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Nerule

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[pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« on: August 21, 2006, 12:14:55 am »
Ok, so two secret guilds called The Legion of Chaos and The Dark Brotherhood are going to try to tak over the world, now we need to know who's on which side. You can join as individuals and guild leaders can sign up their guilds. Heres the chart:

Evil guilds:
The Legion of Chaos
Dark Brotherhood

Good guilds:
The Thirteenth Order
guardians of power

Evil invididuals:
Dameve
Myrthe
Quitarias
Rinasho
Frak Griffonsfire
Kyzer

Good individuals:
Dahoma
Kaerli
Jangeol
Orthex
eldoth_terevan
Ventos Gloki

story:
"Come to me..." Moaned a dreadful voice. A face appeared, it was a demon. Its face was red as blood, with black markings and two purple eyes. Pointy teeth shown as it talked, each as sharp as a tack. "Come to me..." It repeated. Nerule was startled. He then found himself on the street in Hydlaa. It was just a dream. He stood up, yet another day of selling worthless charms. He thought of a new design, maybe perhaps like the demon in his dream?

 The new charms were selling faster then the old ones, and found himself ready to buy both food and a pickaxe by the end of the day. The next day he went to mine. The quarry neer the whizard's shop was full of gold. He had mined a huge amount of ore by the end of the day, and sold it all to the local blacksmith, Harnquist, and made a huge amount of money. Things looked up for him, ever since the demon in his dreams arrived. He bought armor and weapons as well as a huge meal, something he had longed for for months.
 That night, the demon showed its face in Nerule's dreams again. "Go to the library..." It moaned, "look on the demon Morgorious....." Nerule woke up once again, he had been sleeping at the inn that night. He got up, dressed up, he had also bought new cloths, and bounded to the library. It was empty as ever, figures no one reads anymore. He had longed to be llowed inside but the librarian didn't wan Nerule dirtying the pages of the books. But the librarian didn't mind him come in. He found a book on demons, looking for the page on Morgorious. When he found it, he saw it contained everything about him. The painting in the book looked just like the face he saw....
 He ripped that page right out of the book. "What ye be doing?" The librarian asked,
"None of your buisnuss," replied Nerule coldly. The librarian stood up,
"I'll have you fined for ripping pages!" he shouted. Nerule smirked.
"Isn't the rule 'no talking loudly in a library'?" He joked. He swftly ran to the labrarian, unsheething his sword. He pressed the sword to the librarian's neck, "I did abselutely nothing, understand?" He said, waving his hand around infont of his own neck, which ment death. The librarian nodded franticly. Nerule sheethed his sword and left.

 "Excellent..." Moaned the demon, "I am most pleased."
Nerule smirked, "Yeah? Well don't expect me to be your slave," He snarled.
"Find an ally," said the demon. "Seak the one named Croza, he will help you."
"To help with what?" Asked Nerule.
"To summon me and to take over this world," Said the demon, before cackling. Nerule woke up, "Croza," he said. He knew were to find this person, the one who had to pay for being good, only because of the greed of the town's folk.
 Walking around Hydlaa, Nerule came apon a beggar. "Spare change?" He asked.
"No," said Nerule.
"Please?" asked the beggar.
"I said no!" he shouted, then, with the slash of a sword, the beggar was dead. Nerule then saw a black enkidukai, it was Croza! He approached, "Come with me," He said to Croza, Croza followed him to an alley.
"Whats this about?" Asked Croza.
"You have been chosen to ally with me. I'v heard of your anguish, your grief. The so-called good hearted citizens," Replied Nerule, "In return for an alliance, you are promised eternal power."
"I accept," Said Croza.
 they proceaded to his meeting room, were they and Croza's high councilers discussed the plans. Nerule desided to make a guild. Croza helped get members. The Legion of Chaos was born. The Heroes of Yilkilium, Croza's guild, was renamed to The Dark Brotherhood. Croza procided to find the rod of azure, a powerful artifact, tht could be used if Nerule's plans to summon the demon backfired. The two guilds grew, to ready themselves for the conquest.


Q: Why a whole war?
A: Do you really think everyone is gonna just let Nerule and his allies rule the world?

Q: Why this list?
A: to be sure who's on who's side.

Please sign up.
« Last Edit: November 09, 2006, 10:21:23 pm by Nerule »
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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2006, 12:25:41 am »
Having a background story, and the reasons why you are taking over the world, would help.

There are many Nuetral guilds, in order for them to decide which side to join, I am sure they would like to have more info.

I like the idea of a large war :)  you need to put a lot more thought into this for it to work.

