings like myself anyway. Even though I thought I was quite safe, I still made my fire small and my camp hidden. I settled down and, after my hard day of travelling, slipped into slumber almost instantly.

I woke up, the lack of light being the first thing I noticed. For a moment I thought it was still night, it was only when my eyes adjusted to the light that I realised I wasn't in the place I went to sleep in. I looked around me, noticing that I was not outside but in a room and a small one at that. The two small windows explained why the light hadn't woken me, as they barely let in enough light to see around by. There was very little in the room; a bed, a pot and a small potted plant, which I had no idea why that was there. The door on the far side of the room was locked and I could see no sign of a key hole or handle anyway. After around three hours, maybe more I couldn't tell, I heard footsteps outside. There was whispering outside that I couldn't hear well enough, but the vague sounds of the language itself sounded somehow familiar. The door swung open suddenly, flooding the room with light and blinding me for a few seconds. Three people came in, at least I say people, to be more precise two Lemurs and a taller, scarlet robed figure walked in. Seeing the Lemurs both amazed and frightened me at the same time and I found myself wondering if they were assassins sent to hunt me down and were about to torture me ruthlessly to see what I knew and what military secrets of the Lemurs I had passed on to others.

“Name?” said a voice. I couldn't tell where the voice came from, it seemed like it came from everywhere at once. The voice was definatly female, meaning neither of the two Lemurs, who were both without a doubt male, said it.
After a few seconds of looking for the origin of the voice I told the three that my name was Skagwort.
The atmosphere was charged and everyone was tense, you could have cut it with a knife. The voice spoke again, this time I watched the three figures lips for movement, but there was none.
“In this place of narrow passages wrought of stone, there are two types of people. The alive and the dead.”
My first thought was that it was pretty obvious. If your not dead you must be alive. The voice continued; “Similarly, there are the worshippers of Laanx and there are the unfaithful. Prove to us that you are a long time worshipper of the great God Laanx and you shall live. Prove your ignorance however, and you shall join your unworthy brethren in the Pit of the Faithless.” the word faithless echoed round the room for a second before everything became totally silent once more.

The three were totally unmoving, as if they had turned to stone while the voice had spoken. Finally the head of the red robed figure looked down at the floor and I felt my eyes itch suddenly. I instinctively blinked and in that millisecond the red robed figure disappeared. Before I had time to register properly what had happened, The two Lemurs walked towards me and one offered me to sit down. I looked to where he had pointed and there was three large stone chairs in a sort of triangle. I sat down, as did the two Lemurs opposite me. They looked at me for a while as I sat there, making me feel increasingly wary of the Lemurs.
“Recite the first Epoch.” Said the Lemur on the left suddenly, his gaze fixed on me as though trying to push his gaze through my head and into my mind.
I did as I was commanded. I told them how Laanx and Talad were Gods before the races ever existed in Yliakum. Laanx and Talad were beautiful and harmonious; they were inquisitive and always looking for new knowledge to enrich their eternal lives. Then, guided by an ancient and powerful god, named Vodùl, god of the future events, they discovered one quiet planet with a crystal column full of energy and mystery. Together, they explored the depths of the planet where the majestic obelisk has its roots, full to the brim with the azure energy. Together, they reached the lower end of the column and discovering a rocky niche that contained the luminous and faceted extremity that now gives life-energy to Yliakum. Talad and Laanx realized the nature of the crystal and wanted to create a prosperous dominion with people to worship them. Therefore, they used their powers to enlarge the niche and created the huge cave comprised of eight levels. They diverted the courses of the underground rivers to feed the fertile and rich land that they had placed on the rock to make it suitable for life. Everything was made to host the people that Talad and Laanx wished to create, but the land was still empty.

