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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #75 on: November 25, 2007, 09:08:46 am »
Part 30: Company

“No Einnol!” shouted Sarine, but he was already running towards the trees, an axe in each hand.

Sarine dropped her mug and ran after him, but Einnol was already swinging his axes. “Einnol! Stop!” she shouted.

There was a squeal then the sound of wind rustling through the trees. Einnol had stopped running, and stood staring, his mouth open and his axes hanging loosely in his hands. In front of him were Rell, Andoryn and Aerianna. Andoryn lowered the hand holding the pale glyph, and gradually the swirling winds subsided.

“What the blazes?” Einnol thundered, “I could ha’ killed ye. What were ye doing creepin’ up on us like that?”

Aerianna looked at her feet, but Andoryn met his gaze, coolly. “I think you would have found my defences more than a match for your weapons.”

“Ye think a puff of magic wind would ha’ stopped me, do ye? A fart would have a better chance than your fancy tricks!”

Andoryn blanched, and Rell sniggered but stopped when Einnol glared at him. “And you, Sir Rell. I thought ye would ha’ had more sense!”

“We were only curious…” began Aerianna.

“Curious?” bellowed Einnol, shaking with rage, “Well did ye’ know Missy, that it was curiosity as killed the cat? Think on that!”

Sarine arrived at Einnol’s shoulder, out of breath. “Let them be, Mr. Feldorm,” she said kindly, “I’m sure they didn’t mean to startle us.”

“Then why were they creeping around in the bushes? Eh?”

Andoryn answered, her voice still calm. “I know we shouldn’t have followed you, Einnol, but …well you and Sarine were acting strangely. Then there was that business in the library. It was so obvious that you found what you were looking for. Then Alleri told me you were looking for Arka, that she’d gone on a journey. We wanted to help, but I knew you’d turn us away, so we followed you from a distance.”

“If we had known we were coming this far, we’d have packed some food,” said Rell, eyeing the pastry crumbs in Einnol’s beard.

“Hmmph!” snorted Einnol, “Well, you’ve slowed us down enough already. If you want to eat, ye can do it on the hoof.”

“You mean we can come with you?” asked Aerianna, jumping up and down.

Einnol gave her a look that stopped her in mid jump. “We’re not on a picnic,” he said, “If ye must know, Arka’s life is in danger. If we waste any more time, ye will all be in need of a new language teacher!” He stomped off to get his bags, the others following behind.

Sarine handed round the rest of the pies before pulling her backpack onto her shoulders and the group set off on the last leg of the journey towards the Bronze Doors. For the first mile, they walked in silence, but eventually Einnol’s rage subsided and he started to recount the sequence of events that had led to him and Sarine setting off in search of Arka’s old home.

He was careful not to tell them anything about Sudisir, though. He knew he would have to deal with him alone. He didn’t want to put the others at risk. Sarine would be a problem, he thought. She would want to help. But if Sudisir was already there, he would be waiting for them. He had to find some way of keeping the others out of harm’s way.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #76 on: November 25, 2007, 08:10:51 pm »
I just had to laugh at this chapter  :D

reading someone's dialogue while they're in a rage is fun ;p

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #77 on: November 26, 2007, 07:32:17 am »
yes, it has a hint of humour in the rage... heheh very well written
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #78 on: November 26, 2007, 08:44:50 am »
A little light relief before the storm...

And thanks to Einnol for reading over this before hand and putting me right on some of the dialogue.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #79 on: November 26, 2007, 04:32:12 pm »
Arka,

Very well done and thank you for making me laugh. Though I do hope that your friends get to you on time. Einnol please hurry.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #80 on: November 26, 2007, 07:13:01 pm »
Part 31: Death

It wasn’t long before Arka felt herself sinking into the earth. Down she drifted deeper and deeper, losing all sense of feeling as the potion that had brought her back to life lost its power over her.

She found herself back in the place were souls were tested before moving on. She saw again the strange floating rocks, surrounding a maze of walkways and columns, now familiar. She wondered if her mother would still be there, waiting for her return. They had made it together to the portal, but then Arka had lost her grip on her hand and came back to the living. Had her mother passed through to the other side, or had she fallen back? She had to find the portal again, but first she would search for her mother; she did not want to risk leaving her again in this dreadful place.

She walked in a daze through the first tunnel, her body feeling like lead and her spirits equally heavy. Hugging the rock face, she edged her way up a spiral pathway until she found the rusty iron ladder leading upwards. She thought of the Carkarass waiting at the top, and was amazed to find her Great Axes suddenly appear in her hands.

For a moment she thought she might be dreaming. She had only once told Lordbug about her first trip to this place, many months ago. He had laughed and told her it was just a dream and she had said no more. She knew it was real, but she also knew no one else would believe her, if Lordbug would not.

To her relief there was no winged creature at the top of the steps and she put her axes away. As soon as they left her hands, they vanished. “Curious,” she thought, but carried on across the bridge to the huge dark citadel.

Some time later she was standing in the cavernous library, surrounded by the stacks of books that recorded the names of those that had passed through this way. There was no sign of her mother. Arka wondered how she would have found her way back here, blind and helpless. It was much more likely that she had stayed near the portal if she was here at all.

