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Jurrel

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[Guild] Paladins
« on: January 18, 2007, 01:37:20 am »
Paladins

   Smoke filled skies passed over the sands of Ojaveda. Searing heat beat down on the pools of blood that flowed like rivers. Carcasses of fallen prey, limbs sheared from bodies. The hot air was filled with the smell of blood and metal. Enkidukai, Xacha, Ylian, Diaboli, Krans -- people from all races had met there fate in this valley already. Ulbernauts, Tefusangs, Trepors, Consumers, Gobbles and more showed up in throngs to engage in the already consuming madness. Mayhem had consumed the land and confusion and hatred took hold.

   Out of this came our story and how we came to be.

   In the middle of the valley, seven young soldiers were fighting blindly for their guilds wishes. No purpose, reason or just cause. Blood and sweat soaked, bruised, cut and broken. They looked upon what was happening around them and watched in horror as deaths mounted at their feet. One youngster -- Mamah -- had run head on into an Ulbernaut and tried to take it on by himself. While Shambla and Elareno fought as hard as they could to catch up to him and drive off his impending doom, others made sure nothing lived within their wake.

   Shambla and Elareno ended the poor Ulbernauts life but at great cost. Mamah was nearly finished. Shambla, the leader of the group , stumbled forward, having taken the brunt of the battle. Elareno steadied him." We cannot go on like this", Shambla proclaimed. Jurrel helped Rhonja and Bradius carry Mamah to a more comfortable spot. 'Mamah you need to stay near us, don't wander off like that. Death will find you ". Rhonja tried to fight back tears, for she knew it would be a while before Mamah would fight agian.

   that was when it all stopped. No movement, no battle sounds. Peace. A calm glowing light fluttered around them and they were not afraid. Talad the majestic god stood before them. Mamah rose, his wounds completely healed and took his place at Jurrels side. All stood in wonder and amazement.

    "My children, look around you. Look at what has been done. All of my people and the creatures in this land cry out in so much pain. Order must be restored. You are to follow a new path. The path of the righteous. Valor, bravery, loyalty, honesty and good will be your virtues. Your purpose is to teach a new way of life. A life filled with meaning. You are to be Paladins; my holy knights. Let my love and compassion be your guide. Bring order and peace to my land once more." And with that Talad dissappeared.

   The Paladins found themselves in a temple free from harm in a town called Hydlaa. Alll seven of the young soldiers made a pact that day. To bring order , peace and reason into the lifes around them. And so they marched into the world as Paladins.


Ranks
Master at Arms
High Paladin
Paladin
Champion
Knight/Dame
Devout
Squire
Apprentice
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   The rankings will eventually all have discriptions and qualifications. Rankings will be based on level achievement, trust, honesty and role playing ability. This is a guild of friends. We all get along well. Those wishing to join will have to spend some time getting to know the High Paladins. Two must be in agreement to bring you in. Understand they also have the power to remove you. Please conduct yourself with respect for others, and you will have no problems.

contact Shambla = Shambla@bresnan.net or Jurrel = Titanplus4@comcast.net

We hope to have this page finished by this weekend. Please post replys. We welcome your thoughts. Thanks for your input so far. We will have a revision soon. Be patient, it will be woth the wait. Please say whether you liked the story or not.
   
   
« Last Edit: January 20, 2007, 07:06:59 pm by Jurrel »

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Re: [Guild] Paladins
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2007, 02:32:03 am »
I never saw laanx as that sort of god, he always seemed alot more vengeful, of those who did not respect him as their god.

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Well not vengeful as such but, Interested in him self much more then the land and it's people. Perhaps if you were ordered to spread the word of laanx then yea, that would work.
« Last Edit: January 18, 2007, 02:48:16 am by Zellgadess »

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Re: [Guild] Paladins
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2007, 02:55:44 am »
    Thank you for your input pehaps I should look closer, Thank you for your time. Be well.

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Re: [Guild] Paladins
« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2007, 02:59:03 am »
It sounds more like something Talad would do. Just don't bubble hearth on me now <_<

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« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2007, 04:21:06 am »
Seems like Laanx came out at random. Enkidukai, not Enkidukia. Also, when did this take place? There hasn't been any mayhem like you've mentioned, as far as I know. And how are they to bring order to the land? There are hundreds of guilds that do that already.