The two were silent for a minute more before the Lemur on the left said, “and how did the two Gods create life upon Yliakum?”
This was also easy, as while I lived at the outpost all children were taught the Five Epochs and I knew all about Laanx and Talad.
“Well, Talad and Laanx prayed to Vodùl to lure some races from the other gods and to bring them to Yliakum. Vodùl agreed their requests, but in exchange wished for Talad to become one of his servants and Laanx to become one of his lovers. Laanx and Talad accepted the exchange, because Vodùl was a kind master and a pleasant consort.
After leaving Vodùl's palace, Talad and Laanx noticed that Vodùl had honored the promise, but a long time had to elapse before the people reached Yliakum and they were impatient. Laanx, young and very pretty, had fascinated the ancient Vodùl and he'd taught her that the energy of the crystal could be used to create life.
She wanted to make Talad happy, for he was more restless and found the wait more unbearable then she did. To surprise and amaze him, she drew the incommensurable power of the azure crystal as much as she could and, in secret, mimicked the rituals of Vodùl to give life to some creatures reproduced in her image. The new people matured and reproduced, they were nice-looking and had a quiet behavior, like their creator, and they called themselves "Lemurs".”
The Lemur on the right spoke this time; “Good, we were indeed the first race to be created in Yliakum. But you surely know of the creatures that Talad created after he... destroyed (he spat the word with a venom that surprised me) Laanx's limitless beauty? The Kran, as they call themselves, what is your view of them?”
I paused, knowing that giving the wrong answer would mean certain death.
“They are foul, worthless beings that have less sense then flesh, their very existance insults Laanx and the fertile earth of Yliakum should be purged of their kind.” As I said it, merely repeating the words of an old priest back at the outpost, I felt guilty. All I had previously known about races from the outpost had been destroyed from my mind and I was intent on viewing all races in equal standing until they proved otherwise themselves. Saying such things about a race I had never even seen made me feel bad and unworthy, but I reminded myself that I was just saying it to survive, besides which, the Lemurs looked impressed, so it was probably worth it.
“You speak our own minds, Dwarf. The final test of your worship is on its way. Stay here and await judgment.”

They left. I had no idea what to expect. The next few hours were incredibly hard, I sat on the chair worrying over what they might ask me to do. It could be anything, they had looked like they had been ready to obliterate me with whatever magic they possessed that was able to create furniture at will, in the blink of an eye, at any moment. Obviously, they were not the type to cross. The one in the red clothes was very odd though, the cloth was pulled tightly across it's face tightly so I should have been able to see it's mouth move when it spoke, but I couldn't. Perhaps it had not spoken at all? I didn't know what to believe.

The hours passed slowly, feeling like days should have passed in that time, but eventually the door creaked open again. A female Lemur walked in, she was majestically clothed and had an air of superiority about her. She turned two cold, hard eyes to me, giving me a stare that I could have sworn pierced through me and could read my mind. She finally, silently, motioned to the door and slowly, uncertainly, I made my way over to it, and giving her a last look, hurried through the door. I was taken by two male Lemurs to a large compound, on one side of which was a enormous pit, filled with bones and rubble. Something told me this is the infamous 'Pit of the Faithless'. Over the other side was five large barred rooms, one side of them totally bars, the other four walls made of stone. One of them contained a Kran, he was watching me and, as our eyes met, I looked away remembering what I had said not long ago.

In between the two terrifying prisons, was a raised platform. On top of it was a large throne. It was the only decorative thing in the entire cavern, everything else was there simply because it was necessary. There was no colour, no luxury. Only the throne. On the throne, was the scarlet robed figure. It was too far away to see it properly, but I could feel it's stare boring into me as I walked towards it. I felt an extreme urge to look away. The two male Lemurs suddenly appeared either side of me, flanking me in a way that was horribly similar to the way the two guards did when they were taking me to prison to await my death sentence. In fact, the whole thing was very similar to it. Too  similar.

The two men suddenly stopped, pulling me back into line with them as I had taken a step further, not noticing they had stopped. They knelt, I copied. I was right below the platform now, the robed figure staring straight ahead. As if it hadn't noticed we were even there. Without the figure moving, a voice suddenly echoed through the cavern; “You have said unto us what you're hatred for the 'abominations' is like, now you must prove it.” A silence deeper than the pit nearby deafened me, the words that had just been said echoing through my mind longer than in the cavern itself. The words I had said to them earlier accompanied them, reminding me that what had been said was true. I looked back at the Kran, but he was looking away, his back against the bars.