It would be a very good idea to post a link to your thread.


EDIT: You have made some good changes, and added a lot more history to your story. good work :)

I do like the story by Brendon a little more. It has a lot of room for many directions for the outcome.

Brendons stroy is here http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=25688.msg285535#msg285535
« Last Edit: September 22, 2006, 05:35:55 pm by LARAGORN »

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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2006, 01:09:25 am »
Yeah, a reason for the war would be nice.  Hope this works out though, and I will definately participate once this is put together in a more organized way.
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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2006, 01:26:10 am »
Agreed, sign me up as an individual, unless of course my guild leader signs us all up.

But sign me up as the good side.
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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2006, 03:27:47 am »
Ok backround story has been added, and Dahoma your name has been added.
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« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2006, 04:07:19 pm »
"A young enkidukai wanders the streets, he had been hated and spit at, made an outcast, but no more. He decided it was time to act, to show the world what he was really made of. He made money by creating and selling strange charms, until he had the money to buy a pickaxe. He mined and mined, and eventually made a bundle. He bought armor and weapons, and finally was allowed into the library, be learned of the many strange places that the world was made of, he learned of the world's hstory. One day, an innocent man asked him for money, but the enki refused. The man kept asking, then the enki killed him with the slash of a sword. He found it was fun to do that. That enkidukai was Nerule. Nerule then relised he could do that to the others who cast him out. He then began to dream of world conquest, where he could treat everyone who did not respect him like dirt, but those who joined him in his plan would be rewarded greatly. He one day began to seek allies, many joined him, and they began a guild. Another guild called The Dark Brotherhood had also joined him, who now take the mission of finding the azure rod. He began to find other members, to ready himself for the war that was sure to come."

You will find that a little bit better. I went through and corrected typos and spelling errors, though I'm not in a mood that is quite good enough to completely proofread the thing... Plus I just woke up :/


EDIT: Oh yeah, add Farren Kutter to the good individuals...




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« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2006, 05:24:42 pm »
Thanks farren! Your name has been added.
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« Reply #7 on: August 21, 2006, 05:28:50 pm »
Hey why not...I'll join as a good individual. I'll tell my guild about this...maybe we'll sign up.

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« Reply #8 on: August 21, 2006, 05:35:31 pm »
One more correction now that I'm a little more awake:

"...had been hated and spit at..."

Change spit to spat.




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« Reply #9 on: August 21, 2006, 05:49:30 pm »
Fayodin Istar stands up.
"This world belongs to not one person.  This world belong to all who dwell in it!  I cannot let a psychopathic killer put this great land I have come to known and live in under tyranny.  I cannot let him kill of the good or enslave them for personal use.  People, warriors, fighters from distant lands, join us!  Live free and not under the shadow of this evil.  Fight for life! For Justice! Don't let him take over and force us to live in fear.   Join us against this evil in a fight for freedom!"
Fayodin Istar steps down and leaves the scene of applauds and yells and goes to a more serene spot in hydlaa.

sign the Elemental Light up for the good side.

OOC.  you need to specify a date and time for this.  preferably a weekend time.  You also have to inform us of WHERE this will take place.

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« Reply #10 on: August 21, 2006, 05:56:14 pm »
Kaerli speaking:  "No one person should be able to use their weapons to create tyranny and destroy the order of society in Yliakum.  Nerule and his henchmen MUST be defeated, before it is too late."

[Sign me up on the good side... still waiting for the go/no-go on guilding from my clan's leader]

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« Reply #11 on: August 21, 2006, 05:58:20 pm »
[people, this is an OOC sign up, no one knows he's gonna try this.
Edit: I'm really dissappointed at the fact most people are gonna choose good for some reason, making the event unbalanced, and also it won't be scedualled untill there are enough guilds/people signed up
Edit2: LinkN64, whats your in game name? acually, what's everybody's ingame name?]
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« Reply #12 on: August 22, 2006, 02:20:20 am »
Post a (rough) time when this event is about to tale place and I can decide if I can join on the good side.
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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #13 on: August 22, 2006, 04:39:22 am »
Sorry, not too many baddies... Though I know a few I can get involved...




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Re: [pick sides for a great battle, please don't flame me]
« Reply #14 on: August 22, 2006, 04:42:29 am »
You can add my character Jangeol to the good side... now, to be clear, this event is a war, not a single battle, right?  If that's the case you can add my secondary character, Dameve to the evil side... I could also try and get the guild involved, but helping Nerule take over the world probably isn't on the top of their priorities list.
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