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« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2007, 04:22:50 am »
    Talad and Laanx both had there problems. They were both young and inexperianced they both made mistakes but I have no doubt that Laanxs loved her followers and the people of the land. Like Talad she wanted the people to worship her. I see no proof that she did not like her people. So the beutiful Laanxs it is.

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« Reply #6 on: January 18, 2007, 04:25:49 am »
Laanx wanted to hide herself from people ever since Talad ruined her beauty, and her voice changed and became deaper, which leads people to call her "he." I doubt she would just come out at random and say something like that.

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« Reply #7 on: January 18, 2007, 04:39:57 am »
   If you read farther Laanx reemerged and I didnt say what she looked or sounded like. But time heals all wounds. She is still a god and probably in that state was still beutiful to anyone one of us. She is beutiful now and this is still past your reading. Be positive.

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« Reply #8 on: January 18, 2007, 04:56:06 am »
I advise reading the guild story as a guild story, and not necessarily an account of something that "actually happened" in game.  Maybe it's true, maybe it isn't - they claim it is.  We don't have to agree with their account, but they're allowed to have it.


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« Reply #9 on: January 18, 2007, 04:57:27 am »
Seems like Laanx came out at random. Enkidukai, not Enkidukia. Also, when did this take place? There hasn't been any mayhem like you've mentioned, as far as I know. And how are they to bring order to the land? There are hundreds of guilds that do that already.
   Thank you for spelling correction, Enkidukai . As for when it happened I will cosult with Shambla. I did not see the importance of it. Its not as easy as It looks. And as far as the mayhem, if there was a history already written all of us, then why are we here. There is only mention of gods and people and how they came to be.Whats wrong with using your imagination. Are we not writing our own history everytime we roleplay. The story is not a big stretch. I did not invent new towns or planes. As for the people in the story they exist in the game now. And our past has just been written. Our future will depend on each other. Our being good and kind is true. By showing others kindness ,all will in time be kind. We have faith in our teachings, and so will you my friend.



I advise reading the guild story as a guild story, and not necessarily an account of something that "actually happened" in game.  Maybe it's true, maybe it isn't - they claim it is.  We don't have to agree with their account, but they're allowed to have it.


A question for the guild:  Does this mean you're all vegetarian?
   Thank you Zanzibar!! and no im not a vegitarian, however if you are thats cool. I like Ulbers roasting on an open fire. The point is if no one can write a story. Then storys wont happen. O.K. everyone stop role playing. How do you know it happened?
« Last Edit: January 18, 2007, 06:49:29 am by Jurrel »

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Re: [Guild] Paladins
« Reply #10 on: January 18, 2007, 12:46:29 pm »

Seems like Laanx came out at random. Enkidukai, not Enkidukia. Also, when did this take place? There hasn't been any mayhem like you've mentioned, as far as I know. And how are they to bring order to the land? There are hundreds of guilds that do that already.

Well she could explain such mayham gripping the world if she ties her pre-guilds Battle with the rp History Monk did of Darkness escaping into our world? I do believe quite a few people rped a great evil and chaos during that time..

Just a thought...

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« Reply #11 on: January 18, 2007, 03:37:17 pm »
   Thank you Anfa, your sweet we have a rivision in progess I think you will like. See you in game, and your site is sweet! \\o//

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« Reply #12 on: January 18, 2007, 04:49:38 pm »
OK, seeing as no one else has mentioned it, allow me,  as the saying goes, to put the cat among the pigeons:

Paladin  :D

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« Reply #13 on: January 18, 2007, 05:23:39 pm »
OK, seeing as no one else has mentioned it, allow me,  as the saying goes, to put the cat among the pigeons:

Paladin  :D

I think Jurrel's Paladin falls into the very last line of the wiki, "Fantasy paladins are usually holy warriors, combining both combat and healing abilities."  I would add that they are also lawful good and lose abilities should they become unlawful, for ANY reason.  For example, if a lake is posted, "No swimming by order of the King!" and there is a person drowning in the lake (yes she broke the law and found herself in trouble), the paladin will not enter the water to save her as it would violate the law.   ;D

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« Reply #14 on: January 18, 2007, 09:06:46 pm »
   Hey Araye! Your right about Paladins. I think you will appreciate the rewrite. Hopefully there wont be any no swimming signs. :o  Hpefully I will see you in game and we can meet. In fact all the players in the story are actve so say " Hi".