The voice resumed. “You must send the 'abomination' to the worst and most painful of deaths we can administer. Bring in the grindstone.” I heard a shout and looked round again, it was the Kran, he was on his feet now and looked terrified. He looked at me with an expression of desperation and I hated myself for getting him into such a position. A loud clang confirmed that the grindstone was here, and all eyes turned towards it. It was easily the largest grindstone I had ever seen, the top was higher than my head easily. Then they began to spin it. There were two handles connected to it on the sides and two incredibly muscled Lemurs began to turn them, quickly getting the grindstone to an amazing speed. Two other Lemurs forced the Kran out of his cage, bound him in leather shackles and frogmarched him over to the spinning, sparking grindstone. He was trembling all over and at that moment I knew that I could not do this. It was a disgusting, barbaric way to kill somebody and this Kran had not done them any wrong other than be a Kran. They forced him to stand at the front of the grindstone, watching the tool of his impending doom. The voice boomed once more, but I did not hear it, I was too busy forming a plan to help this Kran and escape these evil creatures.

I whispered in to the Kran just loud enough that he could hear and he went completely still. With one hand I slowly edged the Kran's head closer and closer to the grindstone and I began to feel him instinctively resist, even though he knew what I was doing. With my other hand, I carefully pushed the leather shackles against the grindstone so that the rough, jagged edge tore at it. His face was getting closer and closer and he began to make slight whimpering noises in his throat. If Krans could sweat, his face would have been sodden. Just before his face touched the grindstone, the leather broke completely and he suddenly pulled away and we both ran for the end of the cavern. All of the Lemurs suddenly froze in shock, not knowing what to do. The civilians scattered, trying to keep as far from the 'abomination' as they could. No doubt the priests had taught them all stories of what disgusting things Krans had done in the past.

As we ran the scarlet clothed figure stood up, pointed to us and screamed, “STOP THEM! DESTROY THEM! OBLITERATE THEM! THEY HAVE DISOBEYED MY DIRECT ORDERS! OBEY ME FOR I AM YOUR GOD! DESTROY THEM IN THE NAME OF LAANX!” I didn't need to look back to know that hundreds of soldiers had begun to chase after us, I could hear their cries of death and vengeance, readying their weapons, each hoping that they would be the one to kill us and gain the favour of their God. Crossbows fired and barely missed me, whistling by my ear close enough to hear their passage through the air. One landed in the large support pillar holding open the large entrance way. Almost as one, both me and the Kran I had saved threw all our weight and strength against this pillar. It shifted slightly, so we smashed against it again. We felt it budge considerably, but the hordes of Lemurs were getting closer by the second, screaming for our deaths. We threw our weight against it one last time and as more arrows buried themselves in the wood centimeters from my head, I began to run further on. I heard the Kran cry out and turned back to see him just behind me, with an arrow sticking out of his shoulder. I ran back to him, helping him along, but it was too slow. The Lemurs were gaining on us fast. Then I heard it, a great creaking coming from above. I looked up to see large stones falling down from the top of the support pillar, sending more and more parts of the ceiling down to the ground. “Run!” I suddenly shouted and we ran as fast as he could along the cavern, rocks falling down all around us. The way behind us had caved in, meaning the Lemurs were no longer a threat. The rocks falling down all around us however, was another matter. We ran for a long time and eventually th passage caved in enough to support the rest of the itself, and the rocks ceased falling.

Exhausted, we collapsed onto the ground at the bottom of the cave in. As he rested, I saw to his wound, using my healing magic I had learnt so long ago from my mother. The wound was very clean luckily and was easy to heal. The arrow head had stayed attached, it made things much easier. He told me his name was Traff, he had been on his way to get some platinum to cure some people where he lived. The Lemurs had found him, he had been imprisoned. We got on very well, instantly becoming friends. He agree'd to take me back to where he lived, it was not far from Hydlaa, as I had told him of where I was headed. We set up camp for the night, Traff needed a good nights sleep to heal properly, magic could only do so much. I personally also needed a good nights sleep, it had, without a doubt, been a tiring day, and one that I will never forget.


thats all so far, but im still writing! chapter 4 is on its way!
Unksi -- "Get your own ass potato!"


