A bit of feedback after taking a loan (This is assuming that this bank is fully within RP)
Now, me being the evil little devil that I am, I decided to go loan out some tria, and not pay you back. How nice, eh? Now, it went nicely, except for the fact that noone asked for a name. See, loaning out your tria to a stranger with no name, is really not a good idea. There was also very little detail to the process. Something like "I want 20 thousand" "No five" "Okay five" "When will you pay back?" "When I can" *runs off*
none of that XXXXX Takes down <blanks> name in the books. XXXXX Goes inside the vault and removes the amount of tria...
Not exactly that, they're just examples, but anything will do.