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Verrliit

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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #30 on: October 15, 2006, 06:39:18 pm »
Some one puts effort in writing a long description.


now there's two things you can do.

you read it...

or you don't....

now why was the fuss again?


Yay Proglin.

Boo unnecessary rules.


Kalika, your description was better than many, to begin with.


Live your story, let it bring you joy.

Try to pity those who are not living theirs.


Pointing at them and laughing, would be cruel...





But I think I can live with that.


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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #31 on: October 15, 2006, 08:36:06 pm »
Ok, Verlitt.  But you should know that if someone writes their life story into their description, I'm going to take advantage of for my amusement.

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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #32 on: October 15, 2006, 11:47:57 pm »
@ Monketh:

Instead of "/me 's", try "/my". ;)

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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #33 on: October 16, 2006, 12:56:07 am »
Ok, Verlitt.  But you should know that if someone writes their life story into their description, I'm going to take advantage of for my amusement.

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Monketh 's eyes glow with a strange inner light.
Monketh 's voice enters your mind: Yes, I am peering into your mind.  I know what you did last summer.  Hold still so I can conduct my psychoanalysis.


Verrliit smiles, and answers in a quiet but strongly resonant voice,

    "Welcome, Doctor."

    "I have been waiting for you."


Lit by stars of glowing crystal, in halls of stone and mirrored glass, the Dark flows seething, hungry, and ever closer, as ghostly whispers lick desperate at the edge of heariing.

One by one, the brightly mirrored stars dim and go out...

Verrliit smiles again, with sharp white teeth, and elegantly flexes her claws.

As Dark gathers, rising from the floor, the last of light begins to fade.


    "I do hope you will stay for dinner..."


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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #34 on: October 16, 2006, 01:35:18 am »
OT: That situation is readily missing the point that he should already be aware of the intentions of the target (and history of other similar incidents.)
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T: Seriously though, I have to agree with most of the other posters: please do not write your character's biography in the character description.
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Re: Line of endless text in character description.
« Reply #35 on: October 16, 2006, 06:10:24 am »
There seem to be two issues here. The first is that reading these long things takes time; while this is an issue, it seems to have been discussed pretty thoroughly at this point. The second, and more troublesome though less-talked about, is that these long descriptions actually screw up roleplay. There is no way I should know your "mother died at the age of two" just by looking at you. Good roleplayers will (hopefully) understand this and ignore these lines. "Problem solved," yous ay. However, there are a few issues that persist:
1. Up and coming roleplayers may not know how this works. The result will be some awkward roleplaying... best to be avoided. This is the least of the problems, though.
2. People forget. A good roleplayer may think, "I heard her mother died somewhere, forget where, but I did hear it..." and assume that the knowledge is in-character.
3. People are influenced unconsciously. If your character acts like a perfectly nice person, but has, "A slick double-dealing assassin" in his profile, even the best of roleplayers will treat him slightly different, though they may fight not to.
Out-of-character knowledge is BAD. There is no getting around it. Please, do not put histories in your character descriptions. It's been driving me nuts forever. I'm glad to see other people share my opinion. :)
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