Get your own Gamercard Sig.

Datruth

  • Hydlaa Notable
  • *
  • Posts: 841
  • "You can't Squeeze Blood from a stone."
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2006, 03:29:51 am »
YAY skag, keep up the good work bro, your writing is masterful :D

I can't wait to see the next one. :)

~~Datruth/Restound
Truth To Disbelief

Quote from: svuun
I adopt Karyuu.  She might not be new but her skin is so supple, soft and n00b like....  :sweatdrop:

Phinehas

  • Guest
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2006, 04:19:26 am »
I have not read your story yet, but I wanted to suggest that you post your chapters slowly. Don't overdose. Otherwise people like me who come on in the hope of reading something interesting look at it and think, "Nah. Too much time." However, if you post one chapter at a time, with at least a couple of days in between them, then you can lure people in and, if they like it, they'll keep reading. Also gives them a chance to post comments on each chapter as it needs them.

Kezzik

  • Hydlaa Citizen
  • *
  • Posts: 216
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2006, 05:44:49 am »
I just read the first three chapters, and I must say your story had captivated me, your attention to details is impressive, can't wait to read on!

Idoru

  • Hydlaa Notable
  • *
  • Posts: 981
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #6 on: October 05, 2006, 03:18:53 am »
well, I have read it, its excellent, I think EVERYONE should read it, its well worth it, I eagerly await the 4th chapter.
Hope your friends get to read it before its posted here  ;)
Keep 'em coming mate, its really a great read and i want to hear it all  \\o//

"May there only be peaceful and cheerful Earth Days to come for our beautiful Spaceship Earth as it continues to spin and circle in frigid space with its warm and fragile cargo of animate life."

Croconil

  • Hydlaa Notable
  • *
  • Posts: 642
  • <3 Peacer!
    • View Profile
    • Talk Box
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #7 on: October 05, 2006, 11:44:27 pm »
I will have to read it tomorrow, as I do not have time now. But I cant wait to see what its like  :)

Gharan

  • Hydlaa Notable
  • *
  • Posts: 553
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #8 on: October 06, 2006, 11:15:24 pm »
I remember you from WoA Skag and ive read it all and i must say good work

Idoru is right dont flick through it read it.

Skagwort

  • Wayfarer
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Outcast
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #9 on: October 12, 2006, 07:00:27 pm »
Glad you are enjoying it guys, chapter 4 will be up very soon, a day or two maybe.
Sorry I posted it all at once everyone I hope you did read it although it looked so daunting.  :sweatdrop:

Thanks to everyone who did read it and thanks even more to everyone who read it and posted.  :D
Unksi -- "Get your own ass potato!"


Get your own Gamercard Sig.

Croconil

  • Hydlaa Notable
  • *
  • Posts: 642
  • <3 Peacer!
    • View Profile
    • Talk Box
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #10 on: October 12, 2006, 08:30:11 pm »
I finally found it again, and read it :D.

Its great. Nice writing style, descriptions, Keep it up.  :thumbup:

Speed on chapter 4!

Parallo

  • Forum Addict
  • *
  • Posts: 2035
  • Ꞇíꞃ Luıᵹ̇ꝺeaċ
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #11 on: October 15, 2006, 03:43:35 pm »
Brilliant! Please keep it up. There are to many unfinished storys in this forum. I don't think I could sum it up better than Croc

Its great. Nice writing style, descriptions, Keep it up. :thumbup:

I suggest the statue of Laanx gets turned into a statue of Parallo <3. An NPC could never replace the huge hole he left in my heart when he died  :'(

Mariana

  • Hydlaa Resident
  • *
  • Posts: 54
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #12 on: October 16, 2006, 01:34:09 am »
I read it and I like it very much. Waiting to see what happens after your friend leads you to Hydlaa.