Nevertheless, she made a thorough search before pressing on. The trip to the portal took far less time than she remembered, but this time she was alone and knew the way. Only once did she take a wrong turn that led to a dead end.

Finally she arrived, cold and dejected at the stone head that she recognised as the gateway between this place and the next. Her mother was not here. For a moment she stood and pondered whether she should step into the swirling lights and move on, but something held her back. She was not convinced her mother had passed through. Something deep inside told her that she should take one last look.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #81 on: November 26, 2007, 11:01:53 pm »
Noooooooo step away from the light.. step away... come back to us.. wake from the deathly grip of the underworld.. don't leave... please.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #82 on: November 27, 2007, 09:52:06 am »
Arka - you are the reason another tree dies: I have to print your story, I simply can't read it all at the screen... ;)

Shall I print it in "Cup and Talon"?!  :whistling:

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #83 on: November 27, 2007, 08:11:33 pm »
eheh

I'll plant one in the forest near my home!

As for Cup and Talon - you might find it a little hard on the eyes.

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PS I hope Erelenga's fate was not too painful for you

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #84 on: November 28, 2007, 01:19:02 am »
One question ...... why in the hell are you writing for PS?  ::| You should be doing this for a living!?

I feel so lucky that I don't have to actually buy this story you have written from a store to read it. It amazes me how well you tell your story Arka. It makes me feel like I am really there. It has all the elements a story would need. It will be a sad day indeed when you no longer grace the forums with your story telling but I will be forever grateful for your posted stories until that day comes. I think out of all I have read on the forums your stories are my favorties! Keep it coming! I am loving it!
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #85 on: November 28, 2007, 12:56:36 pm »
Zorbels!

It's so good to have you back - I had heard a whisper. If I had known you were coming I'd have written you into the story! :D

I'm so pleased to have you on board with this (last) episode in Arka's return. There's plenty more to come.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #86 on: November 28, 2007, 01:33:25 pm »
Part 32: Waiting in the dark

Arka turned her back on the portal and saw for the first time that there was a second path, leading away to the left. She followed this up a steep set of steps and arrived at an arched doorway, blocked off with stonework. At first this appeared to be another dead end, but as Arka touched the stone, it slid inwards revealing another passage. Arka peered inside. It was dark and the air smelt stale. Taking a deep breath she stepped over the threshold and began to feel her way gingerly along the wall of the passage, which gently sloped downwards.

After about a hundred paces, the wall ended and she found herself in some kind of room. She could not see the walls, but knew from the echoing sounds of her steps that this space was large and enclosed. She wished she had some light as she had no idea how she would get back out again.

She stopped walking for a moment and listened to the the echoes dying away. She imagined she could hear a soft sigh, from some way off. There was a sense of another being in here. Arka felt her pulse racing. She had to take the risk.

“Mattra?”

Nothing.

“Embra?”

Still silence.

Louder this time. “Embra Garam?”

Her voice bounced back from a distant wall “Ram-ram-ram.”

She turned to go back then stopped. This time there was a murmur to her right. She turned her head in the darkness and heard clearly in the old tongue, “Estyõ.”

She ran towards the sound, blindly in the dark, tears streaming down her face. She hit a wall and sat down heavily. For a while she was dazed and imagined she felt a hand on her shoulder. Then she realised the hand was real. A voice she recognised, but weaker, shakier, than she remembered. “Arka? Is it you?”

Arka held out her arms and felt a small figure in front of her. “Eh, Mattra. Estyõ,”

She got to her feet and the two embraced, feeling the warmth of each others’ bodies in this cold, damp, dark place. “I have to get you out of here,” she said, taking her mother’s arm. "We have to find Pattra. He will be waiting in the Great Halls."

Together they felt their way along the wall, until they found the start of the passage. Gradually a light appeared in the distance, a tiny speck to begin with, but growing as they made their way along the path.

“Nearly there,“ said Arka and squeezed her mother’s hand. They arrived at the portal and Arka carefully led her mother towards the light. Now she hooked her arm through her mother’s. She was determined that this time they would go together.

Stepping into the swirl of colour, she was suddenly bathed in light. It seemed to fill her body, replenishing her energy and filling her with hope and joy. She could just make out a small figure in front of her, slowly descending, a halo of light around his head. Her heart leapt. “Pattra!” she shouted, “Pattra! Estyõ, e Arka!”

“Oh! I am not your father,” came the reply, in a familiar voice that filled Arka with dread.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #87 on: November 28, 2007, 07:50:24 pm »
who who... oh you devil - you tease... heheh but it is fantastic.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #88 on: November 28, 2007, 07:51:40 pm »
Wow, you've spend alot of time on this, Arka, I am truly impressed! :woot: its by far one of the best I've ever read here. \\o//
keep it coming!
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #89 on: November 28, 2007, 08:25:03 pm »
 :o Cliffhanger!!1 AHHH!!!!!    :'(

Arka, this story is amazing, LOVE IT!!!!   :thumbup: