Aim for quality in this forum section

Think on how you can make your post better. Perhaps you can include an IC element so characters know how to contact you, since they aren't the ones reading a forum. Maybe you can put up a subtle notice on the
Hydlaa or
Ojaveda message board (keep in mind that "We kill people for money" is going to be taken down by the city guards), and recreate this thread to be of the same excellence as the other guild promotions in this board. How about explaining how your guild works? Do you have any rules you follow?
Plus if you're making an advertisement, take your time to really polish your spelling. You're on a forum and not an instant messenger, so there's no rush. The more professional your posts appear, the better first impression you will make.