Zelfuro Mirageon

  • Traveller
  • *
  • Posts: 18
  • Elemental Light
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #13 on: October 31, 2006, 03:00:22 pm »
Great work Skag, you know how much I love your writing, great jpb!  :woot:

Skagwort

  • Wayfarer
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Outcast
    • View Profile
Re: Skagwort's Biography
« Reply #14 on: November 17, 2006, 03:10:51 pm »
Appologies for this taking so long, I've recently started college and haven't had time to post it up.  :sweatdrop: Here it is though, thanks for your patience. Hope it hasn't been so long you've all forgotten about it lol.

Enjoy!

[Edit: Wow, these chapters are getting too long, I've had to split it into two posts!]

Chapter 4: Gintla Village

I woke early the next morning, most of the adrenaline had passed but I still had quite a lot of energy left. I decided to get breakfast started while I was still able to. From the light in the caverns I thought it must have been about three hours until sunrise, maybe I could catch something in its sleep. I searched through the nearby tunnels, making sure I never went far from the camp in case I got lost.

I was about to give up when I spotted something in the corner of my eye, something I had previously thought was a rock suddenly sprouted legs from inside it. This wasn't a rock, it was a huge insect, with six legs now emerging from its bright orange shell and two eyes on the end of large, wavy feeler type things. I crept towards it, short sword in hand, and circled it until I was behind it and close enough to stab it. I plunged the sword through the air towards its shell, forcing it down with all my might, but it didn't go through. In fact, it bent. So now with nothing but a bent short sword and a surprised expression on my face, the beetle turned to face me. In my mind I could see it smirking at me. After the 1.2 seconds it took me to force myself not to panic, I went in for the kill again, but this time I went for its legs and wiggly eyes, not it's shell. I sliced off its nearest leg easily, one of the two that were reaching out to cut me, and just missed the second one. I aimed for its legs that were holding it upright but it was smart, it scuttled back so that I couldn't reach. A sharp claw came at me again, aiming for my face. I had to jump back so that it didn't hit me, and I lost my balance and fell over. It came for me again, its black eyes glinting at me and it prepared to stab me while I was down. In came the claw, quick as a flash but I was ready for it. Instead of attempting to get back from it, I rolled to the side and before it had a chance to turn, slashed off one of its left legs. It began to back off now but I was not going to let it go. I knew its weak spots and I was hungry, the two together are a deadly combination. I got back on my feet and ran at it. It turned towards me as I ran towards it, attempting to use its single claw to defend itself, but it wasn't the claw I was after. I jumped on top of its shell, my whole weight forcing it to the ground, crushing three more of its legs under its own body. It's eyes were waving around wildly, obviously trying to escape, not that it could even if I wasn't on top of it. It only had two legs that worked, both on on side. I plunged my short sword between the to eye stalks and with a rush of blood, it fell still. I was glad I had gone for breakfast while I still had my adrenaline, I had certainly needed it.

I dragged the carcass back to camp which, thankfully, wasn't far. My bent short sword proved to be a very useful tool at getting off the shell and exposing the meat within. Inside was various organs and muscle which were mainly white in colour and burnt very easily over my small camp fire. It was lucky I tested it first.
Traff awoke when the food was nearly cooked, I guess because of the smell. It could have easily have woken the dead. It was foul.
Even so, it was actually quite tasty. Slightly leathery, but that was okay. We talked about Traff's past as we ate, he explained to me his situation.

