It seems you'd rather lecture people on the manner of speaking than acknowledge the problem itself.
The whole quest is an insult to the players, and so is your make-nice post, which is a veiled censorship. I'm not afraid to speak my mind, so I won't sugar-coat my posts. The dialog in the said quest is that bad. I don't speak gibberish and I don't have a Gibberish-to-English translator handy.
What these responses tell me is that saying anything negative about PlaneShift is risky. You will get condescending responses, no action taken about the said quest itself, censorship and basically everything you said turned against you. No wonder most people would rather refer to their guild's tutorial/walkthrough on quests than say something.
I've made an alt character and spoke to many people in game, which are in guilds. Every single one agreed that the dialog in this quest is rubbish. Obviously, I won't name the guilds. But everyone who's reading - you all know what I'm talking about.
Anyway, I won't sit here and argue with egocentric developers, who obviously won't even acknowledge that an improvement to this and many other quests is needed, especially when so many others are afraid to speak out. Let the dialog remain the way it is, it's obviously a stellar piece of writing.
Have a nice day.