“I have lived... mmffch... in my village... gulp... for my entire... hmmcht... life.” he said between mouthfuls.
“I have two brothers and a sister, they also have lived in the... mmfftch... village their whole lives. We've only ever left to seek building materials and... gulp... to trade.”
I finished my mouthful and then asked, “Why are you so far from your village then? You must have needed something very badly to enter Lemur territory so far from your home.”
“grrchmmch... Yes... my village suddenly became very sick. A terrible illness that makes all the Krans in our village.... dissolve...” He looked down for a moment, collecting himself so he could continue, I guess.
“We found out that a nearby village also had the problem, but they managed to stop it before it became an epidemic.”
I had never heard that word before, “Epidemic?”
He looked down again, grabbing another piece of insect meat, “When a disease takes over a village or town, killing all or most of its population. Virtually wiping out all the inhabitants. A rare yet devastating thing.”
I nodded, for one disease to destroy an entire town was an amazing and horrifying thing indeed. He continued, “My village also got this disease, and some of the Krans from the other village heard of what was happening here. They did not come in person, for fear they themselves would catch the disease, but they sent a Xacha messenger to tell us what they had to say.”
He stopped and finished his piece of meat. He didn't reach for more. “The Xacha told us that the cure the previous town had used was liquefied platinum, a rare metal that could only be found in certain places. He told us that if the town was to survive, we would all need to drink liquefied platinum and it would stop the... deterioration.”
“Did you get some?”
“No,  I had found the place the Xacha had spoken of, but the Lemurs ambushed me and imprisoned me. I was there for around three days, I dread to think how many Krans have become infected now, perhaps... died. Then you came, and saved me from then, for which I am eternally in your debt. I thank you, my friend for what you have done for me and my people. You see I was the only one left who was both young enough to make the trip and not infected. Without me, my entire village is doomed.” He was looking at me straight in the eyes, his expression sincere and his voice full of compassion. “You must help me my friend, help me acquire some platinum and save my village. I fear in my condition I would not be able to make the trip, let alone mine the ore. Please, will you help me?”
How could I refuse? He had come so far and gone through so much, how could I let him fall at the last fence, as they say. I agreed, and after he was finished thanking me profusely, we packed up the camp, stamped out the fire, wrapped up what meat was left and set off for the platinum mine that was not so far away.

It took us nearly an entire day of solid walking to get there, a journey Traff was not fit to take. He was exhausted when we got there, but he didn't mind, we had made it, that was what mattered. The area around us shimmered an odd, light, silvery-blue colour I had never seen before. I began to search for Traffs old camp once I persuaded him to rest rather than help. It was hard to find, he had hidden it well, but I found it eventually, hidden amongst a small cave made of a landslide that had happened at some time in the past. I retrieved the rock pick he said would be there, a spare he had taken with him in case the original one broke. That one had been taken by the Lemurs when they abducted him. I also took what food there was, though most was Kran food, inedible to creatures of flesh and blood. Still, I guess it meant I could have more insect meat.

I began to work at the rock, a part that seemed slightly more blue than the rest, in the hope of striking platinum. I got what I could, it was harder work than it looked, and took it to Traff for inspection. It needed to be pure enough or it wouldn't be worth taking. He turned down most of it, saying it was more rock than ore but pointed out an area that he had worked on before he was kidnapped, saying he had found quite a good source there. He was right and I soon had a good deal of platinum ore to take back to his village.

High in spirits and low in energy, we ate a meal in celebration and slept the entire night, safe in the knowledge that no Lemurs would be coming our way, thanks to the large cave-in in their entrance tunnel. We woke the next morning still happy and full of vigour and energy for the journey out of the Labyrinth and back to Traff's village where we would save every bodies lives and become heroes. We talked about such things on our way out, getting closer and closer to the exit with each step that we took. I thanked Laanx that Traff had such a good memory, for without it we would have been stuck in the labyrinth's tunnels for far longer. Finally we heard the sound of water pounding rocks and the soft creaking of a large waterwheel that Traff had described to me as he told me about the 'Fortress of the Eagle' that guarded the huge bronze doors and the entrance to the stone labyrinth. We hurried as fast as he could through the tunnels, hoping that we would be free of this place once and for all. We finally turned a corner and came into view of two gigantic, shining bronze doors in their full glory. Two Ylians stood at the foot of the doors, still as statues but for their eyes, which watched us with suspicion as we ran towards them. Traff slowed as we got to them and I did the same.
Unksi -- "Get your own ass potato!"


Get your own Gamercard Sig.